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Premium Member The Fifth Element

Aether is the fabric of our universe -
Tiny granules that transfer energy
In the form of waves ~~~
This goes on unseen constantly!

It propagates light and other waves,
Longitudinal and transverse
( Or electromagnetic )
Right across the universe!

Aether stretches far beyond
The laws of physiology!
Did you know that Aether
Is also a god in Greek Mythology?

In chemistry, it is flammable.
It is used as an anaesthetic.
It's a solvent used in industrial processes -
Google it ~ this knowledge is authentic!

But at the same time, 
It's a word that is seldom heard,
Most people have better luck,
Deciphering the songs of a bird!

But today, 'Aether' was on my list,
To master and triumph,
As if it was a fifth wish!

Oh, the gravity of this situation,
Like cosmic forces similar to Shakti,
I feel that I have learned so much,
Should I be yelling out 'Yahtzee'?!?

The king of the classical elements;
Earth, Air, Water and Fire...
Aether bends and amends our universe,
To be the most desired!

Sunday, October 3, 2021
Form: Rhyme


I’m a fake feminist

I’m a fake feminist.
I take pleasure in the thought of submission, in the image of me 
bent over a table and ed, 
ravaged out of my mind, 
reduced to tears and whimpers. 
I don’t enjoy it, I don’t get sexual gratification from it, 
but a deep satisfaction that screams 
“it’s okay, this is normal”. 

I cry afterwards, of course, 
or even during these fantasising moments of my days. 
My mind plunges 
into a deep pool of masochistic imagery, 
bordering on troubling, 
taboo scenes that I can’t share, 
not even with my own self, never.

My sex gets aroused while I feel nothing, 
not a single nervous ending, not even a run of my fingers on my skin. 
I am numb. 
My mind is numb. 
Even when I come, I can’t make myself utter a noise.

Then my eyes burn, my nose itches. 
Don’t cry, 
I think to myself, don’t cry again, 
this is supposed to feel good, 
and then the ugly sobs come. 
Big, disturbing wails of help 
(who am I asking for?) fill my room. 
I feel disgust, I retch. 

Almost like a performance 
I stop immediately, 
the physical numbness spreads to my brain like an anaesthetic, 
my mind suffers from an amnesia episode and 
my body moves on its own to the bathroom.

I seek men, 
women, 
anyone 
who will have me. 
I entice them, lead them on. 
I want to be dominated, used and discarded. 
I want to be an equal, loved and held.

I am a fake feminist, 
I fantasise with being raped, pillaged, 
taken, broken apart 
and left to freeze under the night sky. 
I am a fake feminist, 
and a child, 
and a woman, 
and a man, 
and nothing all at once. 
I want to make sense of everything, I want to remember nothing.

I am a fake feminist, 
and if my innocence had not been trumped and torn to pieces, 
if I had been loved and not hated, 
caressed and not abused, 
I would be a real one.

Premium Member Unusual

it was her normal state of affairs

she smelled the cacophony of blindness

touched an overflow of drought

listened to audible brightness

tasted a crescendo of palpations

until she was so out of tune

with everyone else’s senses

that fragmented perception was joined


her friend uncovered shrieking silence

saw lush tastes in his mind

heard prisms of lightning 

touched fragrances in his ears

felt anaesthetic pain an

tuned in to her ‘misperceptions’


together they would conquer 

shadows mirages crescendos 

refrains of a common chorus

combined healthy madness

illusions delusions 

and untold stories of

tranquil unrest

stagnant motion

anosmia’s scents

hysterical blindness

unspeakable conversations

serious laughter

mosaics of beauty

squared circles

and ellipsoid parallels 


when they mixed their blood

a tattoo went up into smoke

only to ascend a slope

of two rocks growing moss

with Sisyphus in reverse


the label of ‘other’

