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After the Interim

She met him in the interim,
 that space between endings and beginnings;
                                 a summer fling; 
a sowing of her not so wild oats 
          was all that it was meant to be. 
But he was so much more.

She found herself languishing
 pool side on his patio 
                  as long June afternoons
 dripped    like    molasses  into    nights. 

Sometime in July, 
her illusion that she’d had of independence
burst              like pyrotechnics in the sky. 
And oh, those nights they imbibed! 
Her nights with him   ran 
                            like the blood-red wine 
in the goblets 
cupped 
by the trembling hands   of two inebriates. 
 But the stems of those goblets
 slipped quickly from their fingers, 
and love’s elixir 
spilled much too quickly
                              into tomorrow.

Along with the dry protracted days,  
she - like desert grasses - 
withered            as she waited. 
 always thirsting for the nights! 
But by the time August had arrived,
 she also had come to realize that,
 like the yellowed grasses, 
she needed more than passion at dusk. 
The nights, in fact, 
had brought her 
no less scorching    than the sun.
 And what she’d thought 
was more than she could want 
became              much less 
than he could ever give.

Some essential thing was lacking,
some need deep inside her
not being fulfilled.
In those long afternoons 
as she'd waited for him,
she'd come to realize what was missing.

By September - back in school -
she knew her ardor for him
had barely waned, 
yet still. . . 
she knew what she had to do.
And so, she looked to autumn's advent
for October's cooling winds
to sweep away 
            the remnants
                     of ashes in her soul.

2/26/2015
For Laura Loo's Free Verse on Sadness (again) Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Roper Avatar
March 7, 2018 at 9:40 PM
back with congratulations on your win :~) ! Hugs Eve ~`*
Scars Avatar
March 5, 2018 at 6:44 AM
sweep away remnants of ashes in her soul, oh that last line really hit me hard sweet lady..beautifully expressed thank you and congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
Babcock Avatar
April 27, 2015 at 1:14 PM
Oh so romantic so hot. Love this one Andrea. love phyl
A   Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 12:53 PM
Rachel, Congratulations, on your fine win. <3 LINDA <3
Kimathi Avatar
March 7, 2015 at 8:46 AM
This piece is HOT. I had to read it with only my vest on, lolest!!! Congrats for your TOP place Andrea!!! ^_^
Kendrick Avatar
March 6, 2015 at 4:24 PM
Congrats..Sara
A  Avatar
March 5, 2015 at 10:07 PM
Andrea, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Hosty Totsy Win :-) ~SKAT~
Onclaud Avatar
March 5, 2015 at 9:56 PM
hi andie.. been here since 7 pm, your time, march 5.. can't see anything.. huggs
May Avatar
March 3, 2015 at 7:17 AM
Congrats on a great win Andrea....I love the line that Rajat refers to also...
Chakrabarty Avatar
March 3, 2015 at 4:45 AM
as long June afternoons dripped like molasses into nights.. It is an outstanding write...Congrats on your win. Love Andie
De La Luna Avatar
March 3, 2015 at 3:51 AM
phenomenal write, ANdrea! congratulations!
Ali Avatar
March 3, 2015 at 12:47 AM
Wonderful, superbly written...I enjoyed ever word of it. Congratulations on the win Andrea.
Roper Avatar
March 2, 2015 at 8:38 PM
I love your word play, amazing :) dripping like molasses, slipped quickly from their fingers and love’s elixir spilled into tomorrow. 7 and a favorite Congratulations on your win.
Guzzi Avatar
March 2, 2015 at 2:29 PM
Well Andie, I think that's one of the best Free verse poems; I have ever seen you write. There were some very small spots; you could have made clearer & a wee bit of work on enjambment & line break BUT one damn fine bit of hot stuff here! A FINE use of euphemisms. BIG CONGRAD's Light & Love
Nance Avatar
March 2, 2015 at 11:29 AM
Grats on your win! hotsy hot!
Nunez Avatar
March 2, 2015 at 11:08 AM
Congrats Andrea on your win! :D Kim
Allison Avatar
March 2, 2015 at 10:35 AM
wow this filled fast - never even got mine off the ground - many congrats Andrea an fabulous poem - I can only second what Sandra Said! many congrats :-) Hugs jan xx
Haight Avatar
March 2, 2015 at 10:32 AM
Awesome poem, Andrea...so full of passion and the eventual wisdom. A huge congratulations on your top of the podium win! Hugs,
Carmack Avatar
March 2, 2015 at 10:26 AM
Andrea, damn impressive write. Congrats on your win.
Poetry Avatar
March 2, 2015 at 10:25 AM
My absolute favorite in the contest. You had me hooked from the beginning and I travelled with you thru your whole star crossed journey. It was wonderful! Great job and congratulations on your first place win. :)
Cooper Avatar
March 2, 2015 at 12:07 AM
What brilliant lines and such imagry! The passion of new love so sensual so voluptuous in its consumation. And then the realisation that this was not enough to fill her soul. The brush strokes of your words at the close finish with perfection the masterpiece you have painted. It Has a seve from me and is in my favs. Love Shane xxx--- PS truely magnificent write from a great talent.
May Avatar
March 1, 2015 at 10:19 PM
Wow.. You tell a great story Andrea...7...excellent work
Kendrick Avatar
March 1, 2015 at 7:14 PM
Good one with the topic given..Reads like a winner..Way to go..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Neels Avatar
March 1, 2015 at 10:07 AM
Sensual, I enjoyed the imagery in this one Andrea ;) all the best for the contest as well..
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 28, 2015 at 7:02 PM
This is a hot one Andrea, but sadly cools off in the end, like most lustful encounters do. Great entry for the contest! I think I have to pass on this contest.
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