Best Shooting Poems


Premium Member Shooting Stars

A spectacular show enlightens heavens above
In ephemeral musings of burning meteoroids
Mimicking likeness of falling ornamental stars--
Beaming streaks of rainbow-colors earthbound,

When earth crosses trajectory of comet's path
Encountering in its way pebbles of cosmic rock
Colliding, illuminating in orbital trespass,

Elements of iron, copper, magnesium, silicone
Glittering within spectra of kaleidoscopic astral art;

Streaming down rockets of blazing stars--
Tinted meteor-showers flaunting nature's panorama
Fixating sights upward where constellations are,

In idyllic August venue gazing ashen sky
Exhilarated witnessing magical phenomenon;

Mesmerizing predawn with seductive stagecraft
Premiering its play slyly when moon's hiding out
And sun's yet to commence ascending golden arc.

August 15, 2019
Placed 2nd: Shooting stars poetry contest
Sponsor: Nayda Ivette Negron
Placed 3rd: Strand select N contest by Brian Strand
Form: Verse

Premium Member Soulful Journey of Shooting Stars

They soar through space-scapes of
divine milky whorls and blue halos;
incandescent dandelion wishes
blown across nocturnal fields -
illuminating the imaginative expanse 

between eternities of cosmic dark ages and light years
are fiery pixies burning holes through obscurity
with passionate gold dust gilding awe -

souls arising fulfill their destinies


Susan Ashley 
August 13, 2019

Shooting Star

shooting star---
once again I forget
my wish
© Kash Poet  Create an image from this poem.
Form: Haiku


Premium Member Dare a Heart

To meet a woman such as you,
should've been shooting stars.
So it was in days of old..
let it be so again.

To feel your touch, hold your hand..
should've been Sonnets.
Endless flowing words,
sprouting forth a lover's pen.

Hard to resist when you say come hither,
you know I always would.
Melted long past the days of summer,
little heart mine, that dared it could. 

Countenance hidden deep in soft eyes, 
I long to find the meaning.
Strong-willed flavors of love, all mine..
leave bare my heart and soul entreating.

Premium Member Interview with a Shooting Star

When the night is filled with questions,
and the sky is a jeweled blanket,
I sit on the deck of my water room,
listening to the waves flirt with stillness,
and the breeze ~ caressing the green of palm leaves ~ 
in an island of romance, where the heart sings
in sync with the music of nature.

In all that quietness, I see a flying star,
a flicker of golden sparks across the horizon,
and I let my eyes rest , as I breathe unwritten questions...

~ O shooting star, must I wait another fortnight
to catch a glimpse of your blazing bliss?

You need not wait, my shadow stays with you, when the world grows cold and distant..

But am I the only one, healing and hurting, 
placing empty promises on your ephemeral essence?

O beloved dreamer, you are not the only one.
But in your thoughts, I hear an aching poem.

How do you see, when the faces I knew, forgot to trace beyond softened smiles? 

I am just a meteoroid, leaving a streak of sizzling light ~ 
I am no wish-maker, but a fragment of divinity, a design of Almighty's grace. 

Ah, and in you I see my muse, prompting me to write.
I wonder: why do I not see you in daylight, when the sun sits on its throne? 

To see me when all is dark
is like hope sailing in a heaven-sent odyssey.
Lord knows why your silence calls to me~ 
as if I were a sign of faith…

They say you are anything but a star~ 
dust and rock, dancing through the air.
Is that true, O glorious glow? 

I am everything a dreamer would dream of.
For you, I will be your rhyme and metaphor,
penned within purple pages~ 
a riddle the ones who do not feel
can never truly comprehend…

 Thank you, perhaps , it is in your neon afterglow,
       I will thrive as the silhouette of a shooting star...

Premium Member Shooting Stars

Life is fleeting. And if you’re ever distressed, cast your eyes to the Summer sky when the stars are strung across the velvety night. And when a shooting star streaks through the blackness, turning night into day...make a wish and think of me.

