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Memories of Childhood

Memories of childhood 
        flooded my mind as I rummaged... 
         through dusty white elephants 
 and keepsakes in the attic. Frequent gasps 
             of pleasant astonishment 

   upon discovery of long-outgrown clothes;
            old birthday gifts I thought 
                    were lost forever. 
               Especially, a water pistol,
                       which took me...

                    back in time when 
           I used to play cops and robbers 
             with other neighborhood kids
                Ah, those were the days! 
           Suddenly, I felt like a child again.


Dusty Old Memories Poetry Contest (Winner: 1st Place)
Sponsored by: Constance La France 
Date written: 08/02/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Mishra Avatar
August 8, 2020 at 3:46 AM
Back to congratulate you on your win Edward. :)
Ibeh Avatar
August 8, 2020 at 4:24 AM
Thanks again, Aditi:-) Have a blessed weekend, my friend!
Koplin Avatar
August 7, 2020 at 7:21 PM
Wonderful memories. Congratulations on your top win! Great poem
Ibeh Avatar
August 8, 2020 at 4:23 AM
Thank you, Mark:-) Blessings to you!
La France Avatar
August 7, 2020 at 12:22 PM
Edward, congratulations on your win in my memories challenge with this excellent write, I used to love rummaging in my parents or grandma's attic for treasures, a FAV for me _Constance
Ibeh Avatar
August 7, 2020 at 6:46 PM
There's always treasures hiding in the attic! Thanks the the congrats and FAV, Constance:-) Most obliged.
Andresen Avatar
August 7, 2020 at 1:51 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Edward :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ibeh Avatar
August 7, 2020 at 4:17 AM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise:-)
Watt Avatar
August 6, 2020 at 4:52 PM
Sweet look back at the nostalgia of childhood, Edward. Congrats on your top placement, my friend ~ John
Ibeh Avatar
August 6, 2020 at 5:53 PM
Thank you very much, John:-)
Andresen Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 12:00 PM
... "Ah, those were the days!" ... lovely poem, Edward :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ibeh Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 3:06 PM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise:-)
Mishra Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 11:54 AM
Such is the love of those childhood memories and toys, that we'd always love to hold them and feel like a child again. Beautifully penned Edward :) Best wishes for the contest!
Ibeh Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 3:05 PM
Thank you very much, Aditi:-) Most appreciated.
Logan Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 7:21 AM
We may outgrow our clothes and toys, but never the memories of those days gone by. A very enjoyable nostalgic write, Edward.
Ibeh Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 9:21 AM
Thank you, Jenna:-) "We may outgrow our clothes and toys, but never the memories of those days gone by" Very true!
Hinshaw Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 6:46 AM
This splendid write brought back fond memories of my childhood, Edward! You've got a winner here for sure! Bob
Ibeh Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 9:22 AM
Thank you for the vote of confidence, Robert:-)
Mcintosh Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 6:12 AM
This is such a expressive and impressive poem. I enjoyed it tremendously. Happy writing and best wishes in the contest. Prayers and blessings sent your way Gina
Ibeh Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 9:23 AM
Thank you for the wonderful comments and visit, Gina:-) Blessings to you as well!
Sands Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 6:10 AM
Very special memories shared in this well written poem. Vivid. Great one Edward :)
Ibeh Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 9:19 AM
Thank you very much, Heidi:-)
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