Sea Glass-POTD

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Walking along the beach's sandy shore, 
I witnessed the ocean's mighty roar. 
Sea weeds with seashells and sea glass, a tangled mess, 
Hiding a treasure, a glass bottle's caress. 
 
Within its confines, a time capsule's plea, 
An 80-year-old message, a desperate decree. 
A sender's hope, that we'd survive, 
The ravages of war, and truly thrive. 
 
Smooth and colorful, like fragments of dreams, 
Sea glass pieces, like jewels it seems. 
Emerald green and sapphire, sparkling with delight 
A testament to love, on a romantic night. 
 
Perhaps a couple, once shared a toast, 
Their glasses tossed, a memory engrossed. 
For future romantics, a token to keep, 
A symbol of love, forever to reap. 
 
The sea glass's glitter, it never waned, 
I brought some home, my lover's heart sustained. 
A token of forever, a love so true, 
Sea glass, a metaphor for me and you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 7/14/2024 11:13:00 PM
Jay, beautiful poem and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor, Constance
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Date: 7/14/2024 10:05:00 PM
Lovely writing. Congrats on POTD. God bless you, love, Gina
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Date: 7/14/2024 8:14:00 PM
Congrats to you on your POTD. It was a showing poem and that made it fantastic.
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Date: 7/14/2024 8:08:00 PM
Hi Jay ji, back to your poem with Congratulations on your well deserved POTD
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Date: 7/14/2024 4:50:00 PM
' Sea glass, a metaphor for me and you. ' ( A symbol of love. ) Your thoughts are beautiful, tender and emotional, all at the same time. Congratulations Jay, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 7/14/2024 4:18:00 PM
Very nice, Jay! Congratulations!
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Date: 7/14/2024 3:04:00 PM
Beautifully written, Jay. Congratulations on Poem of the Day!
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Date: 7/14/2024 1:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD Jay Narain!
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Date: 7/14/2024 12:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your metaphoric POTD, Jay. So happy to see you receive this honor. Blessings!
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Date: 7/14/2024 11:28:00 AM
Hello Jay, a beautiful poem. Congratulations on your POTD. Enjoy your special day. My friend. /Darlene/
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Date: 7/14/2024 11:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Sea Glass" write. I found some one time on a beach. So pretty... "Good Luck"  Have a great day with your win.........................
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Date: 7/14/2024 10:23:00 AM
Hi, Jay, the beaches of the islands do bear some form of magical ambiance, alas au compere, a delightful picturesques magical performance of words do entertain, compliments to your POTD my friend, Aloha William
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Date: 7/14/2024 8:30:00 AM
Hello Jay! What a wonderful message and the glimmer of romance and peace. I can see why this is the POTD! Excellent and Congatulations! Blessings my Friend, Daniel
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Date: 7/14/2024 7:59:00 AM
Congrats on your POTD! Great poem.
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Date: 7/14/2024 4:48:00 AM
A delightful poem! I love “ Smooth and colorful, like fragments of dreams, Sea glass pieces, like jewels it seems. Emerald green and sapphire, sparkling with delight A testament to love, on a romantic night.” Congratulations on your potd honor!
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Date: 7/14/2024 4:36:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD Jay…..lovely to see you and your lovely poem in the limelight! Debx
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Date: 7/14/2024 2:25:00 AM
A poem of beauty and mystery. Congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 7/14/2024 12:41:00 AM
A brilliant, delicate write, Jay ~ simply sublime. Warmest congratulations on POTD
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Date: 7/12/2024 10:28:00 PM
This is such a lovely poem, dear Jay Ji Around the sea glasses, how many romantic thoughts you have woven! Into my FAVE
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Date: 7/12/2024 11:24:00 AM
So very beautiful Jay….wonderful imagery my friend!! Debx
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