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Turning Anguish Part 1

5/21/11-5/22/11
I rule over the night
undaunted with all my might
I have time to spare all I can bare
Watching the hand chime 
tugging…pushing…shoving
through whirling toil
that feed the spoil
Perplexing strife
refusing to give up 
Power and torment 
 
We are too caught up in our own power
and ruling over each passing moment
each passing night…destroying the twin towers
 
Who’s doing all the blaming?
Who’s choosing our faults?

I’m tossed…shifting around with uncontrolled anguish 
Zipping…tripping over rambling bolts
spiraling into a mad house
Don’t enchant your intolerable voice
I see no love dwelling in this household
Do you seek for your power…
you insufferable traitor?

Seeking our upcoming doom
brewing strife in the heap of ruins
brewing strife while we still leave room
to obey and remain under power
You are assuming the worst 
father…mother…
rule over the passing anguish…circling around
stumbling around…not aware 
Hey you! play fair

Behave and stay awhile
before you feed the fire that holds sheer vile
Allow love to not be thrown away
into another pile

I grasp no love engrained 
In our giving garden
that plants ceaseless approval  
Pardon my faults
I was far from comforting sleep

Dread is driven mysteriously 
Through an endless night
Moving on the tracks 
Forming into an alarming train

Who’s doing all the blaming?
Who’s choosing our faults?
Who did the labor suitably?

worthwhile father…pleasure-seeking mother
Don’t enchant your intolerable voices
and expect us to listen sensibly 
Demanding us to do labor
and assist our displeased neighbor
Why do you melt the delight away?
Throwing away a flavor of ecstasy
and put us to glove-less labor
without putting our favor and opinion
into the overlooked pile

Burning agony
dries the buried glee
Saved for a grieving moment
Playing like a warped tune… unable to express
solitude that develops in the heart
raped by the ragged uncertainties 
without taking heed of our pleas

These desirable moments
Cherished in the deplorable journey 
They weren’t acknowledged by power
Love in those days were brand new
Do you have a clue?
they were cherished...
Bountiful…
stranded in a deserted past
in merciful beauty…caught under the spell

Where did that come to pass?
Where’s the love?
Who’s doing all the blaming?
Who’s choosing our faults?


Blackmail In Utopia

Two faithful souls stand listless in the great big tower 
overlooking the stranded city that once stood tall
yearning for a quiet place to lay their heads 
while far beyond the deserted land 
a soft blue light gleams gracefully above tranquil skies,
dancing shadows rocking to midnight tunes, 
and sweet melodies echoing from the gigantic moon. 

She spans more than a thousand feet long soaking
up the exhausted  earth, her immeasurable depths
cuts and carve through  valleys and streams 
with clear blue water and powdery white sand 
what more could you ask for on that distant land. 
They have been planning this trip for many years,
but when the time draws near their saving  disappears. 

An empty refrigerator with two trays of frozen ice
lean against the corner  of the kitchen
in their ten bedroom mansion
and a bare pantry exposing a slice of mildew bread 
filled with little mice nibbling  and  playing tug of war.

Not many people knew their story
they have been broke for twenty years 
but lived a painful  lie, cutting corners 
making back door transaction, 
eating lamb and turkey from profits
made from sordid deals. 

Their empire that once stood tall hangs in dismay 
While it watches the world going up in flame
by those who continue to play treacherous games.
 
Sobibor and Hiroshima horrors of the past
Should have cleared the way for a more sophisticated path
But now athoroughfare mixed with complexity 
packed with insidiousness 
have ducks walking around 
quacking without wings or tails

They finally got an offer to go to Utopia.
with packed  bags not a  penny in their name, 
they set off for Utopia hoping to find a new life again
but when they got their it was the same old begrimed game. 

