Tun nay haq mehar dena ya nahi?
Mein teray khilaf qarwai karun ga.
Note.Kharcha pani kon day ga ict?
Oyee tun ki rola paya ay,
Palu gashti da bacha ay,
Palu de Ma taxi ay,
Palu de Ma kanjri ay,
Tun keray kothay tay vaikhi ay?
Jawab day aswer me??
Tun Pakistan de har taxi nu aik lakh
rupiya mahina dena shoru kar day
Koi ve taxi dobara galat kam nahi
karay ge.
Note.Tableeg karni asaan ay
Pesay kharachnay mushkil!!
My first memory is of a little, yellow house,
Just a few blocks away from the school playground.
I was only three or four, so whenever I’d go out
One of my older brothers would have to be around.
Soon, we moved to a huge house in another small town.
If I had to, I could rebuild that house from memory.
I think about those days when I’m feeling a little down
And people like my babysitters, Dena and Kathy.
I remember old-man Butch, who only had one eye,
And my best friend Chad who shared my birthday.
There was my brother’s friend Michael, who was a little bit shy.
And the twins, Doug and Jeff, were always ready to play.
My Dearest Dale,
I the cutest dog in the world , loves a goat
You are the apple of my eye and soul mate
Who knew we would end so soon, don't gloat
It was all because I got stuck in a pail, was it fate?
Nevertheless I want to give you and me another try
No one gets me like you, I want us to be forever
Please whatever you do, please don't ask why
I don't want to live my life without you in it, no never
I know you are in complete shock, I understand
I said some not so nice words to you, I was mad
But before the pail incident our life was quite grand
If you don’t give us another shot I would be very sad
Yours truly ,
Deena
Inspired by the “Love Letter” contest
10-30-17
Inspiration also came from my limerick Deena And Dale
Have you heard about this old tale
About a dog Deena and a goat Dale
What a unique pair
Love was in the air
Until Dena the dog got stuck in pail
Have you heard about this old tale
About a dog Deena and a goat Dale
What a unique pair
Love was in the air
Until Dena the dog got stuck in pail
10-19-17
Alexis Y.
~ Changes ~
(Double Take 6's 5's and 4's)
Pray for love peace today
Love comes from Lord see
He will set you free
Help see better each day
He'll change your heart
And hold your hand
God hears your plea
Soul can be free
With Lord have choice
With God get love hope peace
Things better you know
When troubles stir so
With him you can win race
He'll change your heart
And hold your hand
Sing songs each day
Praise His name too
In Lord rejoice.
Dorian Petersen Potter
aka ladydp2000
copyright@2012
September.16.16
-So now faith, hope, and love abide, these three; but the greatest of these is love.
1 Corinthians 13:13 (NIV)
-“For God so loved the world, that he gave his only Son, that whoever believes in him should not perish but have eternal life.
John 3:16 (NIV)
~Authors notes:
The " Double Take 6's 5's And 4's " is a poetry style created by Dena M. Ferrari.
~ CHANGES ~
(Double Take 6's 5's and 4's)
Pray for love peace today
Love comes from Lord see
He will set you free
Help you see every day
He'll change your heart
And hold your hand
God hears your plea
Soul can be free
With Lord have choice
With God can obtain peace
Things better you know
When troubles stir so
With him you can win race
He'll change your heart
And hold your hand
Sing songs each day
Praise His name too
In Lord rejoice.
Dorian Petersen Potter
aka ladydp2000
copyright@2012
July.22.2016
~Authors notes:
The " Double Take 6's 5's And 4's " is a poetry style created by Dena M. Ferrari.
~My Lord God~
(Metamorphic Transition)
No matter what I did He always see me thru all
Even before I was born He loves me
Since I accepted the Lord my heart is full of love and free
He died on cross for sins and forgave mine when I repented
With Jesus I just can go through all
He gives me his love forever I can stand tall
His blessings everywhere are all clear to see
And in him I have no fear and can always be me
Without his love I don't know where I'd be now
When having a bad day He's always there for me so
With my God through everything I can really go
Inside Jesus' love makes my heart happily just glow
He teaches me only to love and always to forgive
Life can be so hard but God wants me to enjoy it and live.
God will give you and me his love forever and ever
He'll rain all his blessings on me and you too
And grant his forgiveness and never He'll leave me and you
In heart mind and soul I will always worship my Lord God too.
Dorian Petersen Potter
aka ladydp2000
copyright@2012
March.06.2016
~Author's Notes:
The "Metamorphic Transition" is a poetry style created by Dena M. Ferrari.
~Changes~
(Double Take 6's 5's and 4's)
Pray for love peace today
Love comes from Lord see
He will set you free
Help you each single day
He'll change your heart
And hold your hand
Be more happy
With Him can fly
You'll rejoice
With God you obtain peace
Things better you know
When trouble stir so
With Him you can win race
He'll change your heart
And hold your hand
Sing song each day
Praise His name too
His teachings nice.
Dorian Petersen Potter
aka ladydp2000
copyright@2012
December.22.2015
~Author's Notes:
The " Double Take 6's 5's and 4's" is a poetry style created by Dena M. Ferrari.
~Changes~
(Double Take 6's 5's and 4's)
Pray for love peace today
Love comes from Lord see
He will set you free
Help you each single day
He'll change your heart
And hold your hand
Be more happy
With Him can fly
You'll rejoice
With God you obtain peace
Things better you know
When trouble stir so
With Him you can win race
He'll change your heart
And hold your hand
Sing song each day
Praise His name too
His teachings nice.
Dorian Petersen Potter
aka ladydp2000
copyright@2012
November.26.2015
~Authors Notes:
"The Double Take 6's 5's and 4's" poetry style was created by Dena M. Ferrari.
~Changes~
(Double Take 6's 5's and 4's)
Pray for love peace today
Love comes from Lord see
He will set you free
Help you each single day
He'll change your heart
And hold your hand
Be more happy
With Him can fly
You'll rejoice
With God you obtain peace
Things better you know
When troubles stir so
With Him you can win race
He'll change your heart
And hold your hand
Sing song each day
Praise His name too
His teachings nice
Dorian Petersen Potter
aka ladydp2000
copyright@2012
October.6.2015
~Authors notes:
The " Double Take 6's 5's and 4's is a poetry style created by Dena M. Ferrari.
I LOOK INTO YOUR EYES ONLY TO SEE PAIN, KNOWING THESE FEELINGS HAVEN'T COME IN VAIN. SEARCHING AND LOOKING FOR NIGHTS ON END, WONDERING IF YOUR ALIVE OR IF YOUR DEAD. WALKING THE STREETS, AND ALL OF YOUR PLACES, SEARCHING FOR YOUR FREEWILL, AND SPECIAL GRACES. A LITTLE BOY YOU ARE TO ME, ALL I WANT IS FOR YOU TO BE FREE. YOU SEE SCARY PEOPLE, AND ALL OF THERE FACES. ONLY WANTING BACK THOSE OH SO SAFE PLACES. I ASK MYSELF ? WHAT DID I DO ? WHAT DID I SAY ? FOR YOU AND YOUR MIND TO GO SO AWAY. SO , HERE I SIT AND SILENTLY PRAY , THAT SOMEONE REACHES DOWN TO GRANT YOU ONE MORE STAY. OH GOD, OH LORD , OH FATHER OF MINE, PLEASE LET HIM WAKE AND KNOW THAT HE'S MINE. WRITTEN BY: DENA MICHELLE BYRD
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