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Premium Member A Four Way Stop

Always great fun at an intersection
With only a four way stop
You start, he starts, it's him no it's me
Nose to nose, where's a cop

You glare, he glares, nothing's solved
It boils down to a battle of wits
Like kids arguing over a colourful toy
“That's mine! No, it's mine!” and you sit

Even the ear shattering sound of horns
Has no effects on this yahoo!
All hell breaks loose, 8 guys get out
And a bloody fist fight ensues!

Standing back I watch the proceedings
Grown men acting like jerks
Get back in my car, I drive around it all
It's not worth being late for work

Four way stops are becoming quite rare
In this fast paced world we live in
Four way stops are now being replaced
Coz nobody's willing to give in
Form: Rhyme


Cross Country**part 2**

**A Travel East**

We pass the Grand Mesa cruising like lightening at 95mph, 
I feel like a passenger on a toy train.
A mountain 11,000 feet above the ground,
auburn colored, rock faced cliffs, complimented 
by a spectacular baby blue sky.
Clouds scatter, trying unsuccessfully to cover
the rapid sunrise.
Blue,
Indian orange,
and red mix together well
with the beauty of the cliff face.
Along the base,
the Colorado river
races.
Not quite a rapid,
yet swift enough to scare rafters,
and small animals.
Miniature icebergs travel through a small channel
created in the ice of the once wide river.

 A family of coyotes gather on a patch of solid ice.
The young playfully roam, 
while the adults relax, lick themselves and watch.
Deer prance across the terrain, 
chasing the train.
Detained,
inside a fence,
cattle graze in a group of one hundred or so.
A cottage rests along the perimeter 
where children play.
Bundled from head to toe,
Snow,
thick and heavy.
Frosty is created!!

Homeward bound!!
The ride semi-pleasant,
better than the first.
The lavatory still with that distinctive 
musky urine scent.
The passenger car seems bigger this time,
more spacious.
Room for my long legs,
and wide enough to accommodate my beer gut.
I hear the rantings of an old married couple
as they bicker about what time dinner should be reserved for.
Beside me,
laying awkwardly,
an old man snores.
Shallow breaths in between,
I can hear his heartbeat.
Pounding like 
a heavy percussion solo,
his feet propped on his duffel bag below.

The lobby car when first entered 
looked barren.
A few passengers sit with books and laptops,
others watch as the fast moving terrain passes
through the tinted double glass.
My cell phone lost battery life and I 
needed the accommodation of electricity.
Occupied,
I wait for my turn.
From my peripheral I saw her,
I could sense her aura.
Smell her aroma of Vanilla Musk.
Dirty blond hair with red highlights,
short but not to short,
with a friendly disposition.
So, 
I sparked a conversation,
that helped better this expedition.

Jared Pickett
3/7/08
Asavvy1

Amazing Drive of Destiny

On that day of our life,
Our loudest silence shall
Turn most eyes to the ground,
Squeezing tears from their once-happy, dry faces.

We shall drive a human-wheeled car through the air
As we lay down majestically, enjoying our final trip
To the dark, silent valley of destiny,
With the crowd moving slowly while they sing hymns
And praises to the Overseer of the universe.

We shall park our car in a short, shallow valley of darkness,
As we hide our faces from the face of the world,
Taking our eternal nap in a place where no light can penetrate.

In this one-way valley of no return, we shall lay down at six feet,
Looking towards the sky, as we watch our spirits
proceed to the godly heaven.
The sound of human feet, running cars, or grazing animals
May be heard, but our screams from this depth
Will never exceed an inch away.

The crowd will return to their homes,
To their women and children,
Leaving our own to despair over the good days gone,
Hoping that the holy words are true.

Our families will console themselves by believing that,
In this valley of silence, we are dancing with the angels
And singing to the Almighty Creator.
They will faintly smile, at least knowing we will never be hungry in this valley.
But the children will cry hard, thinking that
Their parents are drinking all the rainwater that floods around.
© Oula Willy  Create an image from this poem.

Road Rage

I remember 
Your anger 

The way your neck muscles 
Stood out 
As you cursed my name 

You showed up 
Uninvited 
with your pants 
Lower than your hips 
Yet 
You somehow paced with self assurance 

You circled 
The parking garage 
Chain smoking 
Making the concrete ground 
Your ashtray 

Your heavy clothes 
In summer’s heat 
Made it easy 
To hide 
a closed fist 

As I allege 
The broken headlight 
With your name 
in the same sentence 

From my heart beat
My jaw popping 
My hazard lights clicking 
Your rap music blasting 
through my speakers 

I can’t remember 
what noise 
Stopped first 

Or why 
You held me close 
In your arms 
Afterwards 

But I drove you home 
quietly reaching out to you 
To hold your hand 

Desperately 
Wanting 
your warmth 
your affection 

Instead of suffocating  
The thoughts 
Of you 2 nights before 

Shivering under my sheets 
Against my body 
As the drugs wore off 

But I stayed awake 
To make sure 
You fell asleep

And also admire 
How much I loved 
Your company 

After I dropped you off 
I stared at your house 
While multiple friend’s advice
Playing in the background 

Their advice caused 
My brain 
And my heart to argue  
For hours that night 

And I kinda miss 
That part 

Cause when I 
think of you now 
I feel the effects of my insomnia  
Creeping in 

From consistent phone calls 
Every night 
At 3am 
Taunting 

Like you’re constantly poking 
At my wounds 
With a dull knife 

I keep my blinds shut 
And my lights off 
After work 
So you think I’m not home 

It gives me time 
To try to 
fall asleep early 
So I’m not startled 
As you call
From an unknown number 

I get ready for work 
The night before now 
That way I am prepared

To sprint through 
the parking garage 
To my car 
Every day 

And once I catch my breath 
And lock the doors 
I close my eyes 
Turn my headlights on 
And hope you won’t be there
© Ali Lynn  Create an image from this poem.

