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Footprints

Dear A,

“Do you remember John McLean?” you asked
“He died of an overdose this week past,” 

If I remember John McLean? I can see
Him in fractured shadows of memory

Edges curled up with whisky and cigarettes
Our midnight quests for sleaze and side-effects;

While we talked of escape and sought new thrills
Beyond the tollgate and home’s confining hills,

When we searched that night so determinedly
For pills in the nervous light of a pharmacy

Perhaps our adolescent raving dimmed
Some destiny already struggling in him?

Like Eve’s fossil footprints pressed in the dune
On mustard shores along Langebaan lagoon,

All our choices leave their trails, faint remains
Of petrified memory through time-hewn veins

And the blue-black susurrus of his blood
Dried up like Eve’s footprint before the flood.

Ending so sudden, abrupt, unforeseen.
But yes, yes, I do remember John McLean.


Yours sincerely
M.

Premium Member Before the First Snow

Walking down a lane, strewn with withered leaves,
I watch as they twirl and pirouette in Autumn's chill wind
leading them in a rhythmic dance that it skillfully weaves
as they plummet, leaving branches naked and chagrinned.

There's a true spark of vigor in the breeze of Autumn's call.
One I am quite happy to answer in poetic verses composed
about a family trip to the pumpkin patch, amid hues of Fall
when Nature's boldest color palette is so vibrantly exposed.

It's time for gathering together, and offer words of thanks 
for the bountiful food and the beauty of a harvest moon,
and children Trick-or-Treating; scary Halloween pranks.
There's a crispness in the air and firewood to be hewn.

I get so excited when my favorite season approaches
and foliage gloriously blazes in shades of rust and gold.
Too quickly the coldest season of the year encroaches.
I'm not enamored by Winter when shivering with cold.

From this lane, I watch geese flying to a warmer clime,
their vee formation clear to see as to the South they go.
But before Winter takes command there's enough time
to enjoy these golden days of Fall, before the first snow.

Thats all Folks


After repeat defeats were strewn

The timing was most opportune

Started on an afternoon in June

Bazball did enthrall was a boon


Love new plans fans did croon

Bliss soaring sixes above festoon

Adoring this scoring monsoon

At the gall all pundits did swoon

 
Can’t impugn change of fortune

Batting assault & new era hewn

For 2 years were over the moon

Luxuriating in the Bazball lagoon


Magical mystical & mythical rune

Could stop Tests from dying soon

Harbinger of gunslinger’s saloon

Save cricket from its silver spoon


From results the cult couldn’t cocoon

Faults and default style won’t prune

Want to party like they’re in Cancun

Down under plunder burst the balloon


Stokes went from typhoon to buffoon

As the ECB and Key he did lampoon

Then Ben again did his team maroon


So it ends like any loony tune cartoon

As high noon for that wee Kiwi racoon

English Test tycoon to white ball goon 

"That’s all folks” Baz’s bull finally spewn


The souix marble

Endings like happily ever after must empty the vessel before the cauldron is filled, moil the foiled plot double the witches brew, constable the open air, and ensure the grasses are hewn, the total is specially K and especially after the first wave which thwarts this the souix marble, and underlings parlay.

Say it once, say it twice

Say it once, say it twice
mad folk yell, it’s not nice.
When the brain, fires in haste
lest a thought falls to waste
tie sour tongues; iron deep frowns
rough hewn gifts don't cast clowns.
Widen your spheres; hone words truly
Great minds bounce; no acts unruly.

Premium Member My Heart Is A Secret Garden


In the splendorous sky of my halcyon heart, 
shimmering with the glow of argentine art,
like the sequins of the moon you sparkled,
I absorbed your seraphic sheen hewn.

In scorched sky above the wasteland of my life,
cumulus clouds hovered as rainless clumps.
In their smoldering shadow 
a desert spawned in my heart.
At its fading fringe in the oasis of yearning 
you became the mesmeric meadow in my heart
where I traced a turquoise trail of dulcet dreams,
discerned the lattice of my love engrave
the enticing emblem of the blooming rose,
with its patina eternally frozen on your face. 

When my golden pasture gleamed 
with the eventide’s heavenly hues,
you embellished the rose buds of rapture,
I saw unfurl in your entranced eyes   
with the lilting luster of covert craving.

As twilight painted the panorama of passion,
my suffused sky dissolved with sapphire serenity,
spread sensuality spectrum on your visage,
flowering as a stardust smeared scarlet rose 
in the secret garden of my heart.


The last of us

The last of us
meander in rolling hills
by the misty stream
tinkling round slate rocks.
A doll size cottage
hewn of ancient limestone
silhouetted in rainbow flares
creeks and rumbles forlorn.
Withered lace murmurs languid
framed by dark embrasures.
We enter the void
over a parquet threshold
to greet mirrored visions
in ever rewinding portals
that unveil the stories 
of our dreams unlived.

