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Premium Member The Old Stream and Seasons Past

The old stream doesn’t burble 
like it used to in Spring’s past -
rambunctious in youth  wild it ran
racing the sun and chasing the moon
splashing  leaping  and  tumbling 
over, down and around  rocks in its shallow channel -
giving it rollicking laughter

The old stream doesn’t play with sunlight 
like it used to in Summer’s past -
when unending yellow dahlia days gentled its flow 
allowing for reflections and explorations around each bend
and for savoring saffron skies and plum-shaded shadows 
that seemingly stretched on forever -
giving it invincibility

Autumn saw a change in the old stream 
under a herald of goldenrod fireworks
waters waned becoming tired and tamed 
its banks and shoaly bed littered with Fall’s golds and reds;
a once lilting voice grew quieter
as nocturnal rhythms trespassed towards winter’s solstice
and under the cover of darkness 
a cool moon stole the stream’s slow dance with the sun -
giving it vulnerability

The old stream remembered not the goldenrod days
nor the purpose of its earthly path -
Winter charged in on his frosty horse robust with rime
and laid his icy hands upon the sleepy stream - 
draining its dreams of a pulse beneath a frozen facade..

but from below the stilled surface a silver current flowed free
… giving the stream eternity.


Susan Ashley 
April 12, 1019


~ First Place ~
Premiere Contest: 2022 Poetry Marathon Mile 23
Sponsor: Mark Toney


*Rime: frost formed on cold objects by the rapid freezing of water vapor in clouds or fog.*

Premium Member Truth Found, Recovery of a Broken Soul

Truth Found, Recovery Of A Broken Soul

1.
In nightmarish dreams he found such great dread
Of lost hope, life's decay, eyes of the dead.
Day's clear lights his damaged mind repaired
Deep traps from which his heart had been ensnared.
In sunshine he felt life's returning glows
Erase night pains and darkest of its blows.
As sun waned and shadows of dark arrived
He felt again, joy vanquished, love deprived.

2.
What of this devilish, persistent foe
With such powers, its broken claws regrow.
Hope alone, can evil be defeated
Or must Fate decree, his life be cheated.
In sun's bright shining hours his heart grew bold
Oft from tales of warriors of old.
On such bright days his thoughts returned to her
Destroyed dark powers that made life a blur.

3.
Where deepest love passions reign, hope survives
For in man's inner soul, true love revives.
Times and cherished moments serve to remind
With love's great truth, one can never go blind.
Standing firm with knowledge of man's powers
One can face even darkest of dark-hours.
Faith, love and hope are the right paths to take
All the rest are results of blind mistakes.

4.
Armed with newfound wisdom and clearer path
He had weapons to overcome Fate's wrath.
Every night before falling fast asleep
Head bowed, he recited prayers true and deep.
As new dawn's brighter lights came, his heart knew
Torments were over, as joys in life grew.
Found true, cursed Fate can be defeated
If one but lives, each day truth is greeted.

8-24-2017
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member I can’t believe I thought that

I can’t believe I thought that there’d be no darkness when it’s dawn,
I’ll be your queen of hearts, even if the cosmos did crack, 
‘forever’ exists as an unseen reality, and the sun will always sprinkle saffron crumbles, 
upon vivacious petals of violet roses, 
painted by poetic dreamers with writers block,
amidst sharpened thorns and thickened thistles. 

But why do golden flares burn the selfless skin of silken silhouettes that swirl to his salmon streaks? 
Is there no empathy left in cerulean spheres?

I remember the warmth of his solar presence,
and how he whispered sweet tales to the blue breeze;
he said he loves the storm that sits on 
the edge of angst,
yet he chose to flee, in the quest of citrine light,
at the sight of roaring rain and raven clouds, 
too reluctant to walk beneath skies engulfed in chaos. 

I ponder, who am I to blame? 
when the truth is, I assumed the splitting songs of this thunder-struck canvas,
would never be a reason for him to erase inked promises.

Perhaps, I should have seen, how the sparkling stars waned in silence,
and the moon veiled its pearl necklace,
tired of the monsoon monsters, mercilessly moving,
above seas so calmly awaiting~
cantaloupe wings of the compassionate sun. 

So, today, I’ll follow our honey-glazed dreams, 
still left along ivory shores,
adorned with seashell souvenirs, 
while reminiscing how, you wove profound pantoums,
from refined refrains of rhythmic romance,
to calm the lawless nature of my inner-psyche. …


Premium Member Wind

Wakened, the winged and winsome wind

wandered westerly while whistling witchery.

It waltzed whimsically within woodlands -

whooshing, then whipping willows.

Worn, it waned. . . whispering wistfully.

Three Roses - a Parable

Three men each grew a precious rose
They all had different thoughts
Of how to raise and nurture them
Of the outcomes that they sought.

