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VITAMIN D DEFICIENCY

In search of more vitamin D,
She stripped off her clothes by the sea.
But she looked rather rude, 
Lying totally nude;
Upon which the jury agree.

So her summer was spent in a cell,
Where she didn’t tan very well.
For the sun through the bars
Left embarrassing scars
Of black and white stripes, sad to tell.

Premium Member Lost My Temper

I am not the only one to survive
So I have to think of others
I try not to lose my temper
Think of people's  plight
Think of people's deficiency
Think of people's hardship 
Think of people's IQ
Think of people's expectation
Think of people's fate
The world has to take and give
The world is not only mine
The world is fair yo everyone
All rounders never exist 
Above us is our God who cares
I believe
He will compensate us 
In one way or another

Ode To Human Immuno Deficiency Virus

Hi we wear
and cage
if we feel like peppered
if we ever awe by
 worrying
if we ever contact
a cultivated mistress of excuses
and hardlucks 
acids and gas are explosions
hey we may catch fire
if we will be remaining dim due to
a fatal fluke of one
 we don't envy
because it kills or cracks love
who know may be
killing it at all
we don't despair
because it desicates  and wilts
leaves and leaves them dry
nor live to suspect or mock
nor live to doubt or disgrace
nor envy the clouds
whose smile by virtue
is joy
we don't enjoin chagrin
because it doesn't reward minds
instead damn them
nor live by pretence
here and there
to mar and wear
oh! teachers fears
and poets and poets
for us is adjunct
to be saved from
becoming a new harbour of human immune deficiency virus.


Premium Member Home

Home, oh, sweet home
A godown for love 
A full stop for a journey
A dustbin for your grief
A flower pot for your joy 
A money - bag for your deficiency 
And a pride for you to keep

Deficiency

Flexibility of my print
Instability of a firm objective
Enamored by the mood thus sent
Could not decree my soul deflective.

Preconception designed for illness,
Hovering circumstances fixed
Longing to make well the stillness
And discard this faithless bother immixed.

Considered informed so much as insightful 
I credit deficiency to lonesomeness frightful.

Directly the detriment does dismount
Just as was envisioned 
And I am earning my just case,
As is quite honestly provisioned.

Acute-On-Chronic Bumper Sticker Deficiency

Politics season
Sans rhyme and reason
Never-ending blitz
Constant News Network
Won’t give it a rest

Traffic today
Bumper stickers’
Noted absence
Relief, not grief

Excitement 
Is absent
Root against

Trump chump
Hill pill

Lose.

3/22/16


Deficiency

The  Deficiency 
Recurring dream in a city landscape,
 Streets between tall buildings are like mountains
No wild goat will climb.
I want to go home and feed my dog
But have lost my air-line ticket
And the taxi I took to get to the airport is lost
 keeps running in darkening circles.
The face I knew is no longer mine 
It was lost somewhere in strange lands where 
I thought to find contentment
To escape my childhood, but the face I see in
The morning is of a sullen child 
Which no longer cry and cannot smile; this
Old face is not mine, I can’t blame the dog.
It waits and waits and id
Old still remembering good words and cuddles
I stretched my hand through time
The dog understands my helplessness closes 
Its eyes and sleep.
Guilt and Disappointment I could have done
Much better
What was given I rejected.
But once upon a time I danced the tango in 
Argentina, long before the dog was born.

Deficiency

What else do we have



but what we can hold



in our own two hands?



Reticent whispers of honey



sprinkle on my chest



and I find that soughs



deplete the sweetness



burned into me.



In the palm, I hold



a blade of bluestem-



dancing, swirling,



wanting me to taste,



what she tastes,



when it rains.





I want some of that redolence.





I desire the sigh and suck



of a splitting cantaloupe



to wake me,



the seeds to carry



these lips to sing,



the juice to nurture,



and my words



penetrate the wind-



carrying love to every ocean.



If the honey reaches my tongue,



I will remember that





too much sweetness will keep you forever.

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