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When Sky Walks Down To Earth

When sky walks down to earth You be a wild shower of monsoon, and tranquillise my soft soul burning, Seasons in tears flowed into lagoon, and the heart sank into aches of yearning, If you could see my blazing passion, and feel the inside flame rising high, See the sky walk down in obsession, and come to my rescue, heave a sigh, If you could feel fragrance of my love, diffuse so quick in deep emotions, Care to subtly caress your white dove, and ponder over doubtful notions, You be a dust storm of dry desert, and blow away my inner grief, Gratify my thirst of deficient, my ash rest in absolute relief ! Written October 31st, 2014 By Dr. Upma A. Sharma For contest ' Top gun poetry - Structured form- Iambic verse III' by Giorgio A.V. Iambic tetra meter with 9 syllables per line

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Date: 11/9/2014 3:42:00 AM
A beautifully expressed poem .... loved it !! Congrats on the win !!!! Love .... Saanvi :)
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Date: 11/8/2014 6:59:00 AM
Nice romantic write, congrats on the win
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Date: 11/6/2014 9:40:00 PM
Ah, Dr. Sharma. This is indeed so beautifully romantic. Congratulations on your win.
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