Deena and Dale- Love Letter

My Dearest Dale,

I the cutest dog in the world , loves a goat
You are the apple of my eye and soul mate 
Who knew we would end so soon, don't gloat
It was all because I got stuck in a pail, was it fate?
Nevertheless I want to give you and me another try
No one gets me like you, I want us to be forever 
Please whatever you do, please don't ask why
I don't want to live my life without you in it, no never
I know you are in complete shock, I understand 
I said some not so nice words to you, I was mad
But before the pail incident our life was quite grand 
If you don’t give us another shot I would be very sad




Yours truly ,
Deena



Inspired by the “Love Letter” contest

10-30-17




Inspiration also came from my limerick Deena And Dale

 Have you heard about this old tale
 About a dog Deena and a goat Dale
            What a unique pair
             Love was in the air
Until Dena the dog got stuck in pail
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Dietrich Avatar
November 2, 2017 at 7:27 PM
Oh, I think I saw their story at youtube or something similar to it while I was researching for this contest. I chose a different animal pair, thankfully different from yours and I better get started on it. This is NEATO. Good luck in the contest
Robinson Jr. Avatar
November 2, 2017 at 11:20 AM
With this lovely love letter poem, Alexis, I finally get the limerick poem. This is a cool write. Me like it, me like it a lot. Love and smiles always.
Melugin Avatar
October 31, 2017 at 4:44 AM
Nice job Alexis! My best to you, chuck
Allison Avatar
October 30, 2017 at 7:51 PM
what a brilliant idea to write a poem based on one of your poems Alexis - a great fun write, good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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