Trials of the Sea

A scenic blue are ocean’s crested waves
with tufts of white that spill in feathered sprays
amidst the troughs and valleys of the sea.
Will time or tempest bring God back to me?
 
Horizons hold no hint of land or line
to separate the sea from the divine;
just miles of ragged waves that sway and dip
like drunken wains with surges of my ship.
  
I come alone upon a summer’s morn  
to ride with tide and purpose where I’m borne,
to meet the sea at last on my own terms, 
where poetry and savagery affirms.
 
No longer will I be the willing slave.
I’ll seize the day and vow that I’ll be brave   
and know with salt and spray, I’ll come alive,   
compelled by fate to awaken and survive.
   
I’ll listen for the seagulls in their play
while they send raucous greetings to the day.
All boasts of man the mighty sea dispels
like diamonds that sparkle on the swells.
 
No person lives who can command earth’s sea;  
for it commands for all eternity.
All wagers with the fickle sea are fraught 
with perils for each rough-hewn boat or yacht.
 
Brave fools with consternation venture out;
though hearts may pound and minds be full of doubt.
They promise to their god, they’ll be reborn
and keep the tryst that they had once forsworn.
 
Through life’s adventures we are filled with woes,  
yet still set sail to where the sunset goes.
From heaven and the ancient deep, we’re barred;
while dreams peek through the portals, dimly-starred.

It is a fool who names fate’s course their own.
All folks set sail with winds and tides they're shown.
I’ll seek this blessed rage of order, quite composed
with all my inner demons now exposed.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Ashley Avatar
November 2, 2025 at 10:39 AM
Dear Ron, congratulations for your success in Mark's contest with your exceptional poem of human will against the fierce sea.. "No person lives who can command earth’s sea" - indeed! And yet, they survive the fury of the waves... "brave fools" live to tell their harrowing tales of the sea. I adore your rhythm, rhymes and fantastic imagery. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
VanHooser Avatar
November 18, 2025 at 4:38 PM
Hi Susan, this poem was inspired by one of those "brave fools" who dared Mother Nature and won. I found his story to be both terrifying and amazing, but it wasn't until decades later that I recalled it when I was writing poetry. I'm pleased you enjoyed this one! Ron
Dietrich Avatar
October 4, 2025 at 11:04 AM
I know tales of the sea do well in the marathon. I wish I had some more like yours to enter. Well done and well won
VanHooser Avatar
October 4, 2025 at 4:22 PM
Hi Andrea, this poem came from reading a real-life account of Robert Manry's solo trans-Atlantic trip in a 13 foot sailboat. It was an amazing feat. It took forever to get the poem to point I was comfortable sharing it and I am pleased it did so well. Thank you for your kind words.. Ron
Toney Avatar
October 3, 2025 at 11:40 PM
Ron, your thought-provoking poem addresses fate, survival, and divine reckoning as they relate to man and the “mighty sea.” Your steady rhyme and rhythm reminded me of the rolling waves of the sea. Nicely done. Congratulations on your top 10 win on Mile 19 of my 2025 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 20 has already started.
VanHooser Avatar
October 4, 2025 at 4:17 PM
Thanks Mark! This was one of those poems that was years in the making. It was started years ago and received countless editorial reviews before it seemed good enough to share with the world. I'm pleased it did so well. I've already entered one of my poems in Mile 20. Have a great weekend! Ron
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 3, 2025 at 4:11 PM
Hello Ron, I found your poem. i just read it. I like the the water. being n a ship you can feel the motion of the ship. It lasls a person to sleep. on stormy days it is hard to sleep with the notion of the ship rocking side to side. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/
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