Their entire world has been shaken, 
shaken by its own guilt and self-reproach, 
the transgression that their ancestors have borne
have been handed down for generations to shoulder
 
A land that they believe was pure and holy
has turned into nightmare and horror
dreadful things dismount in dark corners
women raped strangers abused
yet religion forms the core of the throne

They have witnessed empires toppled, 
Kingdoms have fallen in their sight
Rulers have shaken and wept bitterly 
causing the great big god to balance the scale
but blackmail in Utopia remains a formidable  game

                                                            ©2013 Christine Phillips
Form: Narrative

Take Me Back To Alode By Jonah Okpabi

The land is soaked with blood
The sand is soaked with tears
Oh
How many barrels of blood must be spilled
to know that so many souls are gone?
How many basins of tears does it take
to have more than enough tears?
.
I am the voice of the little child
crying in the wilderness
I want to caress the flowers that spring
out of the ground of my homeland
I want to watch the ripples when rain falls
I want to play with my mates on the sand
along Chu Ngoke street
I want to sit at home and watch my parents returning from a bountiful yam harvest
I want to stand at the playground and watch the traditional wrestling
I want to hear the sounds of Egelege and Egoni talking drums reminding me of yesterday and a great future ahead
I want to chase away goats from eating the maize in my mother's garden
I want to open my mother's pot
and pick a meat out of the soup
I want to see my homeland
Sweet little home of ours
Please take me back to Alode
Please take me back to Alode
.
I am the voice of a man
Whose hope lies in shackles
Whose homeland lies in broken images
A town deserted and forgotten
I am tired of being a stranger 
in another man's land
I am tired of begging for crumbs
When my barn is filled with yam
Mudskippers can still be found in our swamps
Please take me back to Alode
I don't want to die in another man's land
I want to die in Alode, somewhere in Eleme
I want to be buried near the grave of my father and see my ancestors usher 
me home with a shinning crown
Take me back home
Take me back home
.
Take me back to Alode
Let me see the beautiful women that
toss about the streets
Let me admire their buttocks
Let me stare at their breasts,
those two round objects protruding out 
of their clothes, breasts that could make me feel like a child again
Let me kiss Nyime Owa Eleme, that beautiful lady of my dream
Let me lay her down on my bedside and
make life worthwhile
I want to go back home and see
the sunshine with it's illuminous rays
and the tender droplets of the rain
Oh Please take me back to Alode
Please take me back to Alode
.
Take me back to Alode
Let me touch your borders
From Alesa to Ogale
From Echieta to Onne and
From Ebubu to the Onu Nmu where they say the hands cannot reach
I want to touch the land of Alode
I want to touch the Eleme soil
I want to touch the soft green grasses of home
.......
Form: ABC

A Storm In Heaven, Sections 13-18

But the lover he knew this would not be enough
In such games as romance the going will get rough
And his youth had not abandoned him yet
Such failures monumental he would not so soon forget
And all had been less than this goddess on earth
No other had touched his heart so since birth
So amidst the glorious dreams of love in spring
The icy chill of doubt began to take its wing

The mirror told truths he’d never liked to hear
When faced with himself he’d rather disappear
Than bear witness to what he saw as a goon
A common ugly brute, spawned from a cartoon
With his disproportioned limbs and pessimistic hunch
Never had Ryan stood out from the bunch
His muscles had weakened from ailments past
And his metabolism sadly had deserted him too fast

His green eyes burned fiercely for his love had not gone
And sleep seldom reached him until long after dawn
Ruminating at length on the woman he desired
Wrecked his body and wracked his mind so tired
Could she ever love one as common as I?
He asked many times neath the midnight blue sky
His answer proved negative on most mornings young
And the tears had scarcely left him when the first sparrow sung

At last, the abused and depressed young pup
Decided he would go out on the town and drink up
Pounding beers with no regard for the consequences thus
Leaving him to stagger, cry, and flirt and cuss
And as sudden as the sun blooming on the skyline
The lovely Lyla was there, alone and looking quite fine
In an instant all sorrow was cleansed from his mind
And convinced him once more no greater love would he find

On that evening with conscious sobered by passion
My old friend took to speaking in a serious fashion
Only I was there to listen to his marvelous speech
Of the intensity he possessed, I know I cannot teach
With a storm gently rolling on a westward winter wind
The dark haired young man, chilled and quite pale skinned
Turned to me slowly with the look in his eye
That told I would recall this moment till I die

“Tonight,” he began, “I have chosen to wait
For this woman I love until some later date
And I shall stay to this, if months or years may pass
If that is the price of being worthy of the lass
If I must stand by and watch others lay
By her drunken side, while I have no say
And hundreds will flirt and many win a kiss
So I will remain in a life without bliss
Form: Rhyme

Poem Written Near a Cemetery 1 of 2

Poem written near a Cemetery  1 of 2
On 13th February 2012

While moving near the walls of a cemetery, 
I saw the glimpse 
Of a bunch of some tiny wild flowers,
Blooming in the golden Sunlight falling on them, 
They were waving their simile, 
With every gush of wind,
On the monument of a deserted grave.