The first man shirked all effort
Just plunged a hole within the soil
His rose grew, waned then wilted
It suffered from his lack of toil.

The second man possessed great intent
By preparing fertile ground
Purchasing almost everything
Gave his rose all that could be found.

This rose developed entirely spoilt
It flourished better than a weed
Except it too deformed and shrivelled
When he could no longer feed its needs.

Our third man was a pauper
However his heart was like a king
All he had was time and love
But he knew his rose would sing.

He too prepared quite fertile earth
But he never spent a cent
He freed the dirt for solid roots
He knew this rose was heaven sent.

He spent what he could just afford
Although mostly invested time
Talked and fussed and loved his rose
No surprise it grew up really fine

This man finally met his grave 
Wilted then died when he grew old
His rose still grows and prospers
It flowers so bright and so bold.

Precious gifts require attention
Only exceptions grow up wild
Treasures need time and care
Imagine each rose could be a child.
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member My Lunar Cycle

By the early years of that ancient decade, the 70's,
I'd tired of my obstreperous tomboyish games: 
kickball with the neighbor kids, sledding in the winter, 
desecrating the peacefulness of our street's grave yard 
with our bike races, tag, and hide-n-seek. 
And I tired too of the pastimes of my season preferred: 
chasing siblings with a hose, giggling and gleeful, 
swimming at Weed Park, 
and my perpetual swinging through those long, sweet sunshiny days 
longed for during classes in my school. 

Old friends grew up. 
Boredom anon crept upon the remnant of my childhood. 
At times - through infancy and beyond - 
I'd been beset by a feeling of loss 
over something not yet sought. 
It was something kin to loneliness, but no. . .not that. 
More a sense of gloom - a sorrowing for what? 
I still don't really know. 
Despite the days of inexplicable forlornness, 
I grew more and more cavalier 
throughout the  days that came 
between those odd forlorn days 
because my old timidity, in fact, had waned. . . 

Another face, fairer, appeared. 
It waxed and glowed - assured - 
until those “days - in- between” 
had finally surpassed the melancholy ones. 
I learned to stifle monotony and squelch the blues. 
I became a "doer" of too many things to name 
as I went gliding through with the Gibbous moon. 
Soon enough, a fullness had arrived. 
                              And now it must disseminate. 

In the years to come, I'll be wondering this. . .
Will the shining face I show the world wane too, 
and will my youth's strange darkness re-emerge, 
eclipsing what light remains as I drift, 
having come full-cycle, 
into my final 
                     crescent phase?

5/21/14
Submitted 3/30/16 to PD's Any Poem # 38 Poetry Contest


Premium Member The Coffee Shoppe

As scented air aroused my misty mind, 
a shadow broke the early morning Sun,
aromas wafting from the morning’s grind,
assured the senses morning had begun.

I felt an airy presence from afar.
Unnerved, I sought some comfort in my joe
when then appeared this early morning star 
with beauty that would set the dawn aglow.

She passed with nonchalance and without glance, 
and as I gaped, she simply stared astray,
her exit, with a whim and fickle prance, 
fanned arrogance that whisked my breath away.

I contemplated thoughts of giving chase
though in a haze I let her slip away,
but like the Sun, this path she may retrace
and destiny could pass again my way.

And as the morning’s essence ebbed and waned, 
her image kept returning o’er again,
the vision twisted aimlessly in vain
as sunrise caused her beauty to transcend.

I finalized my mundane morning rite 
then pondered how its remnants would unfold,
and knew… that I had seen the Morning’s Light 
and hoped once more its beauty I’d behold.
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Weaving Tears Among Saturn's Rings

She ventured far beyond Earth's realm
past cordoned confines of heart and soul
Tumbled,  as did Alice, down the rabbit hole
Drifted, like an Autumn leaf blown from an elm

She soared past distant planets, 
on paths lighted by effulgent moons
Weaved her tears among Saturn's rings
and all the while she was gathering stardust 
before they mingled with sand on Mars' dunes.

From mountain peaks of Jupiter, 
she bottled mist, to which she clings
And all these amazing interstellar things 
were collected as caressive tokens for him;
the one she had vowed to love more than life.

From far reaches of dark galaxies
she held treasures from her jaunt;
Mystical items she hoped he'd want
brilliant beacons of silvered moonbeams, 
fading light, captured as the sun dimmed.

She carefully wrapped her gifts to offer
in layers of cosmic flecks from a comet's tail.
Trussed with silken threads of time, unraveled,
she tied celestial troves she would soon proffer
to the one for whom she holds in fervent affection.

