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When the night is filled with questions, and the sky is a jeweled blanket, I sit on the deck of my water room, listening to the waves flirt with stillness, and the breeze ~ caressing the green of palm leaves ~ in an island of romance, where the heart sings in sync with the music of nature. In all that quietness, I see a flying star, a flicker of golden sparks across the horizon, and I let my eyes rest , as I breathe unwritten questions... ~ O shooting star, must I wait another fortnight to catch a glimpse of your blazing bliss? You need not wait, my shadow stays with you, when the world grows cold and distant.. But am I the only one, healing and hurting, placing empty promises on your ephemeral essence? O beloved dreamer, you are not the only one. But in your thoughts, I hear an aching poem. How do you see, when the faces I knew, forgot to trace beyond softened smiles? I am just a meteoroid, leaving a streak of sizzling light ~ I am no wish-maker, but a fragment of divinity, a design of Almighty's grace. Ah, and in you I see my muse, prompting me to write. I wonder: why do I not see you in daylight, when the sun sits on its throne? To see me when all is dark is like hope sailing in a heaven-sent odyssey. Lord knows why your silence calls to me~ as if I were a sign of faith… They say you are anything but a star~ dust and rock, dancing through the air. Is that true, O glorious glow? I am everything a dreamer would dream of. For you, I will be your rhyme and metaphor, penned within purple pages~ a riddle the ones who do not feel can never truly comprehend… Thank you, perhaps , it is in your neon afterglow, I will thrive as the silhouette of a shooting star...

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Date: 5/8/2025 9:08:00 PM
What a marvelous write! I love that you’ve chosen to have this conversation with a celestial object … so much wonderful imagery and introspection revealed, and you attached empathy and understanding to both sides! Really enjoyed this so much! I have an older one about a similar subject (“On Such Divine Evenings”) that I’ve thought many times deserves an update - this has inspired me. Thank you for sharing - this was a joyous romp! :o) <3
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Date: 5/8/2025 11:26:00 PM
Dear Greg, what an honor to receive your feedback on a poem of mine! Thank you so much for taking time to read this quick write. It is inspired by a prompt here on soup, a contest maybe you might want to try. Thank you again! So very much! In beyond grateful, sending you light always
Date: 5/8/2025 1:49:00 PM
Gorgeous in every way. Yes, a glimmer of shining hope in a darkened sky. Wouldn't it be nice to see one every night?
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Date: 5/8/2025 11:40:00 PM
Thank you so much, it was a very quick write and iv seen so many shooting stars, they always somehow give me hope! Grateful for your kind support truly
Date: 5/8/2025 6:32:00 AM
Dear Empress, Oh how your words wrap the night in wonder and longing-the jeweled sky, the waves, the questions only stars can answer. I love the hope and vulnerability that even fleeting meteors leave lasting trails. It is true we are never truly alone. Empress, you are the light that lingers with a gentle promise that every dreamer’s ache is seen and cherished Fav. Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 5/8/2025 11:56:00 PM
Thank you so very much dear daniel, i appreciate always your kindness and support! Sending you light always
Date: 5/7/2025 11:34:00 PM
Love “jeweled blanket…” The imagery is incredible….beautifully written as I enjoyed reading it aloud.
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Date: 5/8/2025 11:57:00 PM
Thank you so very much i am really grateful for your kind and generous support
Date: 5/7/2025 11:05:00 PM
O shooting star, must I wait another fortnight to catch a glimpse of your blazing bliss? I felt this line .
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Date: 5/8/2025 11:58:00 PM
Thank you twinszy! Always grateful
Date: 5/7/2025 7:38:00 PM
"Lord knows why your silence calls to me, as if I were a sign of faith...I will thrive as the silhouette of a shooting star." That's pretty magic Poetess. This poetic dialogue possesses a beautiful balance...J.A.B.
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Date: 5/7/2025 5:34:00 PM
wonderful poem indeed, the title is great, the ideas are impressive, one of my faves have a nice week end poet
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Date: 5/7/2025 4:55:00 PM
Ink this is glorious. So beautiful and thoughtful. A big fave for me I think it will place very high
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Date: 5/7/2025 1:18:00 PM
"To see me when all is dark is like hope sailing in a heaven-sent odyssey." WOW. That's a beautiful, beautiful thought. " silhouette of a shooting star"- <3
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Date: 5/7/2025 11:48:00 AM
A conversation with a shooting star. Even describing it as mere dust and rock, you glorify it as an "ephemeral essence," prompting you to write as if it were a muse. You pay homage to it as you become its silhouette. Sentimental and motivative writing, Ink.
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Date: 5/8/2025 11:59:00 PM
Thank you so much for reading and leaving your sincere thoughts, im always grateful for your kind support truly dear linnersz. Sending you light always
Date: 5/7/2025 11:37:00 AM
Sighing! …and the question you ask, though even if true, you are looking for more…something ethereal, yet something to hang onto!
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Date: 5/8/2025 8:10:00 AM
Thank you so much for feeling the poen. Appreciate your kind support always
Date: 5/7/2025 11:33:00 AM
Fantastic poem, my dearest poetess friend Ink. It focuses on the interplay of desire, dreams, and the quest for meaning amid the fleeting aspect of life. The topic also explores themes of love, desire, and the relationship between the dreamer and the universe, with heavenly images representing hope and inspiration. You struggle with feelings of solitude and desire, but eventually find peace in the knowledge that they are not alone in their emotions. Your word choice in the poem is rich, evocative, and profound, with images and analogies that generate a strong feeling of location and emotion. The words "jeweled blanket," "flicker of golden sparkles," and "sizzling light" convey beauty and transience, whereas "I am simply a meteoroid" conveys both insignificance and distinctiveness. Good luck in the contest, and many pleasant waves to you.
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Date: 5/8/2025 8:06:00 AM
Thank you so much dr sotto i appreciate your kind and generous support always
Date: 5/7/2025 10:52:00 AM
Cute!
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Date: 5/7/2025 10:56:00 AM
Awwn thank you dear DD

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