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Babbling Brook

On and on went the constant stream of 
sound..
I got lost in my own musings, the second 
time around.

She babbled her notions, to living things 
that drank her.
They savored up everything, that she had 
to offer.

I followed her down to the end of the 
journey..
Laying down next to her, I enjoyed the 
tranquility!

Babbling Brook was spent from her travels 
of the day.
But, she kept on moving as time drifted 
away.

All of the rumors of nature, were imparted 
to me..
Of what was to come and what was to be.

She slowed down her stream coming 
upon a nook..
Never can she really rest~for she is a 
babbling brook.
Form: Rhyme


Hourglass

Sealed within an hourglass
a shower of sand descending 
scraping away my supple skin 
as when one refinishes a hardwood floor
scouring off the old varnish and stain 
Its grit scratching  
like the claws of a cat at my corneas
already malformed before my birth 
so that I was never able even as a child
to perceive the world completely clearly
everything fuzzy like a fogged mirror
and blurry about the edges
causing me difficulty differentiating 
between 0, 6 and 8
a’s and e’s and o’s
I choke as it rises over my mouth and nose
Those observing my struggle to survive
from the other side of the glass smile wide
as they speak in pointless platitudes
preaching worthless, irrelevant notions
such as I should look upon each grain of sand
as a potential pearl
but I am not an oyster in the ocean

Premium Member Onslaught

The crowbar rattled at the clattering noise,
In the yard, against the hulls and hoys,
A Cloud of tar smoke rose through the green,
Large oil slicks floating on the lake sheen.

Inconsistent hills throughout the landscape,
The sunlight was a deep purple color shape,
Similar to the finishes of Florentine bronze,
That's it for the day, no real swans.

Overwhelming sadness now needs our song,
From death, an awful lot of sadness sprung,
What type of tears? What heart's grief arrest, 
What sighs on sighs lobs the mom's breast?

With faint homes to brilliant ethereal light,
The enchanted guiltless has taken flight,
On the liberal bosom of undying love,
We find a concealed elevation above.

Warden, I realize you both mourn her loss,
She no longer feels the hold of pain across,
The regulations of elegance are without bias,
You can turn your pain into grace and praise.

The dread of the interminable assault,
The arrival of gizmos has long been sought,
All these notions had a major effect on history,
 Each was a frightening age-related mystery.

The attack on slavery was nonsense,
Designed to hide the ambitions for pretense,
Never before has a tiny beast attacked so hard,
It just bites its horns and hides with its tiny shard. 

Thoughts on webcasts, phone calls, Facebook,
Rising vitality contains attacks and an ebook,
Both were made by teenagers in their twenties
Bounty drives and precious realities.

Do not shed tears in the flowing river,
No real pain in the dark pits to deliver,
The first light was magnificently bright,
It was soon covered by the haze of the night.

This eliminates spontaneity, love, and anxiety,
It steals time and hides physical and moral piety,
Concept, politics, creation, and profit come first,
A blitzing slave was a lie to hide the curst.

1st Place Contest Winner

Written: September 08, 2022

Pick-A-Title, Vol 32 - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh
© Sotto Poet  Create an image from this poem.
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Crazy Profound 18

Last limpid light
Niche naughty night


Notice nice niche
Tender takes teach


Bright blossoms bloom
Gracious gifts groom


Sun styles sure smiles
Write words worthwhile


Sense soothing sounds
Grip gracious grounds


Find fleeting form
Nurture nice norm


Bright beauty blooms
Rich rustic rooms


Feel fond feelings
Sound spells steering


Be beyond boom
Defy dense doom


Faith freezes fear
Sense subtle seer


Choice confronts change
See showcase strange


Style succinct style
Pleasure peaks pile


Write wavy words
Dust dusty dirt


Etch easy earth
Be beyond birth


Start sacred stay
Prime pleasing play


Lovely laughs line
Make moments mine


Choose charming cheer
Niche notions near



Leon Enriquez
12 August 2014
Singapore

Masked Isolation

Fire lust of the angry clouds doth cover envy
To fork the stars upon my ever-changing view.
The crestling being i endure to hold of many
Foreign thoughts to translate a bonafide rue.

Carnival of lights leave me starstruck
In a haste no more than that of my gloom.
No one who knows of this life are stuck,
In a waste of bittersweet cloves that bloom.

As I sink down to the combers of lies
Nevertheless leaving my soul to him.
This monster of foreign carnage dries
To a crisp, no longer able to freely swim.

Finally feeling a soft touch upon my flesh,
Where is this pale longing rose of red I dread?
This flying repent of lustful notions is all I thresh.
Please let me fly with you in this land of the dead.

Denies of my request shows to me how I feel,
Still though, carrying me much higher and higher.
This resentful flock of gloomy encumbers peel
My skin I weary of angry clouds doth burn a fire.
Form: Ballad


Premium Member I Like the Idea

I like the idea of 
Next week
Next what 
Weak 
Ideas people have
No nothing of
Next never happening
What's happening 
Tomorrow
Yesterday still not far away 
Next to today
That has big plans
No empty hands
No next to never
Notions of
Tomorrow might not 
Be here soon
Like next never
Failing to 
Let you down
No frown though
There's a neat 
Never
For everyone
The days done
Fun or not
You found it
Full
For tomorrow
With yesterday's 
Flavor like 
Lemonade 
Let downs you 
Didn't want to make
With them lemons
It takes a day
Like dollars
The flowers of 
Youth 
There everywhere
With places 
Like faces
That never meet
And races till the clock
Say go
You know the pace 
Toward tomorrow 
With it's yesterday fine 
An time to take a week
To get an idea of 
Traces of today 
Left to say 
I'm sorry
Your gone

 March
 2023
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Quotidian Fever

I dream of magic lines but they  elude me.
Chapbook on acrylic tube  palette, janus-faced cave in 
at the crack of dawn,
crescent moonlight awnings turn to  circus of the  soul, 
images that colour dullard pages leave furrow on my 
hayrick haggard brow. 
Backwater sonnet form leaning  towards some meadow compost rot.
Ghost written silhouettes, shatter fragile eggs on 
loop pile Berber carpets,
yolk stain and pale brown chicken hash tags.
Tight rope knot escarpment found in tripod camera verse,
cliff edge heart-stop paen is just another
blue-sky canon over billed by birds of prey. 
Poetic licence pointer to a learner permit doggerel, 
aspiring metre patchwork but a tapered column 
lost in grey day whimper. 
Guangdong province text in lychee pink for window glaze.
Fleeting notions dangle at the sparrow hawk crossroads,
while grazing skinny red ballon formations overhead.
Mother of invention please shine your convex beam
upon this wellspring drought abandonment I swim in. 
Sudden brain cell drafts a Jack-o’-lantern of disjointed phases,
stretcher bear the legless phrases that leave me 
wheelchaired and infirmed in woolly states.
Timeline mainstream woofer whose lagging jacket hemline falls apart,
areole reduced branch slowly bleeds its cactus juice of inspiration.
A rush, a fever, quotidian fever,
no greater longing can us writers have.

Premium Member Pinning the Tail On

Forever be the only player
in the game with your blindfold off.

Some of our wisest thinkers
focused intently on what
attacked their ideas.

The hunt for truth is not
necessarily confirming
your most loved notions.

Truth always lies
in the reality of nature.

Thinkers study patterns
and only then exceptions.
Then exceptions to the exceptions.

Long attention span
is the key to success.

Very small effects over time
accumulate in vast results.
Variations only show up in crowds.

Seeing the minute steps of success
placed in the proper priority
pins the tail on the donkey.




Free Verse  21 Lines  96 Words
Pen illustration by G. Gaul 2022

Relating to Darwin's theories of 
Gradualism and Variation.
And, of course, the child's game of
Pin The Tail On The Donkey.
© Greg Gaul  Create an image from this poem.

Pride Ism's and Prejudice Prisons

You can be proud of your city, home town or your village.
You can be proud of your home county and local heritage.
You can be proud of the school where you were taught.
You can be proud of the local pub, club or restaurant.
You can be proud of your family without taunt.

You can be proud of the journey your ancestors travelled,
and be proud of from where they travelled to get to this place.
You can be proud of these things and wear a smile on your face,
because with these prides there is no prejudice attached,
there is no stigma that sticks, this pride does not disgrace,
but you will find hesitation toward pride in your nation,
because isms and judgement exist in that statement.

Preconceived notions present this pride as different.
Some link national pride and racism without thought,
and with ignorance look down on you as a result.
They select history you were not there for,
and talk as though it was your fault.

Be careful with this pride as to them it is an outward insult,
as to them it says that you think you are better than the rest,
even though your thoughts contain no comparison of who's best
it is simply an inward thought in which no other or thing is caught,

It's not about others it's not a put down,
it's not a comparison, don't turn it around,
it's about you and where you belong,
why is this pride seen as wrong?

Some people have issues and see this an opportunity to dis you,
they group you a race or a type and dismiss you,
but you're only thinking about what makes you and who you are,
ignore these people calling you racist, because racist they are.

They think it acceptable to attack your nation through you,
some historic event in which they and you had nothing to do,
their opinion pure prejudice a warped point of view,
their passive attack not acceptable when they attack just you.

If you are proud to be a man is that an insult toward women,
if you are proud to be a woman is that an insult toward men,
this thought only contains pride in whom you are,
this thought does not include ideas toward whom they are.

So I choose to be proud of all that makes me, me.
My postcode, my accent, my roots and home country,
and if some thoughtlessly link this pride with an ism,
then I care not, as their thought process lives in a prison.
© Nick Trim  Create an image from this poem.

Premium Member When Sky Walks Down To Earth

When sky walks down to earth


You be a wild shower of monsoon,
and tranquillise my soft soul burning,
Seasons in tears flowed into lagoon,
and the heart sank into aches of yearning,

If you could see my blazing passion,
and feel the inside flame rising high,
See the sky walk down in obsession,
and come to my rescue, heave a sigh,

If you could feel fragrance of my love,
diffuse so quick in deep emotions,
Care to subtly caress your white dove,
and ponder over doubtful notions,

You be a dust storm of dry desert,
and blow away my inner grief, 
Gratify my thirst of deficient,
my ash rest in absolute relief !



Written October 31st, 2014
By Dr. Upma A. Sharma
For contest ' Top gun poetry - Structured form- Iambic verse III' by Giorgio A.V.
Iambic tetra meter with 9 syllables per line
Form: Quatrain

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