From his heart, she hoped would spill
the love that somehow waned to a trickle.
Then in abundance, once more it would flow
like a wildly churning river, Yes, she loves him still
© Lin Lane  Create an image from this poem.
Form: Verse

Premium Member Sea Glass-POTD

Walking along the beach's sandy shore, 
I witnessed the ocean's mighty roar. 
Sea weeds with seashells and sea glass, a tangled mess, 
Hiding a treasure, a glass bottle's caress. 
 
Within its confines, a time capsule's plea, 
An 80-year-old message, a desperate decree. 
A sender's hope, that we'd survive, 
The ravages of war, and truly thrive. 
 
Smooth and colorful, like fragments of dreams, 
Sea glass pieces, like jewels it seems. 
Emerald green and sapphire, sparkling with delight 
A testament to love, on a romantic night. 
 
Perhaps a couple, once shared a toast, 
Their glasses tossed, a memory engrossed. 
For future romantics, a token to keep, 
A symbol of love, forever to reap. 
 
The sea glass's glitter, it never waned, 
I brought some home, my lover's heart sustained. 
A token of forever, a love so true, 
Sea glass, a metaphor for me and you.
© Jay Narain  Create an image from this poem.
sea
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Voyage

Written: March 28, 2024 For Constance La France Contest

Quote: (The real voyage of discovery consists not in seeking new landscapes, but in having new eyes.) Marcel Proust
 
                   __________________________________

Slumber unwinds within crinkled cellophane,
Enigmatic visions come to life and sustain.
Geometrical shapes skin to pyramids, expand,
Cruising fairies sing through shimmering sand.

Hey, Captain! Ferry sails across any hurdle,
A searing streak splits the sky as a starved squirrel.
A prize is won, dock shuts, and crowds cheer,
At night, memories of you come back so near.

Delicate spiderwebs hang as stars in the sky,
Mozart hands waltz ivory piano keys sigh.
Galaxy emits a lambent, milky-white light,
Tapestry Highways sails by my a quilted sight.

A cosmic queen embarks on a cynosure journey,
Slicing over a glistening ocean during night mercy.
Colorful pathways in the sky are formed by sea swirls,
Mermaids glide fluffy waves of glistening pearls.

Behold a sturdy sail, a tough and bold ship, oh heart! 
As bleak as the gnomes at dawn, it's time to depart!
On deck, the skipper is fierce and red-dripping,
Meanwhile, my soul lingers in frigid buds snipping.

Captain! Rise and hear chimes; to you, a flag raised,
You gained fights and flights, and doves amazed. 
The ship has sailed safely and fulfilled its voyage,
He gulped distance, sea, time, and buoyage.

It was a time of jubilation and feelings of love,
During spell hour, they shone brightly from above.
Dived in the chaotic bliss of love, this waned,
In a misty past, the spirit soared and stained.

Rivers rush down slopes, and peaks loom tall,
Rafters ride via waterfalls as bridges never fall.
Deer graze in fields, and craftsmen, work away,
Sweets and meals sizzle on burner, made to stay.

Chili, pasta, beans, and maize are all we need,
The Alpine guy eats grits, Angus, and meat, indeed.
Riders hold on tight with flying manes and fish dives,
West Virginia alpine star twinkles and jives.
© Sotto Poet  Create an image from this poem.
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member In An Old Cathedral

She knelt upon a plank, plain oaken
(sable cloak, her mourning guise),
and sensed the breath of distant sighs,
pale shades of pain behind blue eyes…

While clasping close a cross-like token
(holding hope for those in need)
she prayed her Lord "please intercede,
my woes be washed, my soul be freed"…

Archangels, in the skies evoken
(candles flickered, shadows shivered),
through the panes, the moonlight quivered,
summoned forth, the wish delivered…  

Forgotten words he once had spoken
(dimly echoed ’neath the dome)
swept sweetness of the honeycomb
o'er distant realms they used to roam…

At midnight's knell, in dreams awoken,
memories of love unfeigned…
Though loneliness of grief remained,
she still held hope… hope hadn't waned…

And when the dawn had early broken,
by the font, in peace, she lay…
As sudden as a sunset ray,
the light of life had slipped away…
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member The Old School Desk

Today, meandering through the clutter of the local antique store,
I almost tripped and fell over an object partially hidden on the floor!
My hands came to rest on an old-fashioned school desk sitting there.
It reminded me of the one I occupied in my school days, I do declare!

My thoughts drifted back through the misty past to reminisce and ponder.
As I caressed its oaken surface with my fingers, I began to wonder.
Did it once grace a simple one-room prairie schoolhouse in Indiana?
Might it have come from a rustic schoolroom in the state of Montana?

The slanting top of the old desk was scratched and with ink was stained.
I saw faint initials carved by an idle lad whose attention span had waned!
The varnish was worn off the folding seat by many a squirming kid.
Wads of chewing gum still adorned the underside of the folding lid!

