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Premium Member Wounded Sanctity

The rule of sanctity is a veil to hide the blow. 
Love doves in the air, fading into the sky.
Thoughts are mixed stiff oasis and flow.
Hypnotic wizardry that's being spread away.

Love doves in the air, fading into the sky,
Magic using Alpha Centauri's moon sight.
Hypnotic wizardry that's being spread away,
Gasping the frigid breath of the frozen light.

Magic using Alpha Centauri's moon sight,
Mischievous haze covers the ghastly realm.
Gasping the frigid breath of the frozen light,
Eternal afterglows echo a motion rhythm.

Mischievous haze covers the ghastly realm.
Within the confines of the death's garden.
Eternal afterglows echo a motion rhythm.
Souls are aching and seek truth certain.

Within the confines of the death's garden,
Pain spills from the heart as a yearning drops.
Souls are aching and seek truth certain,
Stain soil with red as souls gather and hope

Pain spills from the heart as a yearning drops,
Thoughts are mixed stiff oasis and flow.
Stain soil with red as souls gather and hope,
The rule of sanctity is a veil to hide the blow. 

Written: May 18, 2022

POTD of May 20, 2022

Pantoum - Old or New Poetry Contest
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Form: Pantoum


Premium Member Frank Osgood 1870-1919

Frank Osgood
1870-1919

I was the great wanderlust of Whittier!
From 1890 until my last days,
I followed my nose, 
And other body appendages,
To distant earthly destinations, 
Both sensational and disgusting,
From the calm tranquility of a secure home,
To the chaos and uncertainty, 
Of traveling with heavy bags, aching feet,
And certain fears, I, nevertheless,
Decided to break out and seek other lands,
Other people, and other vistas.
Sickness did awfully afflict me many times,
As I lay retching inside many a tent,
But always I was learning, and thriving.
To far-away Rome I traipsed,
To Paris, Venice and London too.
From the streets of Madrid to
The far-away shores of the Mediterranean,
Where The Christ founded a mighty religion,
I ventured and saw, and tasted!
I hunted on safari in Eastern Africa and 
Shot a gazelle from a standing position.
In beautiful South America and Asia, 
My restless feet found another universe,
Of unworldly sights and strange rituals.
My friends!
It was amazing indeed to drink it all in,
Like a cool fruit drink from Rio.
But my thirst for wandering was never slaked.
And then it ended, 
Like the quick waking from a dream,
When I died at home of a measly fever.
Most ironic indeed.
And so, as for my epitaph,
This is it:
“‘Tis a heap of profit to travel.”
Form: Epitaph

Very Sick of the Flu

I find hard to move around,
dragging my aching body,
unable to do even the simplest chores...
yes, I am very sick of flu:
it's something I can't undo!


I will not go to the hospital,
lie in a comfortable bed for hours,
coughing and sneezing waiting for a call...
while spreading this virus and infecting others.


I'm missing out on brisk walks  
that keep my immune system healthy,
and no blues frustrate me more than loneliness...
come spring and let joy renew itself in this memory.   

 
My remedy is Robitussin by far,
a miraculous cure for cold symptoms,
and since I can't go out, or drive my car...
I indulge myself in the creation lyrics.


It's my first day back to work,
I'm drinking coffee, and I shouldn't,
but these headaches won't go away...
unless I smell it, sip it and dream away.


Copyright 2010 by Andrew Crisci
Form: Quatrain

Premium Member Unborn Again

Sensibilities shaped and slapped and stolen.   (aha)
I am indeed a borrowed man.
For where amongst my stirrings stand
priori grand?

Mission thwarted by a bell.
Noble tell.
Some soul such as mine
even, ever thus, declined.

Brokered deal appealed
in youthful fancy;
clung as clung today.
A skyward, inward, aching chance.

Once rejoiced.
A face more mine than my own.
All skin each day
the morning shone.

Bark un-burled. 
Shadow long uncurled to rust.
Untrusted flag re-furled;
Scattered in what mattered, dust.

Awoke to see the joke.
First impression lasting,
reality unmasking,
I am Thee.

A fraud become.
Mashed potato brained
and stew of everyman.

Another pauper’s heart proffered
for a token:
Stolen, broken, borrowed, 
a cobbled, curse of words.

No glory left ingrained 
this shallow story
unrefined and rained
upon us all.

