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Premium Member Disillusioned

Disillusioned

                   She remembers her childhood.

     The thrill and new penny feeling of being outside when the sun has set! When shadows drew shadows that grew shadows. 
     The intoxicating sense that she wasn't being a “good girl”, that she was doing something forbidden. A feeling only, she had no words to define this. 

     All things were alive and friendly, all things and all people loved her. Never had she known low morals, harsh judgements, base emotions. 

     Why, an eight or nine foot tall mouse with a silly name and gloves was exciting and fun! Something she laughed at and clapped her hands with joy! A super friend she could play with…
…not a terrifying diseased rodent,  protecting itself from fingerprint analysis, with idiot, inbred eyes and needle- sharp teeth hungry for her blood!

     No, to her child eyes, her still under warranty, blue eyes, the crescent moon was a smile on the friendly face of the night sky. The two brightest stars, the eyes, that look at her with approval and decency. 

     A Montage of calendar pages rip away and float off screen …
…and we watch as the young blue eyes subtly change. They slowly lose focus and begin to look past us into the distant past, the soon to be future? Who knows. 

                      She remembers her childhood.

     When she believed no one meant her any harm. When she trusted that the dark night face of the sky, the crescent moon, was a smile. Looking down on her with love.Now…

...Now…
That bright crescent moon looks like a sneer. A sneer on the face of the demented, psychotic sky…
…leering at her.
                       LEERING. At. Her.


Pressure

What is it that you're under?
Life is beautiful
Yet you make it roar ?? like thunder
Trying to get through this journey
Trying to make a change 
Somehow things still feel the same
Its strange 
How you'll spend your whole life 
Trying to impress
Unsure ?? of your purpose
Thinking did I really deserve this 
Pressure 
Lets break it down
Treating yourself unworthy
When we all deserve our crown
Being put down
Without having the will power to get back up
Lying in a state of comfortbility
Not realizing you were stuck 
Yep that's us
We as human beings
Lacking alot
So confused
But God never forgot
Pressure through our peers
Did more trying to be accepted
It brings you to tears
All these years 
And then you finally develop into your own
Now realizing that the only approval you need
Is the one on the throne
Pressure of trying to be of the world
Yes that's us 
Putting up a big ole fuss
Over unnecessary stuff 
That we can't control
Pressure of being afraid
Knowing that if you're not like others 
Sometimes friends will trade
Yes they will
We may experience hurt 
But we have to learn to forgive 
And just live 
Pressure to belong 
In an unfit song
The words just don't mix
Time for revision
Have to do it quick
Practicing a new step
To follow
Even when your not content on which direction to go
Go with the flow
Pressure in relationships
That don't belong
That are old
Still holding on
When you know your past life
Is renewed the old you is gone
Pressure is surely what you make it
You can overcome it
You can face it
Being under it doesn't make you feel any lesser
These are my thoughts 
No Pressure

Written By:Concetta Hardnett
11/4/2015
art
Form: ABC

Premium Member LORD GOD, YOU ARE MY ETERNAL LIFE'S HOPE

December 4 Relationship to God Bible Meditations Based on Titus 1-3

Key Verse– Titus 1:2 In hope of eternal life, which God, that cannot lie, promised before the world began.

LORD GOD, YOU ARE MY ETERNAL LIFE’S HOPE			

Lord God, You are my eternal life’s Hope 
Who upholds me with Your divine promise
Thank You for manifesting to me Your immutable expertise…
Help my faith to increase through Your grace for steward-service
Within Your standards along Your anointed office.

Lord God, You are my eternal life’s Hope 
Who guards me from false accusation
Thank You for admonishing me not to engage in filthy conversation…
Help my commitment to stick to Your sound doctrine’s instruction
Within Your rules’ direction against vanity’s deception.

Lord God, You are my eternal life’s Hope 
Who teaches me always Your ways
Thank You for instilling in me Your truth’s yeas…
Help my devotion to pursue for Your approval rays
Within Your wisdom guiding me all the days.

