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A Rapid Impact

A breathless voice hissed from just behind the child’s
left ear,
he glanced back
to see no one there,
his mind was filled with the thought of death,
his chest heaving as he tried to catch his breath,
and as if he had been running,
his face in the mirror darkened suddenly,
his emotions would hide,
his eyes wide,
his mind flips,
then a silent vow seemed to emanate
from his tightening lips,
he feels his heart rate,
racing,
his emotions now pacing,
his sanity dissolving before his very eyes,
he then feels some inner cries,
the child stared,
unblinking at his reflection,
he feared,
then a ghost appeared,
with a flicker of poorly concealed distress
in her eyes,
“ Run!”
 Then in a second, before it was done,
it had to be fate,
because it was simply too late,
reality displayed a fact,
and the home invasion had a rapid impact.
Categories: rapid, sademotions,
Form: Dramatic Verse

Premium Member Rapid Response Turtle Team

Rapid Response Turtle Team, R2T2, is their name, saving is their game!
They’re ‘Mary River Turtles’, headquartered in a submarine, but not tame.
Forever, on call: a better bunch of blokes, you've never met, is my take.
No one ever drowns, or leaves hurt, with them here, in this our Troll Lake.

They’re days are full, with Dragon, and the Troll Lake crowd, running a muck.
Imagine how, when Dragon barbecues, his fires get out of hand, yea, that sucks!
Fire hoses and extinguishers are these blokes’, most favorite playthings of all.
They even hand out towels, if you got wet, when the fires are put out, I recall.

Not to mention how great they are when Dragon begins to hiccup or sneeze.
Or when our penguins trip and fall, like little pinballs, yep, them, they retrieve.
But it’s always worth the trouble since; they’ve become family, true and tried! 
They also teach safety and first aide classes, yes, they’re definitely, certified.

Apparently, we ALL are, here at Troll Lake, or so everyone seems to imply.
I think I know what they are getting at… And perhaps they are right! Sigh!
But the Rapid Response Turtle Team, are the best blokes, on this here earth!
As they command the hose, and it throws them all around, we fill with mirth!

It’s like riding a bucking bronco to them… but some how… the fires do go out!
They even have a medic mobile made from an old kids’ wagon, fully decked out.
Anyone, who can bring a submarine into our lake, sight unseen, can do ANYTHING!
It’s said: they’re agents sent, to protect Dragon, an endangered species. Honestly!

But, I think they’re here, to protect ‘US’ from Dragon’s, daily… dished out travails.
The Boo Boo’s he inflicts, are too numerous to count, between his fires and that tail.
They came to gain their muse, and be entertained by our daily, free for all, they say.
At night they’re guitars DO sing, merrily on, about all our crazy exploits, each day.

With pink tinted shells, and green algae Mohawks, they look like a true punk band.
And they say the submarine’s yellow, to honor some great and famous rock band.
Yes, they are a tad bit strange; but that just makes them fit in, on this, here land.
And we couldn't imagine life without them… They truly are… really, great lads!
Categories: rapid, fantasy, fun, funny, imagination,
Form: Light Verse

Premium Member Rapid Response

You think you’ve got rhyme but you’re blind
I’d go up against you any time
These here rhymes are so smooth 
people think I’m a mime
Vanilla cool collected 
I’m the definition of “sublime”
My words are complicated simple 
yet they easily intertwine
Try looking at the sun 
to escape my super shine
I burn metal to dust 
with each and every line
You want a part of this?  
Step up so you can see 
what it means to be fine!

You think with me 
these are blows we’re trading
I’m worried less I confess 
as I watch you fading 
Forget your pontificating 
feel my words erasing
Verbs nouns making sounds 
adjectives educating
The logic of me 
goes beyond debating
Drink me down like vermouth 
my words are satiating.

