Flawless
FLAWLESS
lingering
habits
impressions
in
unfamiliar
&diverse
outlook
fastidiously&
relatively
descriptive
happenings
meticulously
rendered
&conveyed
with
economy
sweet
lines
lazing
minds
elsewhere
burst
with life
sun-strafed
neath
strong
shadows
the
immediacy
of
ordinary life
in
subtle
&eloquent
detail
unimpeachable
&alone
NOTE:THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable.
Copyright © Brian Strand | Year Posted 2022
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