Another Work Day

(This is something different. Playing around and having some creative fun. One word per line, three lines per stanza. What do you think? Tear it apart and share your thoughts, opinions and criticisms. Thanks) Another Work Day Alarm Shower Coffee Husband Wife Goodbye Driving Car Work Neighbor Wife Bedroom Coffee Sex Cigarettes Forgetting Husband Laptop Taking Off-ramp Next Crawling Traffic Congested Turning Car Around Driving Home Again Parking Driveway Home Panicking Wife Disbelief Hiding Neighbor Closet Approaching Husband Door Greets Husband Door Kisses Wife Entry Smelling Husband Cigarettes Smoke Wife Doesn’t Searching Husband Suspicious Increasing Husband Anger Backyard Cigarettes Found Questioning Husband Livid Denies Wife Tears Investigating House Yelling Following Wife Pleading Searching Bedroom Threatening Approaching Husband Closet Intercepts Husband Wife Pushing Wife Floor Tearing Wife Hysterics Opening Husband Closet Standing Neighbor Closet Pleading Wife Tears Holding Husband’s Pistol Trembling Neighbor’s Hands Infuriated Husband Roars BANG BANG BANG Ringing Ears Smoke Hysterical Wife Crying Stumbling Husband Floor Closing Neighbor Husband One Head Shot Pooling Blood Floor Bleeding Husband Dead Shot Own Gun Sharing Husband’s Bed Adultery Wife Whore Coward Neighbor Murderer Scarlet Wife Accessory Awaits Prison Both (Based on a true story. This happened a few blocks from my previous residence. I took some creative liberties with the story, names are fictional.)