                                                     Robin Williams as Jack Powell
                                                             in movie “Hook”


SHOOTING STARS

bright and beautiful 
  fizzling
         out of time
swooshing
  screaming
      dreaming
wishing
  upon
aching in one’s heart
    pocketing not the demise
but all the surprise
  memories bright and beautiful 
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   o  * H
     o   * O
       t     * O
         i       * T 
           n       * I 
             g        * N
                s        * G
                  t          * S
                    a          * T
                      r            * A
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8/14/2019
Shooting Stars Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Nayda Ivette Negron
Form: Verse


Premium Member Shooting Star

Voice: Jason Williams

STARS IN THE SKY 

I'm standing on the shore and high above
The roar of waves and rustling of the trees,
A light is shining in the darkening sky,
While sun is drowning in its warmest glow.

I look up waiting for the one to show,
Its magic glow will warm my frozen heart.
That special light that sun nor moon can bring.
A sparkle jumping to my inner self.

I aim my wish up high and from my chest
My heart pleads to my shooting star above:
"Lift me up high and make me see from far
How you reach out and set my being free."

My white star softly strokes my hair and smiles,
While from his hands the moondust spreads around.
My bright star lifts the darkness from my soul,
In several myriad coloured specs of light.

And in his hands I beam and come alive,
Accept the dark night just for what it is:
A blanket, warm, to keep the light inside,
Embracing starlight deep within myself.

***

8th place in contest: Shooting blank verse
Sponsor: John Lawless

Shooting Star

Tumbling randomly without any semblance of grace
Without any companion or a familiar face
No path to tread, no orbit to trace
Just a nameless rock, in the cold infinite space

The distances are large and encounters few
Constant darkness, never a soothing hue
Fear and desolation seem to be my only friends
As I fly through space that has no end

From a great distance I see your light
Burning brightly and I exert with all my might
To turn towards what could be my first sight
Of a world without darkness and fright

Being alone in space leaves me free
Free to make decisions, free to be me
But would I like to be alone, make it my destiny
Or should I be pulled by the love of gravity

But it is tough to resist the allure of light
And I make my decision, hoping it is right
I fly towards you, feeling no remorse
And I feel the pleasure of you pulling me close

I am happy that your love I feel
And I approach you with a lot of zeal
Knowing that my loneliness you will heal
Although your love, my fate it will seal

I feel pain as your love tears me apart
I start to burn, but in my heart
I feel love, in every recess small
It's better to have felt love, than not have known it at all

Premium Member Shooting Stars

Meteors

zipline across

night skies

from outer space

disintegrating

on entry

to Earth's

atmosphere,

sparking

and blazing

bright streaks of 

fiery fragments that

in the blink of an eye,

morph

into shooting stars.


(Yalto)


08,15,2019
Shooting Stars Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Nayda Ivette Negron
Form: Verse

Premium Member We Are Like the Shooting Stars

We are like the shooting stars
Underneath God’s sun.
Speeding down our own life paths
Till our time is done.

Numberless, like bits of dust,
Moving through our space,
All so different, yet alike
In the human race.

Infants first; then life heats up
And we show a glow.
Growing old, we then burn down.
Swiftly our lives go!

Some of us are just plain white.
Some have special hue.
Special ones are yellow, green,
Orange, red or blue.

Few, for good or bad, crash down,
And they’ll always be
Meteorites we recall
Throughout history.

Not remembered always on
Pages of our books,
Are the stars at whom we take
Fondest second looks.

Fireballs, they will burn down too,
But the light they give
Shines the brightest. May we all
As bright fireballs live!
Form: Quatrain

Shooting Stars of Awe

I have always known, 
I was a slender 
pale vein beating
in the throat of the earth
feathering at its nape,
and that I was rarely
noticed


but the hand of a god 
was rested on the pulse 
of me and a speck of dust
has been anointed by his hand


the Snow globe of winter 
cracked open 
as incandescent fingers 
of light dropped through, 
I knew then
this was a day 
unlike any another


I was in 
the thrall of madness 
the last time 
I felt the eyes of a god 
rest on me


but now I’ve been touched


Is this the madness 
of divinity 
or a reality in awe?


I don’t care, anymore, 
this speck of dust
has now been mapped 
by the hand of a god


and in his heart 
there is a place 
ever waiting my return


this simple speck 
has found a home in heaven


kissed by the stars

Premium Member Shooting Stars

Why
are there
stars in heaven above
annoying pinpricks in the firmament?
No need for black holes if all stars were shot on sight.
The reach for the stars is hopeless they are so far away we can never visit them.
Knowing the vastness of the universe belittles and demeans us to insignificance.
We would all feel a lot better, sleep a lot better, if stars were switched off.
Like city lights, stars glare, twinkle, flash so bright all night
that we cannot sleep, and shut shutters are so stifling.
If no stars shone, we could leave the curtains open.
Better not to know what may be out there
when aliens may be coming to get us
Celestial abstinence and solitude
is what we all cherish.
Let us hold a vote.
Raise your hands
if you want
all the stars
switched
to off;
stars
shot.