Lord God, You are my eternal life’s Hope 
Who speaks to me by Your charity
Thank You transforming me as I submit to Your authority…
Help my testimony abide in Your holiness-purity
Within Your pattern of uncorruption, chastity and sincerity.

Lord God, You are my eternal life’s Hope 
Who protects me with Your righteousness
Thank You for keeping me in Your salvation-joyousness…
Help my conviction to persist with Your granted zealousness
Within Your sanctification toward vibrant blessedness.

Lord God, You are my eternal life’s Hope 
Who subjects me to Your power
Thank You for exemplifying to me Your meekness against pride’s tower…
Help my humility to speak about the goodness You constantly shower
Within Your grace that supplies every kindness’ sower.

Lord God, You are my eternal life’s Hope 
Who rebukes me with Your warning
Thank You for forgiving me of my confessed sinning…
Help my trust to reveal total dependence on You for precious learning
Within Your mercy that is marked by Your love for my gaining.

December 4, 2023
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member FAITH IN GOD WHO DELIGHTS IN OUR THANKSGVING SACRIFICE

February 8 Faith in God Bible Meditations Based on Leviticus 22-23

Key Verse – Leviticus 22:29 And when ye will offer a sacrifice of thanksgiving unto the LORD, offer it at your own will.

FAITH IN GOD WHO DELIGHTS 
IN OUR THANKSGVING SACRIFICE	

God delights in our thanksgiving sacrifice of faith’s fruitfulness
By His supply-bountifulness
As He increases our service-productiveness
Along His granted liberty for our growth’s steadfastness.

God delights in our thanksgiving sacrifice of faith’s sowing
By His redemption-work that is always glowing
As He establishes our labour of well-doing
Along His perpetual joy for our gladness, always overflowing.

God delights in our thanksgiving sacrifice of faith’s security
By His Word in His authority
As He guards our conviction against doubt’s infirmity
Along His wisdom for our doctrine against fallibility.

God delights in our thanksgiving sacrifice of faith’s fervour
By His commandments for our obedience, smelling with sweet savour
As He leads our steps toward His favour
Along His approval for our devotion to Him, our Lord and Saviour.

God delights in our thanksgiving sacrifice of faith’s rejuvenation
By His forgiveness toward our purification
As He accepts our sin-confession with His sanctification
Along His correction for our character-transformation.

God delights in our thanksgiving sacrifice of faith’s fulfillment
By His enablement to fight slothfulness’ detriment
As He upholds our holiness-commitment 
Along His assurance for our soulwinning empowerment.

God delights in our thanksgiving sacrifice of faith’s devoted worship
By His guidance in our discipleship 
As He commends our faithful stewardship
Along His partnership for our revival around His fellowship.

February 8, 2025
Form: Quatrain

Premium Member HEART THAT LIFTS UP THE MOST HIGH GOD

January 5 Heart for God Bible Meditations Based on Genesis 14-17

Key Verse - Genesis 14:22 And Abram said to the king of Sodom, I have lift up mine hand unto the LORD, the most high God, the possessor of heaven and earth.

HEART THAT LIFTS UP THE MOST HIGH GOD

We’re blest with a heart that lifts up the most high God for His goodness
Being so is a privilege we acknowledge despite our weakness
For only He can make us thus by His lovingkindness---
With thankful heart, we trust Him to transform us along His righteousness.

We are blest with a heart that lifts up the most high God for His benefits, abundant
Being so is a calling we treasure since we’ll be far from becoming stagnant
For only He can put us in that position with the desire He does grant---
With thankful soul, we seek guidance in meeting our need and want.

We are blessed to have a heart that lifts up the most high God for His grace
Being so is a state we cherish while we snuggle in His presence-embrace
For only He can stir us for heavenly pursuits, devoid of carnality-trace---
With thankful devotion, we cleave to Him along service-race.

