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Best Underwhelming Poems


A Moment's Difference
 free verse with poetic device
                
Having just disembarked from a date with death
on the water, time’s gateway forked for a moment.
Was it the mere dropping of an oar?
or perhaps...

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Categories: underwhelming, 11th grade, adventure, death,
Form: Free verse
The Skeleton That Was Me
the skeleton that was me
i remember him well
sweating in the port-a-john 
wondering what went wrong

the skeleton that was me
i remember him well
walking the shaky leg walk
to any type of water fountain

the skeleton that was me
i remember him well
looking at everything yellow
at the mere attempt the...

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© Marty King  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: underwhelming, growth, memory, recovery from,
Form: Free verse
The Forest
The Forest

The forest never 
asks where it is
it always knows the way
be like the forest
You'll find me in the forest 
Beneath the silver birch tree
With ribs in weaves of primrose
And stomach in knots of heather
What beauty today
In a land such as this,
Spinning blue skies
Dizzy from...

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Categories: underwhelming, adventure, freedom, friendship, peace,
Form: Free verse

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry



Disability
The feelings aren’t healing,
Discontent continues wheeling,
The outer skin of my patience desires to find its true meaning,
My heart is causing friction,
The inabilities need fixing before time runs out,
The pressures of being the one,
The man,
The one man that can oversee the potential growth
and harvest it seeds,
The...

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© Remi Stan  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: underwhelming, conflict, depression, emotions, pain,
Form: Free verse
The Men's Club
There's a secret men's club,
Of men at the pub,
We are men, we drink beer,
Loud laughter over here,
Slap shoulders, cheers,
We are men, we drink beer,
Bring that barmaid over here,
Let's drink beer, cheers,
Loud laughs and leers,
"I'll give you one, my dear!"
Men laugh, say,"Hear, hear!"
Chicks walk by smiling,
What...

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Categories: underwhelming, drink, humorous, men,
Form: Free verse
Premium Member Feeling Lonely - Question Mark
Does your loneliness seem hopeless
Is your nearest friend too far
Is your self-love close to empty
Your night sky without a star?

Do you know life’s question’s answers
Does your crystal ball shine clear
Does the path ahead show promise
Does your sleep come without fear?

Do you leave life’s banquet sated
Do...

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Categories: underwhelming, life, loneliness,
Form: Rhyme



The Carpenter
When I'm pining for the power to yield
Breaking all the branches I seize
Acres for the taking in a forest of mistakes
I can't see for the trees

I level
With the shallow playing field
Dreaming up a blueprint to floor you
Delicately drafting
Inconspicuously crafting
The grand facade before you

Where my art...

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Categories: underwhelming, art, work,
Form: Verse
Second Skin
By Laura Dee Battle
January 23, 2015

Distantly it seems to fade into the sunset 
All those life or death situations now seem underwhelming 
The online battle cries used to feel like such a threat 
Why do I buy the very things their oppression is selling?

It's starting...

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© Laura Dee  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: underwhelming, confusion, morning, nature,
Form: Rhyme
Visual Stimulations
In this moment
Of sheer damned damage
I grasp it
As if I owned it
It's devasting tragedy
It's underwhelming overture
A symphony of sadness
Bringing a drabness 
To a whole new light

For your eyes
Enter surprise 
Everytime an Eden dies
Paradise is lost
As the look upon
Your bewildered face

A well known man
Prospered today
By throwing...

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© Bj Fard  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: underwhelming, adventure, art, depression, fantasy,
Form: Free verse
Premium Member Consuming Compassion
Natural compassion,
like unnatural hate,
is left hemisphere teachable
and right hemisphere contagious.

Perhaps also like hate
(fortunately I know less about this 
journey in misfortune)
compassion cannot mature
through merely didactic reasoning,
words,
thoughts
devoid of healthy/pathological
safe/danger
anticipation/anxious feelings

Positive communication experience
commitment
predicts healthy integrity

Nurturing
and nutritional support

Nature's cooperative respite
into nondualistic yet spirited peace,
resonantly non-anxious safety
breathing light in
and...

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Categories: underwhelming, appreciation, culture, earth, health,
Form: Political Verse
The Empty Filled Cup
THE EMPTY FILLED CUP

Ever felt a vacuum despite the fact you fill-up others?
But how can you fill up other "cups" if your cup is empty?
Can an empty cup fill-up another cup?
But if you're actually filling other cups, 
Is it possible to say you feel empty?
Self-sufficiency,...

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Categories: underwhelming, 1st grade, how i
Form: Sonnet
Premium Member No One Duller
Mr. Robert Mueller
There's no man duller
   Even the Dems are ready to bludgeon
   This underwhelming -- curmudgeon...

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Categories: underwhelming, character, crush,
Form: Clerihew
Premium Member Reweaving Reconnections
It seems unlikely
Left Hemisphere's
Either 100% Positive-On 
Or 0% Negative-Dormant circuitry

Could change
toward polypolarizing
Right Hemisphere's
Both Full
And NonZero Empty
CoPassion
And Silent Soul feelings

Devoid of unilaterally dissonant monoculturalism,
monotheistic judging voices,
depressing anthro-supremacism,
predicating overwhelming chaos,
underwhelming complexity
of unnatural lose-Me/lose-We despair
for fading
formerly healthy memories
of ecosystemic robust climates

For our already wounded children
and their affective climates
of...

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Categories: underwhelming, health, integrity, mountains, power,
Form: Political Verse
Premium Member Powers of Integrity
Integrity can feel overwhelming
when compared to underwhelming 
disintegration

Nascent powers of joy/sorrow-full integrity
have emerged perhaps too late in
full and emptying life,
which feels sad,
at best bitterly happy
to take so long
to move from wounded child
into integral binomials

Like thinking universally
feels happily unitarian,
and global consciousness
grows interdependently intersectional
even balancing mono/poly-theistic 
ego/ecosystemically...

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Categories: underwhelming, appreciation, culture, health, passion,
Form: Parallelismus Membrorum
Premium Member Dear Nationalist Republicans
I'm worried
you have over valued
your favorite deceptively entertaining 
disformed
dis-eased commodity,

DisInformation's strategic value
and disvalue
and misvalue
depreciatively revaluated
against long-term resonant
and resilient democratic constitutional
win/win eco-political wealth
of USA patriotic empowerment
for resilient health and safety ecosystems

Not Nationalist Republican
accurately
or acutely
or ecologically
or therapeutically co-related
with polycultural WholeEarth InterFaith Wisdom

BiCameral Out-InFlowNation
multi-contemplative
poli-conservational healthy wealth
enlightened 
informed short-...

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Categories: underwhelming, bullying, conflict, health, integrity,
Form: Political Verse

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry