Wind

Wakened, the winged and winsome wind

wandered westerly while whistling witchery.

It waltzed whimsically within woodlands -

whooshing, then whipping willows.

Worn, it waned. . . whispering wistfully.

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Joseph May

Date: 9/2/2015 10:45:00 AM

A wonderfully written windy write Andrea... Congrats on the win

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/1/2015 1:06:00 AM

Wow awesome Andrea! Congrats on your superb winning write !

James Inman

Date: 8/31/2015 11:30:00 AM

This is my smile for today Andrea, with wonderful wwws.

Skat A

Date: 8/30/2015 11:07:00 PM

Andrea, Congratulations on your win. Thank you for supporting my WIND contest. SKAT LOVE

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 11/1/2014 6:37:00 AM

Whoa, wow, with w's whopping will, would with why's wielded wisely, wear weary weaders wisdom down! Pwobably not! Wise write!

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 9/27/2014 12:26:00 PM

Lots of wonderful, wise words on the wind. Love it. last one to read for today as have to get some work done. love phyl

Cynthia Ferguson

Date: 8/29/2014 5:27:00 AM

you have giving something we can't see but feel, life

Lisa Richards

Date: 8/9/2014 9:29:00 PM

Fantastic poem very beautifully written

Gry Christensen

Date: 7/22/2014 1:05:00 PM

I am so grateful I came across this beauty. I had to read it out loud! :) You create beautiful imagery.

Jay Holliday

Date: 7/16/2014 2:47:00 PM

It isn't just the alliteration that astounds me but also the great use of words to compliment the sound of the poem. -Nice one Andrea!

Matthew Anish

Date: 7/16/2014 12:20:00 PM

Excellent use of alliteration here! J.R.R. Tolkien wrote some fine poems with that form. Let me know what you think of my latest - and keep up the good work! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/13/2014 2:56:00 AM

Perfect write for the contest Andrea! Congrats on big win dear!

Mohan Chutani

Date: 7/12/2014 11:32:00 PM

Andrea, for me a perfect alliteration. My fav. and rated 7. Congrats. Mohan

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/13/2014 12:54:00 AM

thanks SO MUCH!!!

Arlene Smith

Date: 7/12/2014 8:39:00 PM

Congrats on a great win, Andrea! surprised not to see this one higher on the winners list.. Hugs.. Arlene

Joseph May

Date: 7/12/2014 7:53:00 PM

Congrats on your win Andrea

Seren Roberts

Date: 7/12/2014 7:14:00 PM

Congrats on a great write Andrea ....Seren

David Mohn

Date: 7/12/2014 6:49:00 PM

well written and wonderfully whimsical...Joyce inspired me :)

Joyce Johnson

Date: 7/12/2014 3:23:00 PM

Whopping worthy win. Love, Joyce

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 7/12/2014 2:33:00 PM

Wow!! Your wind blew my breath..:) love your 2nd and 3rd lines..:)! This among the best I've read from the list..:)

Faye Gibson

Date: 7/12/2014 10:28:00 AM

Really like this, Andrea. Beautiful. Congratulations.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/12/2014 8:17:00 AM

One of my personal favorites! Congratulations Andrea.

Monterey Sirak

Date: 7/12/2014 6:25:00 AM

Wow! Wonderful! I love the actions of the wind. It is alive and moving. I couldn't help myself, after reading I had to try to say it aloud,three times real fast.