We are blessed to have a heart that lifts up the most high God for His mercy
Being so is a commitment we vow to accomplish with His clemency
For only He can drive us along ministry-involvement’s constancy---
With thankful conviction, we abide in His will of stewardship-fervency.

We are blessed to have a heart that lifts up the most high God for His commission
Being so is a desire we must nurture in His preaching of instruction’s provision
For only He can build us up midst selfishness and pride’s oppression---
With thankful faith, we please Him in our obedience to His heavenly vision.

We are blessed to have a heart that lifts up the most high God for His approval
Being so is a practice we should exercise in overcoming apathy’s perilous interval
For only He can perform in our well-doing of helping for others' revival---
With thankful bliss, we praise His name while waiting for His arrival.

We are blessed to have a heart that lifts up the most high God for our victory
Being so is a challenge we ought to accept as a charge for His glory
For only He can cheer us in lifting fellow believers against misery---
With thankful disposition, we share His Gospel story.

January 5, 2026


Premium Member There Are Days When

There are days* when… I need God’s favor so badly
Due to frustrations attacking tremendously.
I thank Him for His sure presence marvelously
Engulfing me with His constant love supremely!

There are days when…I lose my joy of salvation
Caused by selfishness, disobedience, deception.
Then I recall Christ’s great work for my redemption
Cheering me up toward peace-filled jubilation!

There are days when…I struggle with discontentment 
And I crave for God’s wondrous replenishment.
He then supplies me spiritual empowerment
With His instruction that cures my envy’s ailment!   

There are days when…I desire for God’s revival
Being discouraged at my earthly survival.
He comforts me, granting His divine approval
With His might to prepare me for Christ’s arrival!
 
There are days when…I must stay long in God’s calmness
As a weary servant in His kingdom’s business. 
I praise Him for His offered fellowship’s closeness
With His grace for my faithfulness thru His kindness!

*Psalm 90:12 So teach us (LORD) to number our days, that we may apply our hearts unto wisdom.
 
August 17, 2018
7th place, "Pick a theme" Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Viv Wigley; judged on 9/2/2018.
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Mom of Inspiration

Who am I today:
an open book to everybody
reflects the values instilled
in my heart by my first mentor...

the man my older brother is now:
conscientious, concerned, caring father
as testified by his family and those around him
exemplifies the commitment that reared his being...

the charisma my younger sibling exudes constantly:
cheering in his nursing and health-practitioner roles
radiantly exposing nurturing bliss with serenity-glow
bearing zealous compassion that attended to him, verily undeniable... 

the virtuous wife and mother my sister is through the years:
gracious homemaker who feeds festively by her sumptuous meals
jubilantly affirmed by her dear husband and children
exposes approval-seal of the hands that molded her personality...

the best Dad whom we regard as the almost perfect leader in our sight:
human fortress, tenacious anchor midst travails and tribulations 
leaving us precious legacy surpassing earthy wealth's heritage
he himself attested that his influence was a partnership-product with her... 

The WOMAN* behind us all
helping us become what God wants us to be: 
our MOTHER, so inspiring.  
We thank and praise the Lord for her.

*Proverbs 31:30 ...A woman that feareth the LORD, she shall be praised.

December 20, 2019
4th place, "N-A rerun 5" Poetry Contest
Sponsored by John Hamilton; judged on 2/27/2020.
Form: Verse

Everyone Hates My Poetry




Everyone hates my poetry

Because it doesn’t wear makeup.

Because it stares too long,

or not long enough.

Because it mentions the body

like a room that remembers

every man who left his name in dust.



Because it’s too sad,

too loud,

too holy,

too raw—

because it does not ask permission

to bleed

where others would politely weep.



They say I should whisper.

I scream in stanzas instead.

Line breaks like broken bones —

each one healed wrong on purpose.

I rhyme “fxxk” with “forgiveness”

and call it a sacrament.

I flirt with ghosts.

I give grief a seat at the table.



