All Wrong

why can I not live up to you I look for approval again and again but never find it what is so wrong with me?? I walk around you with care like walking on the sharpest glass ever word i say seems to be the wrong one and even when i don't speak i mess up you critize me as if i'm nothing you make jokes about me in front of my face no wonder I never find good in myself you feed me these things as satan would

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Diane Christian

Date: 5/21/2009 11:43:00 PM

this is another great powerful write, they should take the plank of wood out of their own eye before looking at a speck of dust in someone elses eye, they will be judged one day and the measure they dish it out now is the masure it will be returned to them later , I know it's hard but their time will come and then see what happens, they will see and they will be sorry. God bless you from diane

Ashley Abel

Date: 5/21/2009 8:30:00 PM

i can relate to this. sometimes you don't have the choice or feel you don't have the choice to leave.

Kristy De La Keur Scoville

Date: 5/20/2009 2:36:00 PM

I agree with Deborah get away from that person...once you do surround yourself with positive people...I did and it works wonders for your self esteem

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/20/2009 12:39:00 PM

goodness! why on earth are you staying near that person and LISTENING?..good verse..bad person (not you) Light & Love