David Scott Poet Rhyme

HeArTs ReTrEaT

  Whenever our worlds collide
   I find it so hard not to retreat
   You give me sense of pride
   When l am feeling absoleat

   Are these feelings justified
   Or should just admit defeat
   This feeling that l get inside
    Happiness it tastes so sweet

   Something l can nolonger hide
    Whenever my heart skips a beat
    Because when you are by my side
     Always makes me feel so complete



 can,t remember original version
    Rewrote in abab form like others 2020

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Suzanne Delaney December 4, 2020 at 5:23 AM Nice that your’e back,David: Interesting layout portrays a stepping forward. Best, SuZ

Laura Breidenthal September 20, 2020 at 7:26 PM This is lovely David - quite a beautiful piece and nicely structured. Really enjoyed reading. Always, Laura David Scott August 20, 2026 at 5:10 AM Thank your for your kind wordsxx

Darlene De Beaulieu September 19, 2020 at 11:56 AM Hello David Scott, you have created a lovey romantic poem. I have enjoyed this poem. xx

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri June 26, 2020 at 11:05 PM Wow superb poem, sensational and romantic in a fine light appealing way and style. Kudos. ...............----------- Plz pleez do read my newest prose and read the related data and info too further down below it in comment section or also in the short story section on site where I have uploaded it. David Scott September 19, 2020 at 12:55 AM Thank you for your kind words not been on here since last year still reworking some old writes xx

poemtheart poemtheart January 1, 2020 at 12:31 AM powerful peace to read :) keep writing & sharing.. David Scott September 19, 2020 at 12:56 AM Thank you your kind words will post some on here again soon xx