Joy

Winds raged as fires glowed in small frowzy shacks that strange Georgia eve an angel was born. The sky proclaimed that lives would re-arrange; with Joy’s first cry, the tempest changed to calm. Warm Zephyr - spring magic - arrived with Joy. Her laughter was kindling for hearth and home. No galas in her future ; she was poor. Never frowning, Joy would flash diamond smiles. Her Mama sewed flounces on hand-me-downs, which Joy wore with glee, celebrating life. As Papa played his guitar for them all, Joy danced and twirled. Humdrum fled in her stead. Fair, yellow- haired; slender like sassafras, this sunny lass gladdened all of the town. Humankind exists that we might have joy. Those touched by that sweet angel all learned this. Joy expelled gloom, giving her cheer to all. Nevertheless, joy is often short-lived. One strange spring day, a cold wind blew in. As thunder quaked, warmth waned, and Joy was no more.
For Chris D. Aechtner's "Double the Fun ~ (Tetractys)"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Inman Avatar
August 29, 2015 at 2:32 PM
Finally, Andrea! It was well worth the search, a beautiful touching poem and of course all of the fun shapes.
Yvonne Avatar
February 2, 2015 at 4:34 PM
Interesting style similar to other styles. Very well written. Love it!
Horsman Avatar
October 30, 2012 at 10:49 AM
not suprised to see these as winners, they are so good, you excell with this type of poetry...
Benson Avatar
July 10, 2011 at 9:48 AM
Hi Andrea, Wow! there is so much about your poems each one takes me deeper than I expected, like the line; Joy is often short-lived.
Ball Avatar
June 25, 2011 at 5:46 PM
Oh gosh! What a sad story! The imagery was great but the ending is a real downer. Very well done though. God Bless, JB
Brown Avatar
June 21, 2011 at 10:05 AM
Congratulations on your 1st Place win in Chris's "Double The Fun" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
Alpestris Avatar
June 20, 2011 at 7:59 AM
Congratulations, Andrea! Interesting how you started the reader off with feelings of joy and then ended up sad. Thanks for your comments in mine, glad you liked my formatting.
Guzzi Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 5:55 PM
wow what a great job of telling an intriguing story in this form! BIG BIG Congrad's Light & Love
Mehta Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 3:32 PM
My congratulations on the first place win in the contest, Andrea
Phookan Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 12:06 PM
Andrea sweetest, thanks for saving me..hope I was on time. And, Yippie !!! a 1st place win.. you deserved it for this beautiful series, the way it has been artistically penned. The girl Joy is she also personification of 'joy' here? the poem does read so..A big Congrats!!!
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June 19, 2011 at 8:58 AM
yay!! a big congrats on your 1st place win andrea, didn't I tell you it was a winner? I just had to read it again! btw my ghost poem is based on true events within my own life, it means a lot that you liked it so much, it's very personal to me...oh and I saw you're a virgo when I was reading a zodiac poem - so am I!
K. Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 8:49 AM
Super yay and congrats to you for your awesome win with this unique piece, Andrea! Way to go sweetie, you got me hooked reading this again (and then whoosh, ok I have to admit I sort of felt sad again that Joy was no more; that last stanza always gets to me, haha) but nonetheless happy for you for this win :D hugs to you ^_^
Sumler Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 8:20 AM
You go girl! Man I'm astonished at the accuracy, imagery, and beauty of this poetic tetractys! Congrats on #1 :-) Johnny
Long Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 7:35 AM
this was wonderfully penned congrats on your win, cory
Neels Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 3:56 AM
Heya Andrea, congratulations on a well deserved first place win with this gem, love W
Poet Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 12:03 AM
Hurray Andrea on your BIG win in the contest...Excellent write:)
Onclaud Avatar
June 18, 2011 at 9:51 PM
yeyy, andie.. toppers! raving KUDOS to you for the special win :) huggs
Roberts Avatar
June 18, 2011 at 9:22 PM
congrats on your first place win in Chris's contest with this wonderfully told tale Andrea
Babcock Avatar
June 18, 2011 at 9:32 AM
Loved this very unique write and form. A sad ending to this piece. Love Phyl
K. Avatar
June 16, 2011 at 1:58 AM
Oh shucks, that ending sure was sad though, Andrea :(-- but I really enjoyed how you weaved Joy's story here-- really interesting and she truly was an epitome of her name-- very unique take on the form and yay, we both did long ones :D hugs to you sweetie :D
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June 15, 2011 at 2:49 PM
WInning words my dear Andrea.... your poetry reads like a warm spring evening , nice and smooth ...luv Michael
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June 15, 2011 at 2:46 PM
I read this more than once and it got better and better as I went along. You've got a winning entry here, Andrea. I'm rooting for you. :-)
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June 15, 2011 at 1:54 PM
Great description of the happiness Joy brought to her parents' lives. Very good tetractys and by far the longest, most detailed entry I've seen. Good luck in the contest. Love, Carolyn
Brown Avatar
June 15, 2011 at 11:39 AM
We have so many amazing writers here at PoetrySoup and I enjoy reading all the poems. I am happy your poetry was among the poems I was able to read today Andrea. Please continue to write and share your poetry with the world. Love, Carol ~~~SUPER~~
Neels Avatar
June 15, 2011 at 7:24 AM
Wow Andrea, you sure did an awesome job with yours and I love the theme you chose ;) love Wilma
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