Long verse of silence,
then still.
Until more silence comes
from up the hill.

mon  u  mental  moment,
overturned by seed or ant.
can to can’t. 

broken dancer’s leg,
blinded painter,
broken banker.

suicide with empty gun.
far worse than hollow
lifetime borrowed,

and chattering to gatherings as though tomorrows come with new surprises

there is only one
surprise.

and here it is.
Form: Rhyme

In Memoriam Quietly Always Close

In Memoriam Quietly Always Close

Are they whispers, then, settling
So gently upon that slightest breeze wending
     Over the granite crosses and statues of cradling angels,
     Which stand in their long cemetary rows?
Stating each name of the one passed on with
There-on etched, too, the noting of time alive
And telling of the beloved, who hum there their slow laments;
Who send up colorful balloons to celebrate their love and
Take far their silent greetings in the sky.

Are they lullaby heartsongs, which 
Rise on sprigs of heaven-bound light,
So tunefully sweet for love’s addressed, aided
By a league of angellic composers
In their lyrical rounds from above our earthly sphere?

Are these the places of our hushed sympathies?
The places we lay over our dear ones
All the broken pieces of  the grieving heart’s still longing 
To stay in some way forever near, and, so, we linger thoughtfully
Criss-crossing the undulating final verdigris
 Landscape, which embraces the last remains ~
Resting on in heaven’s wait for that further journey going on.

Are these faint mists surrounding 
So many hours of our own remaining days —
     Which are spent summoning back the stories, the touches,
     The eyes that happily cast their glance into our own —
Not truly our tears 
Being turned to magnifying memories,
Prayerfully appearing with each
Dusk’s close of day  and placid rise of the radiant moon?

Do see that the soundless falling is our aching?
Is a furor — burst of pure, white snow:
A flash of a blizzard, looking nearly weightless,
Landing in silence, but
Incongruously,  falling heavily down, into those forming crystalline layers
To dress a seeming lace-like çover over all the stone markers
With a luminous beauty, revealing a metaphor, ineffable
~ Blessed markers of life itself set here before us
Within reach of meeting the Divine.


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(c) sally young eslinger 6/5/2023
(Written for Jennifer Wilson & Maggie Hopkins in loving
  Memory of James Hopkins, spouse, father, & friend) Also written with the inspiring power of images of the 9,000 marking gravestone crosses in Normandy, France, and sights of Arlington Cemetary, Washington, D.C.
Written to unaccompanied cello Suite 1 in G major, perfomer Yo Yo Ma
Thanks be to God…


A Response To Michelle Faulkner's Poem, Unstable

Knock knock knocking on heaven's door 
my knuckles are bleeding and still, 
you ask me, nothing more 
Thick red solid walls erected between us 
you labeled me and shipped me off to another Country ...
leaving me with nothing more 
Defused, deprogramed, debugged, I walk away 
from your locked-in displaced shrug
I am held in a makeshift prison of my own,  
though I tell you everything, you tell me nothing more; 

Knock knock knocking on Satan's door 
Sanctimonious roars from a placating hypocritical God  
no Pious gesture on my part, I am not conforming 
this misshapen piece of bread you offer me 
doesn't feed my aching belly, 
I show you everything I'm feeling while you, 
escort me, out the door.  

ps I wish to thank Michelle for speaking such cantillate truth.

Premium Member Glowing Gals

It takes many days walking the path God has given,
limping with arthritic stagger, aching unrelentlessly.

Any matter that this condition came on as I retire,
nearly psychosomatic! I must look old age in the face

and laugh. I will not surrender to the cause of death
of my youth but bravely I must ride the healing train.

When you make up your mind at sixty to get going,
the going’s not going to give up its struggle..its resist.

But God has not blessed me with a coldcock mind.
The enemy keeps coming with closed fist. Nevermind

the wretched sight of one whose wings were clipped,
kicked in the butt from the highest height, falling

into a forever nap of eternal unhappiness. My strength
comes from the Lord. I may be weak, but his ways

are truth and life. His sun and moon out of the hands
of insane man, wild beasts and devilry. The light

stays in place by royal decree. O! The Word is brilliant!
I stay the course, the narrow way, limping if I must,

never missing the step of trust. O the people and the
places where I must go, God goes first ahead of me

and surrounds me. If I fall or fail, there is meaning
to it all. I can cry if I want or bravely lift the chin.