Premium Member Exhausted Pipe

My neighbor has a new boyfriend
Most nights he arrives 
in his little black sports car
to pick up his glittery prize.
His little black sports car 
has a big exhaust pipe...
that wakes me up most every night.
Sometimes he parks his little black sports car
in front of my mailbox.
He's pretty buff and has a mean little face
and I'm too old to say anything.

They've been together for about 6 months. 
I'm praying that their relationship crumbles.
I'm hoping she meets a skinny nerd with a smart car.
Who doesn't park in front of my mailbox.

I must admit that her long legs are the perfect fit
for a little black sports car with the midnight grin.


On the Side of the Road

A car's pulled over on the road 
And hidden by the door,
A child lets out an urgent stream
Within the traffic's roar.

The parent gets him back inside,
Their motions chop-chop-chop, 
The passersby relieved to have
Avoided such a stop.

We've done this for our grandson
When there's been a pressing need
Although, of course, anxiety
Is surely guaranteed.

But when his dad is with us
We must detour off the road
In search of a facility
Containing a commode.

I'm sure his way is safer
Though with age, I've come to know
That, especially with children, 
When you've gotta go - you go!
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member The Big W

Some cars and a truck are moving on a mountain road.
The truck driver at the rear is toting a large load.
Suddenly, there’s a speeding car coming from somewhere.
It misses a turn, and goes flying into the air.
It falls and crashes at the bottom of the mountain.
The driver of the car is found to be an old man.
The vehicles stop, then each driver descends to aid
the injured man who lies outside his car very staid.

When they reach him, the dying man has a confession
about a large sum of money in his possession.
Three hundred and fifty thousand dollars in money
was stolen some years before in a bank robbery.
Buried near a big “W” where only he knows,
he tells them all where to find it just before he goes.
It can be found in a park in Santa Rosita.
It’s a town located in Southern California.
The location of the money is an unsolved case.
Soon, the police arrive to ask questions at the place.
All of them deny knowing what the old man had said.
They keep it a secret now that the old man is dead.

Although they agree to divide the buried money,
they all could not decide how to share it evenly.
Nothing was decided that would be equitable,
so the greedy persons dash out on a mad scramble.
Each one gets back in their vehicles to move that day
and be the first one to the treasure that’s far away.
The police now track the people wherever they go.
The law suspects they know the location of the dough.
Detective Captain Culpepper working on this case
obtains information about each one in their place.
Some strange predicaments are a result of this chase.
There are many funny situations they will face.

Based on the 1963 film "It's a Mad, Mad, Mad, Mad, World"
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member My Favorite Animal Angel

A rescue dog she would be,                                                                                                      her halo was bright for all to see.                                                                                            She loved her blusher on both cheeks,                                                                                  the pink color she would seek.                                                                                          Riding in a car was a huge thrill,                                                                                               I made it a big deal.                                                                                                           With our seat belts now on,                                                                                                   we were both ready to make the car run.                                                                          Night was massage time as we drift off to sleep,                                                                    in the morning from the bed we would leap.                                                                       Now Angel is gone to heaven to wait,                                                                                   the rainbow bridge I need to cross has no date.

Date  12/24/2019

Place 8th    Writing Prompt - Take the Dagger Out  Contest Judged:  2/19/2020  Sponsored by: Dear Heart 
1. Date Written 12/24/2019 
2. Your Favorite Animal Poetry Contest
3. January 8, 2020
Form: Rhyme

Antiques Road Rage

Antiques Road Rage

A country joy ride changed in a moment
An ancient old car, (older than me), takes me on 
A simple mission
To work on my English
The words didn’t come to address my anger
So I lifted my fossil like finger….at a gingerly pace….
Out the car window of my turtle-mobile
To communicate my feelings to a fool in the rear
Cutting me off, breaking the rules as he raced
And no signal!..... (What a disgrace!)
So I gave him mine
My middle finger…. (A friendly surprise)
He ranted and raged with colorful words
My car and I are obsolete antiques
No need to curse
We have our ways and know our worth

Premium Member I Remember Grandma

I remember Grandma’s   beauty
  The way she’d grace her smile at me
I remember Grandma’s duty
  Holding family together

I remember the old large home 
  A large yard with a cyclone fence
I remember no small kitties
  Couldn’t afford the extra expense

I remember no TV set
To watch Dragnet or Lassie shows
I remember a radio
Latin Music she always chose

I remember the Impala 
Cool 1950’s model rove
Crazy grandma behind the wheel
Had to close your eyes when she drove

I remember her   kindness
Her home was your home to visit
Stacks of warm homemade tortillas,
Tamales, warm food in the skillet

I remember gradually
With small tremors, slurred speech, stiffness, 
She had uncontrollable shakes
Parkinson’s disease her illness

    I remember Grandma’s   beauty 
        I remember Grandma’s   kindness 
            I remember Grandma’s    caress
                I remember Grandma’s   illness
© Eve Roper  Create an image from this poem.
Form: Quatrain

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