Andrea Dietrich Poet Alliteration

Wind

Wakened, the winged and winsome wind

wandered westerly while whistling witchery.

It waltzed whimsically within woodlands -

whooshing, then whipping willows.

Worn, it waned. . . whispering wistfully.

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Joseph May September 2, 2015 at 10:45 AM A wonderfully written windy write Andrea... Congrats on the win

Dr. Upma A. Sharma September 1, 2015 at 1:06 AM Wow awesome Andrea! Congrats on your superb winning write !

James Inman August 31, 2015 at 11:30 AM This is my smile for today Andrea, with wonderful wwws.

Skat A August 30, 2015 at 11:07 PM Andrea, Congratulations on your win. Thank you for supporting my WIND contest. SKAT LOVE

Maurice Yvonne November 1, 2014 at 6:37 AM Whoa, wow, with w's whopping will, would with why's wielded wisely, wear weary weaders wisdom down! Pwobably not! Wise write!

Phyllis Babcock September 27, 2014 at 12:26 PM Lots of wonderful, wise words on the wind. Love it. last one to read for today as have to get some work done. love phyl

Cynthia Ferguson August 29, 2014 at 5:27 AM you have giving something we can't see but feel, life

Lisa Richards August 9, 2014 at 9:29 PM Fantastic poem very beautifully written

Gry Christensen July 22, 2014 at 1:05 PM I am so grateful I came across this beauty. I had to read it out loud! :) You create beautiful imagery.

Jay Holliday July 16, 2014 at 2:47 PM It isn't just the alliteration that astounds me but also the great use of words to compliment the sound of the poem. -Nice one Andrea!

Matthew Anish July 16, 2014 at 12:20 PM Excellent use of alliteration here! J.R.R. Tolkien wrote some fine poems with that form. Let me know what you think of my latest - and keep up the good work! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 13, 2014 at 2:56 AM Perfect write for the contest Andrea! Congrats on big win dear!

Mohan Chutani July 12, 2014 at 11:32 PM Andrea, for me a perfect alliteration. My fav. and rated 7. Congrats. Mohan Andrea Dietrich July 13, 2014 at 12:54 AM thanks SO MUCH!!!

Arlene Smith July 12, 2014 at 8:39 PM Congrats on a great win, Andrea! surprised not to see this one higher on the winners list.. Hugs.. Arlene

Joseph May July 12, 2014 at 7:53 PM Congrats on your win Andrea

Seren Roberts July 12, 2014 at 7:14 PM Congrats on a great write Andrea ....Seren

David Mohn July 12, 2014 at 6:49 PM well written and wonderfully whimsical...Joyce inspired me :)

Joyce Johnson July 12, 2014 at 3:23 PM Whopping worthy win. Love, Joyce

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 12, 2014 at 2:33 PM Wow!! Your wind blew my breath..:) love your 2nd and 3rd lines..:)! This among the best I've read from the list..:)

Faye Gibson July 12, 2014 at 10:28 AM Really like this, Andrea. Beautiful. Congratulations.

Richard Lamoureux July 12, 2014 at 8:17 AM One of my personal favorites! Congratulations Andrea.

Monterey Sirak July 12, 2014 at 6:25 AM Wow! Wonderful! I love the actions of the wind. It is alive and moving. I couldn't help myself, after reading I had to try to say it aloud,three times real fast.

Jan Allison July 12, 2014 at 6:17 AM dropping back with my congratulations Andrea. Hugs Jan

Paul Callus July 12, 2014 at 5:35 AM Wow! Andrea....you managed it right through using the same letter! no easy task. Congratulations! // paul

Dr.Ram Mehta July 12, 2014 at 5:16 AM Yes, the wind, the winged and whoosing did reach me, Andrea. Congrats on the win

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