vanished into open closure

periphery became their bi-polar centre

surreal distortion gathered clear contours

and the silhouette of bedlam

granted them freedom 

beyond any restrictions


she felt his voice

saw his speech

listened to his aura

while he smelt the touch 

of her skin before they

made love once more

in total composure 

and ecstatic foundations 


upright they fell into each other’s arms

knowing that neuro-diverse means special

and gifted was a fine quality to share 


10th September 2021

I'M Missing Him

I ‘m missing him like we miss  that lost tooth till the gum heals.
I ‘ve been in the dentist’s chair
Had the anaesthetic but  still  felt the tug  and force.
And the dentist yelled,look at this,
I got it all out in one
You see,the root was very twisted and tangled
I told him,take it away.
I’m missing my other because his absence makes a hole
like that bloody hollow in your jaw but in the soul.
Came home alone from the clinic
Felt that  soul hole.The first time
when he was n’ t here.
God does n’ t  do anaesthesia, just burns the bush
I’m missing him because he needed me so much
Now nobody needs me nor notices if I am here except Alfred
Or if I fall over in the garden,will I die and rot down to the earth before
my neighbour recalls he’s not seen me for three weeks.Or maybe five.
I miss J the way you’d miss your flesh
if someone shot you with a rifle and made a tunnel through your body;
took out a lump which would hurtle away and fall to earth.
I’m missing his honey smell.
the knowledge,the feeling  he had of me.
The hole in my space is almost tangible
in this room.
I wake up and wonder what he’d like to eat today.
But the dead don’t eat at our tables do they?
I remember I  am alone at the table and I can eat whatever I like.
Oh,love,why did you  go down so fast?
When you were the one,solid I leaned on.
You were my man, you were  the one,

Premium Member The Fifth Element

( A COLLABORATION BY NATASHA L SCRAGG AND ROBERT JAMES LIGUORI )

Aether is the fabric of our universe -
Tiny granules that transfer energy
In the form of waves ~~~
This goes on unseen constantly!

It propagates light and other waves,
Longitudinal and transverse
( Or electromagnetic )
Right across the universe!

Aether stretches far beyond
The laws of physiology!
Did you know that Aether
Is also a god in Greek Mythology?

In chemistry, it is flammable.
It is used as an anaesthetic.
It's a solvent used in industrial processes -
Google it ~ this knowledge is authentic!

But at the same time,
It's a word that is seldom heard.
Most people have better luck
Deciphering the songs of a bird!

But today,  ' Aether ' was on my list,
To master and triumph,
As if it was a fifth wish!

Oh, the gravity of this situation,
Like cosmic forces similar to Shakti,
I feel that I have learned so much!
Should I be yelling out,  ' Yahtzee! ' ?

The king of the classical elements,
Earth, Air, Water and Fire ~~~
Aether bends and amends our universe,
To be the most desired!
Form: Rhyme


Premium Member Campfire Vampire

The vampire saw the campfire and was hovering around 
For all the little children were just sitting on the ground 
He doesn't mind the fire, it’s not ultra violet light
So he listens to his dinner telling scary tales all night

But when he feels that pretty soon it shall be getting light
He picks a chosen victim and he moves in for a bite
Alas his chosen breakfast was a little lad called Rob
Who turned around too early and punched the vampire in the gob

At the back a tooth went crack, the vampire squealed in pain
Holy flaming nuns, it hurts like I’m alive again
The vampire shrank and as a bat he fluttered into town
Snuck into a dentists where he pulled the shutters down

The dentist said ‘Your early mate, your time keeping is rash’
The vampire said you’ll fix me though I do not carry cash
The dentist grinned and said I have retirement looming large
So as my last good deed, my friend, I’ll fix you for no charge

The vampire thought the anaesthetic wouldn't work on him
And so he was surprised to find he’d dribbled down his chin
So lying in the chair, with the dentist in his face
The vampires jaws were numb as the dentist worked apace

The dentist’s constant chatter with his Adam’s apple bobbing
Did not distract the vampire from the jugular vein throbbing
Suddenly the vampire snarled, I’m starving, what the heck
He lunged to sink his canine teeth into the dentist’s neck

The dentist staggered back and yelled you hit me like a truck
Why on earth did you just give me one almighty suck
The vampire gasped, my canines fail me, it’s beyond belief
The dentist held his hand out and said, do you mean these teeth?

The vampire sobbed I cannot live without my pointy biters
The dentist said don’t worry, I’ll put back those ugly blighters
But first I’m gonna finish off that molar I was filling
Good job I am not charging you, for I would make a killing

So, the dentist said, the molar that you broke last night
Is finished once I’ve set it with this ultra violet light
Before the vampire could protest the light was in his mouth
Demonic hands burst through the floor and dragged the vampire south.
Form: Rhyme

Victorian Era

Victorian Era
~Victorian Era~
I think that the Victorian age would have suited me
The ingenuity fashion the great exhibition
Would all have been fascinating for me to see.
Not a child up chimneys, that’s not my mission
Not a Debtors Prison or Blacking factory.
None of these I’d do, that’s not my ambition.
I want to invent and better things for all,
The Victorian era was when inventors had a ball.