For me it was a new and exciting experience, 
To enter in that cemetery of eighteenth century,
What had brought me to that spot,
Where those wild flowers were still smiling,
Remains a mystery
Every time, I think and rethink. 

I saw hundreds of monuments and tombs,
After entering in that preserved cemetery, 
Some were telling the story,
Of the grandeurs of its dwellers,
While others were there,
Standing without a crown or a story.

The grave on which, I saw those flowers,
Was not showing an appealing face, 
Age had withered its luster and charms,
And time had left its marks on its face.

Being in the last line of that cemetery 
It was waiting in the long queue,
For some kith and kin of Sophia Ress,
May come some day and  
The face of that noble soul’s grave, 
May once again obtain its lost glory and grace.

There I found those lonely wild tiny flowers,
Still blooming and smiling and dancing,
With every gush of wind,
Telling silently a beautiful story of its dweller,
As if, they were paying their homage,
While remembering her lost songs and images.

In the morning hours of the Autumn,
The tree leaves were falling, 
Everywhere on the ground,
And some were even falling on me,
Either to tell the universal truth, 
Of the inevitable departure of everyone’s one day 
Or perhaps to accompany me, 
In that graveyard of all those,
Who were totally strangers for me.

After watching that grave and 
Appreciating those tiny flowers,
I explored each and every tomb and monuments,
Standing in the memory of those British,
Who had lived a royal life during those days,
When they lived here and ruled my country, 
For a very long time. 

Ravindra 
Kanpur India 18th Feb. 2012  concluded in Part 2



Text of the Stone on Sophia Rees Owen

"Text of the Stone on Sophia Rees Owen
In the memory of Sophia Rees Owen 
The beloved wife of H T Owen Esqr. 
Of the H C Civil Service, who died on the 27th 
Nov.1834 aged 31 years 11months and 18days.
Leaving her husband and Six children to lament 
Her loss. She was a sincere friend, a truly 
Attached wife and a devoted Mother.......
Form: Elegy


Premium Member Introduction To --- the Arrangement

THE ARRANGEMENT


    It's a dull, grey afternoon in the middle of October, with nothing much to commend about it. Last of the autumn leaves are falling from trees with the icy breeze, too chill for even the ardent gardener to be out and about, where streets are deserted, and children are not yet out of school.  Clouds are softly framed in bands of charcoal grey.  

Our heroine, Erin McCarty  can't distinguish whether the distant rumble she hears, is a brewing storm, or her empty stomach. It occurs to her she hasn't eaten a thing, except for the quick granola bar early this morning at the bus station.
As she approaches the old house she sees that the  garden needs weeding, devil grass taking over the wind-whipped faces of faded, dreary, old chrysanthemums. It is so unlike her mother to let it go untended.  Seeing it so unkempt, makes her a bit uneasy.

A suitcase heavy in her hand, she hesitates before turning the knob, or ringing the bell, taking a moment to compose.  She waits a moment.  What will they say, ...what will they think when she tells them everything that has happened, and where she has been all this time?

The old place seems strangely *****, as if she’s gained new insight
As if another eye had sprouted new, to view the past more clearly, and the present, more objectively.   She seems to perceive shade and shadows, shape, as if she were watching from above.
The chrysalis that held her in, has drawn her back here again. 
How will they receive this unexpected return?  Will she still be welcome?
Have they been able to forgive her for leaving without a word?

Her hand on the knob, the door is locked, then almost without her control, her finger has pushed the doorbell.   At first just the silence, .....then the sound of muffled footsteps.  Someone is coming.
The door opens...........and she is startled.  Who is this?......?  
Who is this stranger answering her mother's door?............  
  

Follow Erin's story to the captivating ending...
a story of hope, renewal and rebirth.  A story of coming of age, coming to terms with both love and sadness. It will remind you, that love and compassion can renew the spirit...even when the world has turned upside down.





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For the Contest Sponsored By Judy Konos: "You Have Written A Novel"
Form: Narrative

The Hungry Stones XII

Heavy and eerie silence reigned therein, 
The dark rooms looking as sullen as mean, 
As if they had taken serious offence 
Against me who had failed in their esteem, 
My heart feeling contrite was heaving tense, 
To have halfway deserted my fond dream. 

