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Contemplate

At times I sit and comtemplate Can we change or is it to late Can we take back things we said Show love and compassion instead Can we try not to critize Bring tears to someone else's eyes Can we learn to give our all And be the first to make the call Can we take back all that pain We caused for our own gain Can we love not compromise Learn to be loving and wise Can our souls unite as one Just feel love for everyone Can we make this a better place For the whole human race Sometimes I sit and contemplate Thoughts of love, no time for hate carolann crowley 9/3/05

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/26/2012 12:28:00 PM

Really good rhyme and beautifully written. - Thank you. Have a pleasant weekend. -oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 10/26/2012 11:40:00 AM

I enjoyed this and the flow on the whole was very good but just a wee bit lumpy in places ie, lines 5 and 6 just put in 'someone else's eyes and it rounds it out try reading it aloud and you may see what I mean xx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/26/2012 11:27:00 AM

Very contemplative, the answer is yes! Well worth taking time to think about. Well written.