The Grace of a Shooting Star

They asked me to go 
To the hills, oceans, valleys and deep steeps 
To see the beauty of danger 
The mighty of height 
The glory of width 
So that I may sing from the bottom soul 
Or may write from the depth of my understanding 
Their suggestion is very welcome 
But very annoyed to reply them that in my heart i have a bird 
It sings all the time from the top of a hill 
For the whole humanity living in the valleys and plains  
It dives into the womb of an unfathomable ocean 
To fetch gems and pearls till untouched 
In doing so all the above 
I many times fall as a climber falls in a steep 
I know the gorges and their networks of trap 
Bog is not unknown to me too 
Many times I slip into its web 
And you might go to wonder and express aw 
Knowing that all these lie all time in front of my poetic eyes 
Realised in the heart and expressed though the mind 
In my soul i hold the whole cosmos 
And its untold sorrow and pain 
I go through every moment in my veins 
Yet I play the string and with the music I dance like a peacock 
Laugh like a child, blow and flow like the river and like the wind 
No ill for any one,
 No time i have to execute the role of a devil 
No, i am not a sage, not a saint
I know not all, i am not a fake 
I am genuine with human blood and flesh 
Yet i keep my thought falling like a fountain 
Pure white and chaste 
By carving the basic instincts lust greed and the lure of telling lies 
I bent like a rainbow when the urge of wanton wanting comes up 
Without any bias and prejudice 
Right and wrong I judge 
True and false I decide with the rays of the sun 
With the serene beauty of the moon I distinguish
 Between the race of man and the race of dogs  
And I do all the things I mention above 
With the help of love I get from the waves while kissing shores 
And keep riding with the pride of a tip facing harshness 
With a consciousness of a hill 
I wish not to lose justness 
Even if, I fall from a cliff 
As I find grace in a star while shooting 
And glory in the height of rain drops while falling.

Premium Member Little Texans Heaven Bound


Into your arms, we raise our lovely children lost!
The innocent ones, that we raised and you created...
Killed by a soul-less madman,may his judgement 
be swift!

Forgive us, for we are horrendous killers, too!
We the conscience-less, we killed far more unborn 
today.
Seven hundred, who will never see the light of day?


Our selfishness is absolutely unconscionable !
But we care not for your word, only our selfish wants.
We cry for elephants, but a child’s death means but 
naught to us.

We are led by crackpots who shake hands with the air??
And, yes, these very same, smilingly, support infanticide.
And we are lied to, in the name of political power.

No gun has feet or hands, an insult to human thought.
But dead bodies, Lord, are gold to the politically inept!
When their political power, thirsts for tragedy, from a 
well deserved, selfish drought.

Death and Satan, today, doing a most joyful dance!
For now..here is power’s golden chance.
To create fear, the falsehood that guns kill.

Guns are not human beings,only a human pulls the 
trigger.
In the Judaea- Christian Bible, writ for us, it states:
“Thou shalt not kill”

Here on your planet, tyrants, for that is who they are..
Want to take all guns away,that won’t change our loss 
today.
But when tyrants own all guns, they will turn them upon
us, to them, absolute power loves absolute fun!

Do turn this Spring day, the deepest, ebony, black!
Till we start turning our backs on lies and slaughtering the 
unborn, so plentiful.
And come back to you; and till then, we are most sinful,
lost and utterly pitiful.

A special place for the beautiful teachers, killed,I do 
beseech thee.
They, like you, Lord, loved children at their knee.
Alas, special people taken in May, help us heal, Lord?
Of this, I fervently do pray!

5/24/2022

Premium Member Chasing Shooting Stars

chasing shooting stars
wandering the galaxy
gold dust at my feet



AP: Honorable Mention 2020, Honorable Mention 2025

Submitted on February 27, 2018 for contest HAIKU sponsored by DEBORAH BEACHBOARD

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