Inherence

Some writers say
with their words
something new

Others
juxtapose
what before has been hewn

One values time
for its presence
today

One counts
each minute
like bales of old hay

Words of
redemption
words of regret

Freedom
inherent
— born of intent

(Dreamsleep: April, 2026)

We two fools

Hand in hand we sit in the clouds 
No one else knows 
What we’re talking about 

We roar with laughter 
Face red and eyes wet 
Not from sad tears,
From the laughter we get 

Hers rings like a bell 
A loud whimsical tune 
Mine roars like a bear 
And the silence is hewn 

What is it about her? 
Cuz she has me whole 
My body, my mind, my heart 
And my soul 

Her eyes glow like summer 
Her smile is the spring 
The only fall for us, in love 
And no cold winterbrings 

Even silence is golden 
Her face says it all 
As we rest with contentment 
Doing nothing at all 

Two jovial jesters 
In a world hard and mean 
Forever side by side 
With a shoulder to lean 

We laugh and we snicker 
We tumble and roar 
But one look in our eyes 
And together, forevermore

Angel dust

Angel dust glides
past the fairy wood
high above ancient boughs
and descends to anoint
my mangled mind 
shot through with the lead
of seething maelstrom
born in the tombs
hewn to cordon frozen angst
bellowing for battle
with steel majesties
cocooned in satin alcoves.

High Noon Last Chance Saloon


Do or die got to perform in the eye of the storm

Noise from the boys remember we did deport

Another loss 3 nought a new boss will be sought 

The depravity of gravity the reality of this sport

Big Ben’s men finally hold court our Last Resort


Insult beaten twice has the Bazball loon cult lost its spice

Starc’s legend hewn from chumps stumps in clumps strewn

Shredded in the dreaded Ashes vice Last Throw of the Dice


Bogged down in a twit pit will be flogged if we just slog

Stokes spoke about going for broke showing a bit of dog   


Aussie boon.. Over the Moon In the Clover lagoon
  
The Barmy Army will still croon their afternoon tune

As another buffoon’s marooned OZ media swoon

Sucking on their silver spoon our Last Chance Saloon

Last ditch on the pitch must bewitch this is High Noon

Epithets

Adjectival expansion:
describing the resident
of the Executive Mansion:
I give you, the President …

mean, obscene,
rotten, misbegotten,
rough-hewn, jejune,
numb, dumb,
rude, lewd,
sadistic, hubristic,
orange-dyed, red-tied,
frightful, spiteful,
greedy, weedy,
grim, dim,
crabby, flabby,
freely-swearing, diaper-wearing,
furious, incurious,
sallow, shallow, 
benighted, indicted,
painted, tainted,
addicted, convicted.

Micaelis Me Fecit

(Latin for 'Michael Made Me')

There lies a town in northern Spain 
(thank God it's little-known!) 
where every chapel, church and fane 
is hewn from honey stone. 

Nice chunky arches, columns too, 
with barley-sugar twist: 
and gargoyles, griffins, gremlins who 
quite cordially coexist. 

To stroll here is to turn, with love, 
some bestiary's bold pages, 
and marvel at the mindset of 
those early Middle Ages. 

Capricious carvings crowd one door, 
coeval "carls" of Beckett: 
and, scratched into one caricature, 
Micaelis Me Fecit. 

The mason sits in effigy, 
a chisel in his hand. 
He eyes us quite audaciously: 
that look, we understand. 

He doesn't care for Time or Fame, 
or Wealth, or Noble Birth: 
that "Michael Made Me," is his claim: 
and Michael knows his worth.

THANKSGIVING

THANKSGIVING
This altar of grace, rough-hewn by gratitude,
Brazen heart to flame in enduring worship,
Fall and yield to Your providences of beatitude,
The Earth and its fullness proclaim Your Lordship.
Purged unto brokenness by blessings of seasons,
Render true blue folded palms of throb and breath,
To say, 'Thank You' through love and for all reasons,
Never to alter the altar, faithful in life and death.
It’s the cry of joy of all alive in blithe rebirth,
Resounding cacophony of praise in vibrant revival,
Prostrate in total surrender to the One of Worth,
Blade, then head, then full grain forever loyal.
Here we are, here I am, all of us, all of me,
In that Eternal graven thanksgiving: "Bow to Thee."

Premium Member When Castles Crumble, Naked Power Recoils

Stone castle forts fall,
their wet moats dry to parched dust
power mutes silent
yet tyrant's demand to rule
remains coiled in naked might

Drawbridge now unfolds
as policy, law, decree
the moat, a filter
controlling information
behind wall of secrecy

Fortress power stays
autocracy hewn in stone—
unbreachable walls
the moat of politicide
changing form, not its intent

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