From Steam ships to sewers, lighting, and heating.
Bazalgette cleaned the streets Pettit and Smith made us warm
Lister invented antiseptic which we now use after eating.
Anaesthetic was invented, which is now the norm.
Science and technology all the greats were meeting
But prostitution and destitution were in need of reform.
A great Victorian lady I would have liked to be
But I am quite happy, with the twenty-first century me.


For: A Moment In Another Time by: Mandy Tams~GG~

Premium Member A Night To Remember

Diamonds on the soles of her shoes brushed the intricate parquet 

Carmel was swept off her feet to the clanging tunes of Flamencos 

A pink flamingo swapping kisses and castanets high above the floor

Gypsy tattoos on her ankles swirled like Derwish’s ecstatic devotion

Cocaine eyes wide open on her man but tonight femme was fatal 


Titanic brazier squeezed her bosom into fake contours ready for the kill

Thanks to her doctor her uplifting bottom implants softened the crush

Champagne flute shards mixed with botox as she lost her superior stand

Wiped seductive smiles off her face and mingled lip stick with blood


When she woke up from her dream it was not her gigolo lover who

Spoke softly through the daze of morphine and anaesthetic delirium


‘Ma'am I am sorry that I could not save the ink adorning your tootsie

And I will have to refer you to the guy from the plastic department

For you boobies’ reconstructive surgery to recover their natural shape

But your stilettos are out of this world ‘though they scraped a few bones

Do not worry unduly though because the footloose jewels cover my bill’



19th May 2019

An Obe

OBE
I never really believed in the white light
At the end of a tunnel-try as I might
I was having a laugh with the anaesthetist
When the surgeon did ask him for a quick assist
“Why is she not asleep yet? I heard him ask
She is used to the pre-meds, don’t worry this is my task.
After many bouts of surgery over the years
I was hard to knock out but I still had my fears.
I loved the sleep anaesthetic does give
The dreams are so wonderful and so real and vivid.
This one was different I remember it well
I was sat very high up looking down I could tell
There was a lot of commotion below me that I could see
There were bells ringing and flashing lights and then I saw me
Wow this is weird how am I lying there but here I was looking around
I could not believe it a white light did surround
I was laughing and thinking this can’t be real
Nobody sees a white light never mind tries to feel
It surrounded me and I felt it, I now wasn’t to sure
I had never seen anything like it before
On top of the electric light that was below 
I saw the dust sitting on it even with the bright glow
Then there was calm and things did quite down
There was a rushing in my ears but no other sound.
A voice came to me and said “Come on now wake up”
A tap on my cheek and I felt them pull the pipe up
I coughed and she smiled,” it’s all over now
We are glad to see you, you don’t know how.”
When I awoke they were standing round my bed
One nurse I knew said “We thought you were dead”
Charming said I, why what went wrong?
“Your heart did stop beating, but now it is strong.”
I wondered what had happened I was watching you all
No you cannot have been, don’t say that, that tale is to tall
I told them of the alarms the beeping and coloured lights
I was watching from above, seeing what I might
They smiled at me with an indulgent look
But I know what I saw so they can put that in their book.
Form: Narrative

Premium Member My Little Fella

My little fella
I held you softly against me 
For only a few minutes 
Staring into the horrified eyes of a nurse
Who saw death
Where I saw love in an ocean of bitter sadness 

My little fella
I gave birth to you
Alone and terrified 
Under the blinding darkness of a silver neon sign
Following a failed anaesthetic
Under the hurried footsteps of a panicked nurse

My little fella
I was able to give you a name
I was able to give you an official place
In this silent, frightened world
Where every time there's a blunder
Preventing a well-deserved place

My little fella
Free yourself from me
Fly away
To other joys
With a light heart
For a beautiful illuminated life

Fly away, my little fella
I'll always be there for you
And for all those who left too soon
Without hope of a happy tomorrow
Leaving waves of unfulfilled love
That return with each generation in the hope of happy days.
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