I recalled sitting at one of those uncomfortable desks trying to stay awake!
As Miss Ruth droned on and on, all I could think of was the recess break!
The room reeked of oranges and fried egg sandwiches we'd bring to munch.
Kids of means paid a dime to eat finer fare in the lunchroom for their lunch!

I recalled the thwack on my knuckles of Miss Ruth's ruler to get my attention,
And what awaited me at home for misbehavior with growing apprehension!
(A clerk noting my glazed eyes asked, "May I help you sir? Is anything amiss?"
"Nah", I replied. "If you please, I'd like to stand here awhile and reminisce!")

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
© All Rights Reserved
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Joy

Winds
raged as 
fires glowed in
small frowzy shacks
that strange Georgia eve an angel was born.

The sky proclaimed that lives would re-arrange;
with Joy’s first cry,
the tempest
changed to
calm.

Warm 
Zephyr -
spring magic -
arrived with Joy.
Her laughter was kindling for hearth and home.

No galas in her future ; she was poor.
Never frowning, 
Joy would flash
diamond 
smiles.

Her 
Mama 
sewed flounces
on hand-me-downs,
which Joy wore with glee, celebrating life.

As Papa played his guitar for them all,
Joy danced and twirled.
Humdrum fled 
in her
stead.

Fair,
yellow-
haired; slender
like sassafras, 
this sunny lass gladdened all of the town.

Humankind exists that we might have joy.
Those touched by that
sweet angel
all learned
this.

Joy 
expelled 
gloom, giving
her cheer to all.
Nevertheless, joy is often short-lived.

One strange spring day, a cold wind blew in. As
thunder quaked, warmth
waned, and Joy
was no
more.

For Chris D. Aechtner's 
"Double the Fun ~ (Tetractys)"
Form: Tetractys

Premium Member Sos

SOS


Sixty seems so old
Oland was a time long ago
Sweden still sleeps in my dreams

So young so sweet
Old dreams run in retreat
Songs like lovers never last

Vanished love, island breezes
Vanquished lovers, sins drown, nothing pleases

Gone is the desire
Gardens die inside of Swedish winds
Gentle thoughts tossed into trysts seas

Tales of lore from distance shore
Another chance, the dice never win
Camisoles and lingerie
Oh my love, you captivated me
Maidens I would always toss to the sea

Frost could not kill the call of drummers doom

Another song, another story of a lovers end
Beware the maiden, ships sailors will tell 
Breasts heave in sadness of autumn leaves
Allay my fears with illusions trumpets

Death dances, life runs to another day
Quebec was the shores of Swedish fantasies

Winter winds brought things to an end
Taking love could not prosper, when love won’t bend
Inside the pain, doomed us the broken hearted
Another day, another dream


Knowing love was so departed
	Memories wrapped and folded in the drawer
Knowing death was welcome and so regarded
	Youth no longer dances on this shore


Solitude was the only game in town
Obituary would be my fame thus drowned
Smiles forgotten, my love for her never waned



Notes: Due to some confusion, I changed the last verse and fixed a few things!
The suicide was mine, but only poetically! :)
Form: Lyric

Premium Member After the Interim

She met him in the interim,
 that space between endings and beginnings;
                                 a summer fling; 
a sowing of her not so wild oats 
          was all that it was meant to be. 
But he was so much more.

She found herself languishing
 pool side on his patio 
                  as long June afternoons
 dripped    like    molasses  into    nights. 

Sometime in July, 
her illusion that she’d had of independence
burst              like pyrotechnics in the sky. 
And oh, those nights they imbibed! 
Her nights with him   ran 
                            like the blood-red wine 
in the goblets 
cupped 
by the trembling hands   of two inebriates. 
 But the stems of those goblets
 slipped quickly from their fingers, 
and love’s elixir 
spilled much too quickly
                              into tomorrow.

Along with the dry protracted days,  
she - like desert grasses - 
withered            as she waited. 
 always thirsting for the nights! 
But by the time August had arrived,
 she also had come to realize that,
 like the yellowed grasses, 
she needed more than passion at dusk. 
The nights, in fact, 
had brought her 
no less scorching    than the sun.
 And what she’d thought 
was more than she could want 
became              much less 
than he could ever give.

Some essential thing was lacking,
some need deep inside her
not being fulfilled.
In those long afternoons 
as she'd waited for him,
she'd come to realize what was missing.

By September - back in school -
she knew her ardor for him
had barely waned, 
yet still. . . 
she knew what she had to do.
And so, she looked to autumn's advent
for October's cooling winds
to sweep away 
            the remnants
                     of ashes in her soul.

2/26/2015
For Laura Loo's Free Verse on Sadness (again) Poetry Contest

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