Caren Krutsinger Poet ABC

Four Days In a Hospital

awful awkward
birthday bash
celebrated creepily
dubiously, diabolically
enormously enlightening
fastidiously  frustrating
gory grotesque
hospital hallways
illustriously illuminating
joyless journey
keeping
little
me
notoriously
ordinary
quixotic
realizing
Sophie
Terrified
Unclear
Very concerned
Wanting me to return home
'Xpecting a hero's welcome
yet 
zealously delighted that I will feel better.

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Darlene De Beaulieu June 3, 2019 at 2:26 PM Hello Caren Krutsinger, you were 3 days in the hospital! Oh-my - gosh! Why wer you there for that long? Hope you are feeling better now, have a nice day my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu June 6, 2019 at 5:40 PM Caren, i have a higateist hernia that bothers me more at night than during the day. I feellike i have a rock upon my chest at night. Have a nice evening my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu June 3, 2019 at 5:53 PM Oh Caren, have you had it a long time? i hope the pain is not too bad. Are you on meds? Oh i do not think he would Like the noogle. have a nice evening my friend. Caren Krutsinger June 3, 2019 at 4:56 PM I have shingles and my pain is still a 9, and I could grab up the doctor that insisted on releasing me and give him a super noogie.

Kurt Ravidas June 1, 2019 at 11:56 AM Oh my, birthday, tornado! :0 Hoping you're feeling well, Caren. Caren Krutsinger June 1, 2019 at 3:53 PM I am. I guess they should have sent me home faster.

Kim Rodrigues May 31, 2019 at 10:20 AM Oh no! What happened? Hope you feel undiddllumdiddlelumdiddley better! Just a spoon full of sugar makes the medicine go down...now you wouldn’t guess that I’ve been watching the new Mary Poppins. I know...”Kim, go fly a kite” Anyways, good buddy, I hope I’ve cheered you up! Kim Rodrigues June 2, 2019 at 7:15 PM Geez! I had shingles and had to shoot a gun for a Navy test. It hurt...yup mine was in shoulder/chest area. Marine says push it more into your shoulder. I fell into tears. Yup he knew something was wrong and passed me anyway. I was also ogled to train some medical students. Get better quick! <3 Kim Caren Krutsinger June 1, 2019 at 4:33 AM Add these together and you know why I am on morphine pills and have missed 4 days of school and plan to miss 2 more. Shingles, distended stomach, urinary tract infection, and one more thing too disgusting to mention. They sent me home yesterday even after I told them my pain level is still a 9. They did the right thing. 1. It was my birthday. 2. I have been 100 percent better since I got home. I am sitting on those shingles, Kim.