Critize Poems


For As Long As You Have Hope You Can Overcome-Christen Kuikoua

...Yeah Cancer,
What a horrible disease
It takes away dreams and change it to sorrow
Takes away parents from their children
And children from their family
but I have a message of Hope for you today...
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Categories: critize, appreciation, endurance, heartbroken, psychological,
Form: Free verse

Enough Has Been Enough

...Enough Is Enough Horn Haiku

enough is enough
trump really was terrible
so we should impeach

completely absurd
totally denigrating
should get rid of trump

had been Bellau Wood
soldiers w...
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Categories: critize, allegory, analogy,
Form: Haiku


Too Young To Die

...As the wind continue to sway,
We hurt from the inside but the outside can't lay.
Where there is a will there is a way,
But writing a will is a perspective for it seems as the day
Where to each ot...
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Categories: critize, age,
Form: I do not know?

Contemplate

...At times I sit and comtemplate
Can we change or is it to late
Can we take back things we said
Show love and compassion instead
Can we try not to critize
Bring tears to someone else's eyes
Can we lear...
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Categories: critize, hope, love,
Form: Rhyme

Ode To a Poet

...I wrote this because I am my worst critic.  I'm learning how not to critize what I write.

You are a Poet, indeed you are
The words you write
Resonates deep within so many hearts

The way you pen you...
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Categories: critize, hope, visionary,
Form: Verse


Dont Critize Me

...Has any one every asked you “ARE YOU CRAZY”
And afterwards you think to yourself ‘AM I’

What constitutes crazy 
Is trying to get to kids to play quiet for 1 hour
Is answering phone, text messag...
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Categories: critize, faith, hope, inspirational, life,
Form: I do not know?

I Have

...ALWAYS
I AM.
ALL; GOOD AND BAD
IT DOESN’T CHANGE WHO I AM
INSTEAD OF LETTINT HE PAIN WIN
I CHOOSE TO BE ME…
AND GRIN.
EVERY STEP, WORK ACTION; DONE!
IS APART OF MY REFLEXION
I HAVE TO CREATE...
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Categories: critize, love
Form: Free verse

I'M Looking...

...I'm looking and looking and what do I see
I see an amazing piece of art created by a loving Potter's hand,
who took the time to mold and shape this piece.
Others may see flaws and imperfections,
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Categories: critize, art, faith, happiness, hope,
Form: Blank verse

All Wrong

...why can I not live up to you
I look for approval again and again
but never find it
what is so wrong with me??

I walk around you with care
like walking on the sharpest glass
ever word i say se...
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Categories: critize, depressionme, me,
Form: Free verse

Illusion

...You've got your visions and you've got your laws.
  You've got your system called government clause.  Always got to hold me back, 
all because of what I attract.  I only attract the bad because bad...
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Categories: critize, life, people, visionary, pain,
Form: I do not know?

Another Statiscate

...Another statiscate
Hey you 
with your press on nails,
fake ponytails
and to your back hair weaves.
Hey you
with your kids in
the system while you
swearing you miss them.
But still recieving ...
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Categories: critize, people, words,
Form: I do not know?

Bi Polar

...BI-POLAR

sometimes we say things that we later regret
or do things that we often forget
sometimes we get mad for no apparent reason
just like the weather changes with every season
sometimes we...
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Categories: critize, sorry,
Form: I do not know?
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