I write what I can’t confess.

And then I press send.

And wait.

And wait.

And wait.



?



Go your own way, they say.

But I was never theirs to lose.

I won’t be your throat,

your mouth,

your Sunday-quiet muse.



Dance in the avalanche —

I’ll be drinking full-blooded wine.

You butter your toast,

I’ll bleed ink and call it divine.



I’m Dracula,

you’re limpets —

clinging to shores of should.

Sinister mercy monsters

with teeth made of wood.



You won’t take mine.

I’ve bartered them

for metaphor.

For myth.

For the kind of flame

that never asks to be understood.



I sit on a throne

shaped like an electric chair,

burning truth until

only the bones of beauty remain.



You?

You live in living rooms.

You collect pretty things.

I braid your betrayal

into a lei of lunacy —

my madness in bloom.



Say I’m too old.

Too female.

Too much.

There’s something in the water.



Damn right.

I am the water.

I merge with ocean light.

The moon kisses me goodnight.



Why do I need your approval to feel seen?

Must just be a throwback trauma dream.

Your eyes — not galaxies,

but black holes,

sucking the light from my becoming.



I offered constellations,

you brought collapse.

But still—

I orbit my own flame.

Still, I rise in ruin’s dress,

sequined with scars.



I chew the fat

with better men than you,

men who don’t flinch

when a woman burns through.

Men who sip my fury like wine,

and still

ask for another glass.



You?

You watered me down,

then called me “too much”

for the mess you made.



?



And still I write.

The Front Row

Waiting Anxiously To See,
Choreography Created by Me.
Where Did It Originate From?
I Can't Say That I Really Know.
Music Seems to Provide The Flow.
At First, I Might Do It a Certain Way.
The Next Time I Might Add a Sway.
Will It Meet My Approval?
Only If The Dancers Dance
Better Than Their Usual.
Dancers Say That I'm Hard To Please.
Just Dance Full Out, Don't Just
Give Me a Tease.
Make Every Step LIVE.
Show Me All That You Have To Give.
I'll Be Watching, IN THE FRONT ROW.
Dance From Your Heart.
Show Me Passion, Emotion, Let It All Go.
Make Me Feel Something Beyond My Expectations.
Capture Me With Sensation.
I Want To See You Glow.
Thats Why I Chose To Sit In
THE FRONT ROW.
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member My God, Thank You For Enriching Me With Your Blessings

June 17 Scripture Meditations Based on Proverbs 10

Key Verse – Proverbs 10:22 The blessing of the LORD, it maketh rich, and he addeth no sorrow with it.     

MY GOD, THANK YOU FOR ENRICHING ME WITH YOUR BLESSINGS

Thank You for enriching me with Your blessings’ gladness
Against foolishness’ heaviness
Away from treasures of wickedness
For me to abide in Your righteousness.

Thank You for enriching me with Your blessings’ profit
Against hand-slackness in slothfulness’ pit
Away from poverty of indolence-hit
For me to practice diligence by Your work-wit.

Thank You for enriching me with Your blessings’ harvest
Against shame of barrenness’ pest
Away from embarrassment of pride’s zest
For me to trust in Your guidance while doing my best.

Thank You for enriching me with Your blessings’ commandments
Against perversions, full of disagreements
Away from sorrow of disobedience-discontentments
For me to walk uprightly toward Your ways’ fulfillments.

Thank You for enriching me with Your blessings’ instructions
Against mischief’s destructions
Away from hopelessness-caused transgressions
For me to receive Your favour for my faith's victorious decisions.

Thank You for enriching me with Your blessings’ wisdom
Against lying and slander uttered at random
Away from wealth offered by materialistic freedom
For me to desire Your approval in seeking first Your kingdom.

Thank You for enriching me with Your blessings’ bounty
Against lack and scarcity’s difficulty
Away from crises of prayerless spirituality
For me to love You with my devoted sincerity.

June 17, 2022
Form: Rhyme

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