Flawless

FLAWLESS
lingering
habits
 impressions
in
unfamiliar
  &diverse
outlook

fastidiously&
  relatively
descriptive
happenings
meticulously
rendered
&conveyed
with
economy

sweet
  lines
lazing
minds
  elsewhere
burst
  with life
sun-strafed
neath
strong
   shadows


the
immediacy
of
ordinary life
in
subtle
&eloquent
   detail
   unimpeachable
&alone

NOTE:THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE   using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable.

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