No one was there my inner thoughts to share, 
None who so some forgiveness to me spare, 
Aimless I wandered into my blank mind, 
And wished I could that royal guitar find 
To inveigle my heavy heart to sing: 
O Fire, this poor moth that in vain wished once 
To fly away, hast returned broken wing 
To thee, forgive him just this one instance, 
Burn away both his wings and make him lame, 
Nay, consume him in thy red scorching flame. 

As I wailed clue-less, my soul sinking low, 
Two warm teardrops fell from above on brow. 
Dark and deep clouds hung overcast on hills 
That day, the gloomy woods and bare river 
Awaiting in suspense with monsoon drills, 
An ominous calm prevailed all over. 
And soon it all shivered— land along sky, 
A wild tempest blew forth O howling by, 
Through pathless woods glaring its lightning teeth, 
Like a raving maniac snapping chain, 
Wishing to unleash hell, terrible pain 
To whoso there’s on hills, whoso beneath! 

And not a soul around was in the camp 
To wipe dark of my heart, nor light a lamp, 
I could sense: a woman lying on face— 
On a carpet below the bed, clasping 
Her wounded heart, and pulling hair in stress, 
Blood trickling down, in utter pain, laughing 
Still, bursting into a hard wringing wail, 
Now, rend her bodice, now beat breasts gone frail, 
And from nowhere winds roared in from windows, 
The pouring rains soaked further her sorrows. 

Through night the storm never did cease to rage, 
Nor did my fair lady's passionate cry, 
I wandered from room to room, a blind man, 
Unremitting sorrows my companion, 
And yet none there who could have consoled me, 
As I heard the cry: ‘stay back, all is false', 
Maher Ali the mad was there, no doubt, 
The old tenant of this odd wailing house, 
‘Tell me what’s false?' I could not help but ask, 
Waiving me off was how he responded, 
Repeating, ‘stay back, stay back, all is false'. 
_____________________________________________
Narrative |01.04.2024|
Note: A poetic translation of Rabindranath Tagore’s story in Bengali, Kshudhaarto Paashaana.
Form: Narrative

Premium Member Wake Asia Wake - Part One - 9

Make haste to befriend the toro meanly reared away from spectator prying eyes
         by dread alone the bull is nurtured and prodded to terrify
         and when at last the ranchero’s silhouette appears in the arena   it charges
                                                                       Wake! India! Wake!
 
There are no greater mysteries than those your scientists can unravel
         the only mysteries that persist are those drummed by priests into your brains
         even a helpless Stephen Hawking can pierce the Aryan mystery by silent reflection
                                                                      Wake! India! Wake!
 
Let those who seek power in the polls seek it for their own sakes
         sooner or later   sooner than later   they too will pass away
         their power gnawing at their bones will feed the etherising flames of their pyres  
                                                                     Wake! India! Wake!
 
Let those who seek to challenge their power challenge it for their own sakes
         they too will rot in the chains they have willingly chained themselves in
         for they too seek power for the sake of power  and for theirs and their own comfort
                                                                       Wake! India! Wake!
 
And let them all pass over you    you who have borne in quiet pain
         mauling   under the pretext of mournful migrations and the Mughal might
         Mohenjodaro and Harrappa   notwithstanding Vijayanagar and Kaveripumpattinam 
                                                                       Wake! India! Wake!
 
Do not for a moment think your sons have deserted you
         nor your daughters gone to spawn with other spouses under other suns
         your needs are their needs  your tears   their blood coursing in their veins
                                                                       Wake! India! Wake!
 
If you had woken up earlier to tend to your shores  to tend to the marauders at the border
         letting only the lone Kshatriya exert his martial art  abused by fine courtly comfort
         you would not now wonder how a Rajput court at Mewar drove Akbar to such lengths
                                                                      Wake! India! Wake!
 
(Continued in Part One - 10)
© T Wignesan  Create an image from this poem.

The Hungry Stones II

From Nabob of Junagarh, of Nizam— 
Collecting tax on cotton and the kind, 
The taxing job having strained of my calm, 
I’d stayed at a quiet place, though haunted 
And scary, a lovely place no less still, 
Deserted now, it was a grand retreat— 
River Suista telling in many ways 
Babbling tales through every single pebble, 
Leaping like a skillful dancing damsel, 
What unforgettable and fateful days! 

