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Shooting Star

shooting star---
once again I forget
my wish

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Debbie Guzzi

December 1, 2012 at 5:59 PM

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Cynthia Alvez

August 20, 2012 at 1:32 PM

Wonderful in thought! AH! I love Haiku poetry! Cynthia

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

August 16, 2012 at 5:01 PM

Congrats on your win, Kash! I would say your man who has all he needs...love and blessings :))

Poet Destroyer A

August 15, 2012 at 11:22 PM

Kash ;-)), Congratulations in Brian's CONTEST NO 196. enjoyed stopping by *luv~PD

Andrea Dietrich

August 15, 2012 at 8:01 PM

I would say you are one of the stars that has a hue, perhaps blue??

Carol Sunshine Brown

August 15, 2012 at 5:18 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's "#196" contest Kash.

Nette Onclaud

August 14, 2012 at 3:48 AM

alllright by me, kashi... sweet congrats over at brian's ..:) huggs!

Andrea Dietrich

August 13, 2012 at 7:56 PM

I'm so glad Brian saw the genius of this one. Congrats. I have failed three times in a row now with his contests. I'm on a roll hahaha

Lee Ramage

August 13, 2012 at 7:26 PM

Great poem, had a chuckle because I forget everything. Well done and congratulations on your win. Lee

Joann Grisetti

August 13, 2012 at 1:32 PM

Congratulations.

James Marshall Goff

August 13, 2012 at 5:12 AM

humanity happens....nice! congrats Kash

David Williams

August 13, 2012 at 2:25 AM

kash, congrats on your win with this excellent entree...David

Poet Destroyer A

August 13, 2012 at 1:20 AM

Kash, congratulations in Brian Strand's contest.. take care....xox~ PD

Sara Kendrick

August 10, 2012 at 8:12 AM

Great one..I got a chuckle..Many can relate to that..Thanks for the uplifting review of my work..Sara

Len Gasun

August 10, 2012 at 5:29 AM

Shooting star does fall so fast. I love your Haiku! I wish you the best and luck in the contest, Kash.

Andrea Dietrich

August 9, 2012 at 7:42 PM

FAVE

Andrea Dietrich

August 9, 2012 at 7:41 PM

This is AWESOME, Kashinath. wow, you are getting really clever with these!! One little thing. I would make the sentence division in a different part: once again. . . I forget my wish. But I guess it makes no difference!

Joseph May

August 9, 2012 at 3:48 PM

nice haiku Kash....enjoyed...Joseph

Russell Sivey

August 9, 2012 at 3:17 PM

This is simply a wonderful write my friend! I just love this poem, a powerful depth brought upon by simplicity! A very grandiose piece Kashi! Great Work!!

Joann Grisetti

August 9, 2012 at 2:47 PM

I like the simplicity of this haiku, and the depth.

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