See

See the impacted eyes, heavy
and the frozen heart, begging
to be released; the tongue
dry, but the cheeks like a flume.
See the round table keep things
close to their chest, lest they spill
the fragility, each glass fragment
that stabs, glues together like
a madman’s vase, complete
with a bouquet of black roses.

Indecent the descent of disheartening;
refusal to believe in uncoupling;
what a crap shoot, show, expletive.

See touch, the tangible eyedropper,
mike drop, warm shawl; a momentary
squeeze of a lemon. Lies go down the drain -
momentarily, mightily, momentously;
bubbling up as a panacea when drained
of all kith and kin; their comfort
and understanding underwhelming,
often pitiful, a pittance. what is needful

is others likewise in a sinking boat,
keeping one another just above
the water line; bailing out each
other’s pain; finding camaraderie
in the breaking; the flowers in the vase
turn dark blue and purple - deep.

See the healing begin, for some.
Some run, some squeeze the lemon,
some rely on the lies. See the death mask
tremble, then a phantom’s half;
never quite whole but jewels
replace the wizened half.

See the pain, the cuts, and crimson eyes.
Don’t become a master of disguise.
See the help, the forest through the trees,
remember your honeybees
given to eternity; find them in the honeycomb.
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Date: 8/30/2025 6:43:00 PM
Absolutely a fav from me, dear Kim. What emotion and power. and yes, hope! <3 Hugsss
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Date: 8/30/2025 3:19:00 PM
A FAV for my list for this wonderful dramatic, Free Verse poem, Kim. Reminds me of when I wrote my thoughts Running free series. Engaging and full of thought-provoking dialog, my friend. I enjoy the poems you write when you let loose and write with passion like this dramatic poem is written. Write On! Bill
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/30/2025 3:42:00 PM
thank you for saving, Bill! I’m so glad you like this one.
Date: 8/29/2025 11:08:00 PM
"See the help, the forest through the trees, remember your honeybees given to eternity; find them in the honeycomb." -- what you see, listen to, associate with one is -- or will become. Gravity toward the good...and life will change for the better. Valuable poem.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/30/2025 3:42:00 PM
Thank you, Joe!
Date: 8/28/2025 4:59:00 PM
a beautifully constructed poem, Kim! I read it a couple of times to relish the imagery and the message, especially in the last five lines! Well penned, hugs, Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/28/2025 7:30:00 PM
Thank you, Sara!
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