Fastidiously Poems | Examples

Premium MemberI Am Life And Love

I live and love fearlessly.
I live and love fiercely.
I lived and loved falsely.
I lived and loved freely.

I am living and loving fulfillingly.
I am living and loving fantastically.
I am life and love firstly.
I am life and love forthrightly.

I live and love felicitously.
I live and love fastidiously.
I lived and loved ferociously.
I lived and loved fragmentally.

I am living and loving freeheartedly.
I am living and loving flirtatiously.
I am life and love figuratively.
I am life and love fundamentally.
Categories: fastidiously, life, love, lust, romantic,
Form: Quatrain

Premium MemberPortrait of an Enigma

     I knew a gent
       ramrod straight
     meticulously dressed

     Shoes laced tight
       polished to a ‘t’
     Vest, exquisite timepiece 

     Punctual meant
       ten minutes early
     Sipped tea, no coffee

     Poker face, played whist
        dined fastidiously
     Folded the ‘financials’ just so	

     No hint of a lady or passion
        when he vanished
     His timepiece was found, stopped
Categories: fastidiously, mystery, time,
Form: Free verse


Premium MemberAn Accursed Grin

Inside me shrieking like a banshee,
dark shadows hold an accursed grin;
Old wounds are licked fastidiously;

Always wreaking havoc painfully,
squirming below my butter soft skin;
Inside me shrieking like a banshee; 

My darkest demons they run madly
and feed on that deeply buried sin;
Old wounds are licked fastidiously;

Any who harbor them would agree 
it’s easy to tell where they have been; 
Inside me shrieking like a banshee;

They taste just like insecurity;
You can feel it before they begin, 
old wounds are licked fastidiously;

No matter how I try I can’t flee
they’re that part imbedded within;
Inside me shrieking like a banshee, 
old wounds are licked fastidiously.
Categories: fastidiously, dark, emotions, feelings,
Form: Villanelle

Premium MemberMrs M a Fastidiously Fussy Teacher

Mrs M was a teacher with a clean desk
there was only one pencil in there
it was always sharpened
and a pink eraser that looked brand new
I never saw an ink pen

the top of her desk had a small plaque
with her name starting with Mrs. of course
Even though she was divorced
She never wanted the students to know about it
We all did

She was fastidiously neat and fussy
staying late to sterilize desks and seats
she inadvertently taught me one big lesson
I never wanted to be like her
She was too punctilious; cleanliness was her world.
Students were probably twenty-six on her priority list.
Categories: fastidiously, teacher,
Form: Free verse

Premium MemberAn Alliterative Pursuit Of A Lover

An Alliterative Pursuit Of A Lover

I will firstly frankly forwardly forthrightly fastidiously befriend you.
Then I will completely correctly courteously candidly chastely court you.
Then whencesoever I have wonderfully wackily warmly wooingly won wed you,
I’ll be free to laughingly longingly lustily lecherously lasciviously licentiously lengthily ~ly ~ly ~ly ~ly ~ly ~ly ~ly ~ly ~ly ~ly ~ly ~ly ~ly ~ly ~ly ~ly ~ly 
Gladly gently graciously gratefully gallantly grandly greatly love you forever.
Categories: fastidiously, desire, friendship, funny, lust,
Form: Alliteration


Big Bird

The eagle flies with two wings, the left and the right, working together. The right says it's good, but the left says it's better. The body is one, resting at the center, the stabilizing, driving force of both sides despite the weather.
Together, both wings fly liberally and fastidiously across the plane. As one, the bird keenly overlooks and surveys the moving train.
From the train, many look up from time to time, but around November everyone looks up for a better view and peace of mind.
O' bird, Big Bird, with that eagle's eye just flying high, surveying and guiding the moving train as it passes by.
Sometimes the left will appear better while the right is lesser, or vice versa. But the direction is always the same because the body is at the center for sure.
Categories: fastidiously, america, business, corruption, political,
Form: Rhyme

Big Bang Theory Trying To Explain the World and Times Today

Genesis

One hypothesis is according to

Theoretical Physicists 

The origins beginning

Start of the know universe 

How it expanded is

The Big Bang Theory 

The greatest modern day minds and thinkers

Are currently studying fastidiously 

In order to try and solve this puzzle

And hopefully discover answers

To be of some relevance or use today

The one thing I take personally

Out of or from this in particular Theory

Is and that makes perfect sense to me

In the present tense and world still today

Is the Big Bang was born out of a

Violent , cataclysmic , explosive

Event that descend and expanded

Into total and utter unbridled kaos 

Which is pretty much the way

We as human beings live our lives today 

The status quo remains

The same to this very day 

So in effect we are back to the beginning

Nothing much has changed at all

Come to think of it 

We haven't really moved on 

Or progressed at all 

Only time itself 

Wiser far more knowledgeable supposably

Able to contemplate the complex

Yet seemingly still unable to

Solve and come up with solutions

To the simple state of the human condition
Categories: fastidiously, visionary,
Form: Free verse

Still Have Not Found What I Am Looking For

But I still haven't found

What im looking for

U2

Me 2

You just don't think

Anyone cares 

About you

Although you

Yourself care

Fastidiously

About others

Well that is

Quite clearly

What you think

About

Yourself 

And you will never find

That what which you seek

What you are in fact

Looking for

Because it's on the inside

Not and can be found

On the 

Outside
Categories: fastidiously, allusion, care,
Form: Free verse

Premium MemberA Rats Tale

My two pet rats so cheeky and bright,
  one brown and one black and white,
who live only a short age
  rattlin’ around in their cage.
I love their soft smooth furry coats
  and large bulbous scrotes -
that long ratty tail that grows,
  big eyes and ears and twitchin’ nose!
Jumpin’ and playin’ and runnin’,
  so adventurous and so cunnin’.
Always fastidiously cleanin’ -
  primpin’ and groomin’ and preenin’,
or on the loose goin’ AWOL
  in the lounge room or down the hall
busy chasin’ and busy hurryin’,
  and busy climbin’, hidin’ and scurryin’!
Hear them up the Christmas tree
  jinglin’ and janglin’ - a joy to see.
Or on the sofa playful and bolder
  huddlin’ on my shoulder -
scamperin’ down my shirt and sleeve
  furry heads in and out weave.
And truly I am a lover of all
  God’s creatures great and small -
my gorgeous little rats so loved by me,
  one called Hunter, one called Karmy!


      Written: December 2015
Categories: fastidiously, pets,
Form: Couplet

Premium MemberFlawless

FLAWLESS
lingering
habits
 impressions
in
unfamiliar
  &diverse
outlook

fastidiously&
  relatively
descriptive
happenings
meticulously
rendered
&conveyed
with
economy

sweet
  lines
lazing
minds
  elsewhere
burst
  with life
sun-strafed
neath
strong
   shadows


the
immediacy
of
ordinary life
in
subtle
&eloquent
   detail
   unimpeachable
&alone

NOTE:THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE   using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable.
Categories: fastidiously, poetry,
Form: Other

Love Address Petal

This doth my heart know for sure

That i shall awaken tomorrow

Loving you 1 day more

And liken your beautiful 
flawless face

To droplets of dew clinging 
fastidiously onto a rose petal

But with far more grace 
and elegance

Than anything even nature itself

Dare not wish to be compared 
against

Stricken by it's presence , radiance
and enigmatic beauty

As am i

Drying a tear from my eye

Inflicted by your smile
Categories: fastidiously, beautiful,
Form: Free verse

Premium MemberDisappointing Novel

At the beginning of this novel I had no idea 
The hero would betray the heroine, 
That is not my favorite plot,
matter of fact, it is now my least favorite.

The cover and the synopsis were fastidiously written.
Neither gave this away. I had no idea it was happening.
Two thirds of the way through I think the author thought
Damn! This has to end somehow, but how?

The next time I see this author’s name I will not
take any trouble to buy her book, as a matter of fact,
I will boycott it, thanks to this catastrophe.
Wait a second. She is turning things around again.
More later, I only have two chapters left to go.
Categories: fastidiously, books,
Form: Free verse

Captain Skeptic Kill Joy At Your Service If You Will

Show me a miracle
Or
Magic trick

And all i can think is how was it done

That is the level of sceptic i have become

With every believer comes a sceptic

Enter front and left Captain Sceptic

Sporting miracle,
Betting scandal

Predict the future,
Calculate the odds algorithm

Magic trick,
Smoke and mirrors slight of hand

If it's to good to be true it generally is

And there is no such thing in life 
that's free 

That doesn't come with strings attached

The greatest piece of single advice
a burns survivor ever imparts is

Read the small print fastidiously
before signing

Otherwise you are going to need the
services of a very good lawyer
Categories: fastidiously, slam,
Form: Free verse

Premium MemberShooter's To-Do List

Open each chamber, assiduously
  Load each bullet, meticulously
    Center targets in sight, fastidiously
      Pull the trigger, punctiliously
        Mow down innocents, detachedly
          Grin in triumph, hideously
             Undermine freedom, inevitably
Categories: fastidiously, death, murder,
Form: Monorhyme

Premium MemberFour Days In a Hospital

awful awkward
birthday bash
celebrated creepily
dubiously, diabolically
enormously enlightening
fastidiously  frustrating
gory grotesque
hospital hallways
illustriously illuminating
joyless journey
keeping
little
me
notoriously
ordinary
quixotic
realizing
Sophie
Terrified
Unclear
Very concerned
Wanting me to return home
'Xpecting a hero's welcome
yet 
zealously delighted that I will feel better.
Categories: fastidiously, health,
Form: ABC

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