My mind set upon the white-haired lady, one of us,
who took much time to go from the parking lot

into the restaurant. She was turtle slow with her walker
in the moonlight. She was worth the wait. “Ooh…”

she’d exclaim, “I feel the Holy Spirit,” Exuberance sublime.
No clown face with red lipstick and downward plunge

of wrinkles. Happiness rode on her wave of suffering.
I wonder if she has joined the Lord yet? He was with her

all of the time. She’d learned to live in the light. I’ve met
only a couple of glowing gals, candlesticks that are alive.

Like Moses, God gave that special touch of shekinah glory.
If I pray for that manifestation, I know I must carry my cross.

I pray to love God with all my heart, mind, strength, soul -
always follow Him, no matter the toll. Blessings abound in Him.

8/7/2021

This Old House

There's a few too many years on these old bones
Where my soul calls itself at home
As the lights are dimming inside of these eyes
Pulling the shades down on this house's life

With the shingles thinning on top of my head
What used to be dark is now more gray instead
With the bottom floor being aching feet
As this foundation struggles to steady me

Not to mention the pressure on these old pipes
To keep my hearts furnace burning both day and night
Which keeps the heat at a steady flow
Little wonder my hands and feet are always so cold

With my siding sagging more than it should
I'd pay for home improvements if it'd do any good
But in the meantime I'll stay bundled inside
This old house that I call my life
Form: Rhyme

The Broken Heart

Can i ever forget that you 
ever existed in my heart, 
Knowing the pain it caused 
me deep down my heart.
Each time i think of how it 
all got to this very point, 
Only helps to send shock 
waves down my spines and 
joints.
It seems the joy you 
brought to my life, 
Was cut short before it even 
began with a knife.
It seems you lasted just for 
few days, 
While deep down my heart i 
long for  you everyday.
Wishing and hoping we can 
go back to the day i found 
you, 
When the whole of my life 
changed to brand new.
Bringing to me the 
happiness i never once felt 
before, 
And an ebullient love i once 
hoped for.
You gave me hope for a 
better tomorrow, 
By erasing all of my 
unending sorrows.
You gave me a great sense 
of humour, 
Each time there is a scene 
of a tumour.
You made my life as sweet 
as it can be, 
Even when there are things 
that can sting me like a bee.
How can i forget that 
amazing smile of yours, 
That kept me dazzling 
beyond many hours.
How about the joy you 
gave me knowing that you 
are my best friend, 
Went a long way to bring all 
my fears to an end.
And then every thing fell 
apart, 
The very moment you left 
by breaking my heart.
First you made every thing 
seems like an horrible 
nightmare, 
And brought to me an 
emotional darkness in an 
hare.
You turned every Grimes of 
happiness to pain, 
And every traces of love to 
lain.
Making my eyes abated 
with tears, 
More than what my heart 
can bear.
Pain of a broken heart is all 
i can feel, 
And the aching of a 
bleeding knee.
All i have now is an empty 
and shattered heart, 
That needs a taste of a 
rebirth.
It all happened very fast, 
And now i'll try to put every 
thing in the past.
And keep hoping for a 
better future, 
Without the glance of your 
picture.
All i know is that no matter 
the way it may seem, 
You'll forever in my heart 
remain evergreen.
Form: ABC

Premium Member Idyll

(Base USO club, Zweibrucken, Germany, 1963)

Of a lazy afternoon, I sit
     propped up,
Bones aching, sorely tired from
     lack of work,
And dutifully read the comic
     strips
With bored eyes while my mind
     dozes.

I sit enveloped in my peculiar
Grayish pallor, which clings
And will not disappear,
And martyr myself to the gods
     of convention.

I smoke acrid-tasting cigarettes and
Loudly chew a cud of gum, popping it
Absent-mindedly, and I turn the
     crinkly sounding
Pages, one after one, slowly
     and intently,
So as not to disarrange the sheaf.

The dryish smell of printed
     comic strips
Irritates my nose, but I don't
     sneeze --
Merely wriggle it a bit for some
     relief.

My brightly polished shoes are propped
Upon the table and I lean back and tilt
     the chair, and my hair
Is closely cropped and combed with care,
     no strand
Out of place, pomaded and arranged.

My clothes are neat and clean
     and stylish
And I brush away a nonexistent
     crumb and
I slowly chew and loudly pop my gum,

Moisten index finger, moisten thumb,
And turn the colored printed page
     of comics,
Snicker at the antics pictured
While I glance about.

     And wonder.

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