Best Rework Poems
Cosmos ConfiguratorWhen I gaze far off into the night sky
The chaos is not pleasing to the eye.
Seems there was never an overall plan
When the beginning of time began.
I don’t mean to sound so high and mighty
But the stuff up there’s not very tidy.
Yes, there are luminous...
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Categories:
rework, fantasy, space, old, star,
Form:
Iambic Pentameter
After Christmas SighAll gift's delivered
Some few still under the tree,
Voices filled with thanks!
Children jumping with glee...
Now we sit and sigh
Making plans for the 4th of July,
And Valentine's day
Easter,
and so many more
In celebration of something,
Another Birthday for someone we adore...
There is money to be spent,
In spite of...
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Categories:
rework, holiday,
Form:
Free verse
Excerpt Number 1Time is a consumer of
lives and souls and thoughts and love
The world that once turned yesterday
has forever gone away
Was it not good, what used to be?
Was it not sweet for you and me?
Remnants of the golden past
bring tears for times that couldn't last
Photographs are sweet...
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Categories:
rework, life, memory, nostalgia,
Form:
Rhyme
As Dawn Weeps Its New FallAs Dawn Weeps Its New Fall
To the old fallen barn
where fine horses once stayed
Life spins its never ending yarn
through an old vanishing parade.
Within your rotting boards
termites eat long dead trees
Life existing in massive hordes
busy as busy honey bees.
Empty stalls, once held more
now upon wide...
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Categories:
rework, art, change, family, farm,
Form:
Rhyme
Ye Get ThisYesterday I had a short circuit
So, I just had to go sit back
And just rework it
Been writing for more
Than a week a half
Boy this download did come real fast
Yeah with the music
Man it was blast
I then had a quick reload
And hear
Clear beyond sound of one's...
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Categories:
rework, visionary,
Form:
Personification
Pluto's Dark Abode
"Pluto’s Dark Abode"
they say you can feel her
walking through you
it only happens when
the frost and mist is about
where hidden wild things
watch but make
themselves heard
in the half light
they sum you up
they are found
in darkness
they say if you stop...
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Categories:
rework, halloween, muse, mystery,
Form:
Narrative
He Brought Us MusicMany times when I would here a song, I would get an almost joyful longing, but I could never pinpoint the moment in my past that I wished for so deeply.
I would feel a certain peaceful joy, hovering just beyond my reach.
And as I stared...
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Categories:
rework, devotion, religion, christmas, longing,
Form:
Blank verse
Speech TherapySpeech therapy is awesome work
Steering communication rework
Brings many smiles
No more sighs
Strong oral motor skills
Gone are the food spills
Strengthens comprehension
Expands expression
Augments articulation
Helps word precision
Checks stammer
Eases clutter
Hones voice
Gives poise
Clear accent
Wins you compliment
Better pragmatics
Impressive social dynamics
Thanks to Speech therapy
One is made Happy
- Giridhar Ghodkar
Speech-language...
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Categories:
rework, health,
Form:
Carpe Diem
A Terrible Day At the OfficeA Terrible Day at the Office
By Elton Camp
Robert awoke feeling really fine
Soon, at work, he’d toe the line
Traffic was very heavy that day
“You’re late,” the boss did say
In his cubicle Robert took a seat
The office had but little heat
He found more reason to frown
His computer...
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Categories:
rework, angst, work, work,
Form:
Rhyme
Intentyou can write a billion lines
you can play a million songs
you can film ten-thousand hours
and never right a single wrong
you can feed a ravenous crowd
biscuits with salmon to replete
overflowing cornucopias endowed
and fill silos brimming with wheat
you can sole the bruised up feet
and clothe the bare-backed...
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Categories:
rework, inspiration, introspection, nature,
Form:
Quatrain
A Taste of Things To ComeCould our verity be any unique?
Whenever the twenty-first century is antique,
Links are the best way to deal with everything
When even the pencils will betide self-replicating,
The whole would be vastly improved
And, the fortune of the rich would be approved
Would remove those in requisite thoroughly
There will be...
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Categories:
rework, analogy, computer, confusion, creation,
Form:
Rhyme
Categories:
rework, write,
Form:
Rhyme
Childhood PoemsI leaf through a notebook,
re-reading old poems.
I cringe at the childishness,
the bare, colliding words.
"Unsalvageable",
I think to myself.
Better to bury them quickly,
before they try to get out.
New poems must be written;
the old cannot be saved.
Or can they?
Can I perhaps rework them,
reshape them into something new?
Could...
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Categories:
rework, imagination, inspirational, old, old,
Form:
Blank verse
Time Is On the Other Side Poem Reworked 27 Oct 17REWORKED 27 OCT 2017
I'm sorry I'm reposting this, I had to rework it for better meaning continuity and flow of speech.
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Time pulls life by its hand
and she's gliding along,
to see, to sense to enjoy,
proliferates with pride,
but..... it's...
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Categories:
rework, age, life, time,
Form:
Prose Poetry
Whats Comingdont tremble,rework
lsiten to the sound of steele
camp out and watch show...
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Categories:
rework, art,
Form:
Haiku