Things I’ve seen are mean 
but still I keep my words clean
I’m not interested in creating a scene
Yet not one to bow down 
to any King or Queen
Stronger than the tower of Pisa 
see how far I can lean
Breaking the silence barrier
and everything in between 
Watch how our worthy words careen 
I’m old fast n furious but no has-been
Inside my mind I feel like a teen

Rhyme once or twice 
or four times three 
Whatever you’ve got 
it’s no worry to me
You’re swinging on a rope of hope 
tied to the wrong tree
If that’s all you’ve got 
you might as well let it be
Even though you’re next to me
Who do you think they’ll see?
You think you sting like a Bee
But I pack a punch like Mohamed Ali
If you step back in the ring 
we can make History


I couldn’t resist, I wrote this piece after reading Nick Trim’s “Hyper Active Rhymes II”. No disrespect intended, this is all in good fun.
Categories: rapid, rap,
Form: Rhyme

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Premium Member Rapid River

Rapid river runs,
rampant, raging raucously –
Releasing rancor.
Categories: rapid, nature, river,
Form: Haiku

Rapid City (Poems From 7th Grade #3)

Rapid City, South Dakota 
I always like Fall best 
You can eat buttery pancakes 
From huge Ihop 
And Omelets 
And Toast 
And skillets 
And lots of Reese 
And Butterfingers 
And Twix
At the colorful gas station 
And listen to
Nice relaxing music 
On the hill
At the Mt. Rushmore 
And go to the Corn Palace with 
My friend Troy 
And go to the baseball game
And watch the sunset setting
Categories: rapid, childhood
Form: Free verse

Rapid Eye Movment

Will I ever find that place of relaxation
Again I'm awake, I'm completely weird
It's a bad case of sleep depravation
That’s why I'm always so dam tired

Eyes flickering, all these flashing lights
The sound of cars keep whishing on by
Clocks ticking, all these sleepless nights
If only I could get some blink in shut eye

All these thoughts rushing though my head
I need rapid eye movement, sweet lullaby’s
I suppose got to start getting myself to bed
An improvement to the bags under my eyes

I tell myself sweet dreams but their vivid
If I could only give rest to my aching bod
In and out of senses, so restless, I'm livid
If I could just for once find the land of nod




Something wanted to write about for a while
couple of verse not to happy with might update in futre
just getting some thoughts out of my head
im sure a lot of people can relate to this 
when in my ywenties did not need as much
but so much going on at times find it hard to relax
get in to that third stage of sleep 
 WRITTEN BY MY SELF DAVID SCOTTFE MARCH (2013)
INSPIERD BY ALL THE COOL SOUP MEMBERS ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

note a bit more updated better context  tweeked a little..................
Categories: rapid, write, , Lullaby,
Form: Rhyme


Premium Member There's Nothing Like a Good War

There’s Nothing Like a Good War

There’s nothing like a good war.
I watched a video of men killing men
Rapid fire, rapid death, rapid fear
When will we ever learn? Never?
It’s in our DNA and used against us
Goad a man, tell him his country needs him
Tell him, to go kill the villagers
Tell him, they deserve it. His gun needs
To by fired, it’s bullets like him are
Expendable, always more to take their place.
Nothing like a good war, a noble cause
Which has God firmly on its side
Thought up by a presidential psycho 
On his yacht on a Sunday morning
While a calm sea and fresh breeze
Tickles the blond call girl’s hair.
A moment of boredom and an
Unprovoked attack takes shape.
A couple of weeks of genocide
Watched by a paid audience
Eating from the same trough
Wishing they’d thought of it first
No, there’s nothing like a good war
A gentle genocide, a worthy cause
A mother tells her son, fight or you’ll
Go to prison, certain death is much better
She gets his boots, ten quid and a
Medal. He gets eternity. Nothing like 
A good war?

David Cox 12/06/22
© Dave Cox  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: rapid, 11th grade, 12th grade,
Form: Free verse

Life's Rapid Motion

Life is a stream that flows 
never ending 
It's waves surges towards me
 and it slowly becomes a flood 
As my emotions begin to sway 

I feel a unbearable pain 
Yet theres no one to comfort me 
Since there's nothing to gain
 Clouds gather 
the rain is falling 
Its resonance soothes my soul
 Like a unknown calling

 Was it all a dream 
Or was it another conflict revealed 
to me I must prevail 
Because? 
Is there a future 
if there is nothing to gain
Categories: rapid, confusion, growth, inspirational, loneliness,
Form: Free verse

Rapid Tongues of Flames

Your eyes are like two diamonds I fell into from far away
The steepness of them drowned me to the coolest point 
I fell and hurt myself, but kept on walking to find your heart
Like red rivers under the ice your blood flows so swiftly
It kept on growing intense under my bare frustrated feet
Which drag me deep inside to the middle of your frozen heart
That spreads the red-hot blood I once have dipped my vein into
It stung so badly, but I bared the pain for your love.	

