We Are Like the Shooting Stars

We are like the shooting stars
Underneath God’s sun.
Speeding down our own life paths
Till our time is done.

Numberless, like bits of dust,
Moving through our space,
All so different, yet alike
In the human race.

Infants first; then life heats up
And we show a glow.
Growing old, we then burn down.
Swiftly our lives go!

Some of us are just plain white.
Some have special hue.
Special ones are yellow, green,
Orange, red or blue.

Few, for good or bad, crash down,
And they’ll always be
Meteorites we recall
Throughout history.

Not remembered always on
Pages of our books,
Are the stars at whom we take
Fondest second looks.

Fireballs, they will burn down too,
But the light they give
Shines the brightest. May we all
As bright fireballs live!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Davis Avatar
June 20, 2014 at 8:58 AM
Andrea This is so descriptive and wonderfully said. Everyone needs to shine bright and hot. Thank you for the awesome comment on my January poem.
Cavanaugh Avatar
September 3, 2012 at 6:48 PM
I love this poem. What a beautiful tapestry you weave.
Cavanaugh Avatar
September 3, 2012 at 6:47 PM
I love this poem. What a beautiful tapestry you weave.
Babcock Avatar
August 28, 2012 at 3:34 PM
Love this poem as you know space and stars and meteors catch my interest. baby is sleeping so thought I could catch up on a few poems. He was sick all last week with a rash and fever and they came home on the weekend and now I am back here and they are coming down again this weekend so no rest. love phyl
Guzzi Avatar
August 22, 2012 at 6:08 PM
Nice original take on the theme! GO Andie! Congrad's on this winning write. Light & love
Johnson Avatar
August 22, 2012 at 4:19 PM
Shine on little poetry star, your up among the best. The sparks are flying from your pen whether serious or jest. I see congratulations is once again in store. For the princess of the poetry soup who we've come to adore. :)
Dietrich Avatar
August 22, 2012 at 4:29 PM
you are too kind. I am certainly no princess but that would sure have its perks!!!
Gooden Avatar
August 22, 2012 at 6:23 AM
Congratulations Andrea on this beautiful win. Enjoyed.
Kendrick Avatar
August 21, 2012 at 3:23 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Great comparison..Sara
Grisetti Avatar
August 21, 2012 at 3:17 PM
A great allegory. Congratulations on winning in the contest.
Liwayway Avatar
August 21, 2012 at 10:32 AM
You deserve to win!!! Congratulations Andrea!! (^_^) **Mary**
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
August 21, 2012 at 8:11 AM
Many congratulations on your win Andy xx
Brown Avatar
August 21, 2012 at 5:47 AM
Congratulations on your win in Tirzah's "Shooting Stars" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
Horsman Avatar
August 21, 2012 at 4:07 AM
congrats Andrea, loved this from the start.
Williams Avatar
August 21, 2012 at 3:27 AM
Andrea I love the idea of living as a fireball. big congrats on your win....David
Beck Avatar
August 21, 2012 at 2:42 AM
You've produced a beautiful allegory with excellent language here Andrea....well deserving of the high placing ....congratulations and my best wishes as always
Beck Avatar
August 21, 2012 at 2:40 AM
you have produced a wonderful allegory and beautiful language, well deserving of a high place...great job Andrea....best wishes Syd
Onclaud Avatar
August 21, 2012 at 2:22 AM
a very personal, glorious write, andie.. congrats with huggs!..:)
Arowolo Avatar
August 21, 2012 at 12:21 AM
Excellent and Wonderful write,Andrea....Your words are so true and captivating...Congratulations on your well deserved win....Ride on pal...
Gasun Avatar
August 20, 2012 at 7:55 PM
Congratulations on your BIG WIN again, Andrea!
May Avatar
August 20, 2012 at 2:46 PM
congrats on your super win Andrea
Richards Avatar
August 20, 2012 at 2:24 PM
I love the comparison........indeed, we are, stars on a ride through this journey of life! Nicely done, Andrea! Congrats !!!
Conway Avatar
August 20, 2012 at 1:54 PM
Loved this poem Andrea, Congrats on your second place finish!~Tirzah~
Austin Avatar
August 18, 2012 at 1:24 PM
Great food for thought, Andrea. Those second looks are nostalgic. One remember a teacher or a neighbor that made, unbeknown at the time, a lasting, good impression on one's mind. Love, daver
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August 16, 2012 at 12:31 PM
Really a wonderful poem enjoyed to day written by my sweet friend, Andrea. Loved always, bl
Horsman Avatar
August 15, 2012 at 3:50 PM
we sure are, and you've created a wonderful unique poem here. maybe the beings on the other side of the cosmos, see us just as you describe.
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