I still recall that flight of a plenum 
Of hundred fifty steps to that river, 
A solitary marble palace, plumb 
Along the river, and etched as ever 
In my mind, ah amid sprawling foothills, 
No soul around to whisper of its ills! 

The palace, two and half centuries old, 
And built by a ruler of Muslim mould, 
For private pleasures, luxuries enrolled: 
Jets of rose water from fountains spurting 
To cool rooms amply made of marbles cold, 
Young Persian nymphets there entertaining, 
Mohammad the Emperor, too tired, blasé, 
Arab maids disheveled before bathing, 
Their soft naked feet ‘pon water splashing, 
Singing, trying to please him in odd ways, 
Whilst wine poured forth as ample as water, 
Afar, tears poured forth from a lost daughter. 

Fountains no more now found, songs too have ceased, 
Nor snow white feet, ever gracefully step 
Upon the white marbles that remain cold, 
The vast halls filled are with cess collectors, 
And men like me oppressed with solitude, 
Deprived of warmth o that be womanhood, 
My old office clerk had me amply warned, 
‘Pass days should you so like, but never nights 
if you care', I’d waved him off with a laugh. 

Servants agreed to work only till dark, 
Which, I ignored, a tusk as a dog's bark. 
The house of ill repute spared was by thieves 
Like a nightmare, I sneezed at that as well, 
And worked hard on long hours till lights grew grey, 
Returning at night too jaded and tired, 
Sinking deep into bed unto sleep mired. 
_____________________________________________
Narrative |01.04.2024|
Note: A poetic translation of Rabindranath Tagore’s story in Bengali: Kshudhaarto Paashaana,
divided in I to XIII parts, largely in blank verse that lapses into rhymes along with its twists and turns. The story is known to have happened during Tagore’s stay at Shaahibaug palace in Ahmadabad, the nearby river Sabarmati becoming river Suista in the story.
Form: Narrative

Alone Upon This Halloween Scene(A Fictional Tale)

Stepping out into the Autumn night of Halloween
It is the Witches and the Warlocks turn to dance
Their air of mystery and mystic is all around
The zombies or the Undead cannot speak
but,their presence seems to be abound
Ghouls of the Men
Vampires within the Ladie's evil grin
It is out here on this Night
When old wives tale frighten us with delight
My footsteps carry me beyond the hill
A cemetery there which omits a deathly thrill
We(meaning a friendly spirit beside me)know the Cackle
Inside many tomb,ready to come out like a babe from its mother's womb
The moon is full and the Old Man paints his smile
Trick or treaters are out,,having fun for a little while
Tonight all Halo as strange yellow mist creeps from behind a boulder narrow
Dancing amidst the moaning dead,darkened shadows surround this timid Head
I feel like Ichabod Crane,strolling,with terror,upon the Midnight Domain
Ghosties
Goblins
Maybe the old Headless Horseman
Perhaps,the wretched creature of a certain Frankenstein
Many of these apparitions could be just a figment or Reality having a smile
The Corridor of the dark as I wander through a deserted Schoolyard park
An evil happened there,just a few moons not  long ago
Halloween Night..1980 when I was ten
A grade schooler was being hazed upon
He was locked in a decrepit old trunk,tucked,not so sweetly away,in the attic of 
this old place..his peers left him for the night

They came back the next morning before the session began
after lifting a set of keys from the sleeping janitor,they went up to the attic to see
The trunk was open,HOW COULD HE HAVE GOTTEN OUT??
tip-toeing near the open trunk and peering down with trepidation..
only to find,a bloody handwritten note,written with EXTREME AGITATION

It said:YOU LOCKED ME AWAY BEFORE YOU DECIDED TO PLAY
BUT..I WILL COME BACK UPON THIS LAND AND MY VENGENCE WILL HAVE 
HIS FINAL SAY!!

The school was beset by this horrible deed,and it was closed forevermore 
because the children confessed and the Pain would never recede
some say..the spirit of the little lad still haunts the old school
Laughter could be heard if many,who dare,decide to explore it and play it cool

Pardon me,my weary Halloween reader..it is TIME for me to head back before
I become no more,by an ominous Night Creeper(or the Ghost of The Attic Child!!)
© Bart Jonas  Create an image from this poem.
Form: Narrative

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