Hearts Retreat
Whenever our worlds collide
I nolonger feel so absoleat
you give me sense of pride
Make me feel so complete
Are these feelings justified
I can not help but admit defeat
This feeling that l get inside
Happiness it tastes so sweet
An emotional rollercoaster ride
Now that l am falling at your feet
Because whenever we are unified
You are my heart's retreat
cant remember original version I wrote of this but was a little
bit different this like many others trying to rework be more poetic more structure and form rather than content
Extra verse feeling a little petrerfied
But was completly knocked off my feet
I'm on this emotional rollercoasteride
It's how it feels when ever we meet
Copyright © David Scott | Year Posted 2019
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