I went too deep inside, I could feel the air beating the frozen feelings
Straight into my heart, they went and killed me with just an inhale
Right at the moment I stepped on the spot, where it used to hurt
Where I left myself, helpless, fragile, the me you knew before
Before it all ended with you dying on the floor
That we made together once, but you broke the law
To keep the ice away, far enough to pray the religion we created once 
Not twice, impossible the fragments of it were
We learnt them by heart, and we saved them from the God.
Categories: rapid, lost loveme, me,
Form:

Premium Member Rapid Eye Movement

I've ridden zebras on the Serengeti,
swam the wildest seas;
I've played golf with old Jack Benny
-brought Ali to his knees.
I've killed zombies in my bedroom,
a werewolf on the lawn
-fought vampires at the edge of doom
before the break of dawn.
I've spent the night with Marilyn,
had a beer with Gable
-watched Astaire's light-footed spin
with Ginger on my table.
I helped Howard Hughes with all his schemes
-sang with Elvis as they screamed,
but then, like life, just what it seems
-a crazy mixed up old weird dream!
Categories: rapid, dream,
Form: Rhyme

Rapid Emotions

Invadin my space, 
energy I waste?
Not even close,
to finishin this race..
met you at the finish line,
others came up to slow,
a rush of adrenaline,
only one like me would know,
I almost hung myself,
with this lace,
I use to tie my shoes,
high up in the tree's,
disappear, without a trace.
Cut me down,
I meant cut the noose,
cut the bulls***,
I meant cut you!
Off the life support,
supporting life,
stabbing myself,
while you hold the knife?
Washing hands, 
in a radioactive sink,
gettin sick of this kitchen,
time to burn it down I think.
Categories: rapid, emotions,
Form: Bio

Premium Member Rapid Urban Belt - Anacreontic Couplets

Gilt-edged first light visions greet 
zestful horde in trendy street
Luscious coffee bouncing bean
set alight a dormant scene 
Pumpkin seeds dot fresh brown toast
eager staff cool vibrant host 
Ghetto blasters rock and blare 
raucous voices split the air  
Backbeat sold on grey stone curb
manic newsstand with the blurb 
Toil worn riser half asleep 
speed bump traffic jam’s beep beep
Noisy dockland, wharf or pier
naval fringe cry, coast is clear 
Blue horizon sky high quest
humdrum route dull second best 
Stock exchange a whirling disc
budding Gordon Gecko risk
Rapid urban belt whose rift 
spurs its city’s latent gift
Categories: rapid, art, celebration, character, city,
Form: Couplet

Rapid City Nowhere

Last summer
We drove across the country
Just the wife and me

10,000 miles
31 states
Three months on the road

I now know why people don’t live 
In South Dakota

Hot, dry dusty
Windy as hell

Black Hills are nice
But after seeing Mt. Rushmore
There is not much left to do

Rapid City did not impress me
Nor did Sioux Falls

And wall drugs
Well the free water was nice

But it is a nothing town
In a nothing state
On the edge of the badlands

And the Sioux reservation

There is a reason the Indians live there
No one else wanted the land
And they are warehoused there

So I drove through Rapid City
And thought that it is the heart of Trump Land
The land of the forgotten
The left behind

Just another nothing burger of a State
In the middle of nowhere
Truly flyover country
© Jake Aller  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: rapid, solitude, travel,
Form: Free verse

Rapid Fire

It’s the heat of the moment
Which ignites into flames
The burning passion
That trickles down your veins
Calling it love
Until the lover deceives you
Passing his blood
While she provides the forbidden fruit
It’s the blazing fire that’s spreading
To eradicate the people still standing
Who carries the burden of slavery and colonization
From Africa to the Americas 

So stand up for the cause
And put out the fire
Until it glows into a small ember
Protect yourselves before the fire ablaze
Turn away from the chaos
That runs through your veins
Don’t grab the fruit 
Like the Serpent gave to Eve
And Eve gave to Adam
For him to bite into it
Or you will get burnt
By a rapid fire
© K.T. Brown  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: rapid, africa, black african american,
Form: Quatrain

Rapid Rhyme

Rapid rhyme,
 who has the time
when steady and deliberate
 is more delicately exhibited.
Giving it a try
 but my fingers are denied
this rehearsed terse 
 is unfamiliar verse
dancing in nerve endings
 poetic form I'm pretending
of exhibitional imposed prose
 reveling mysterious majestic flows,
painting a picture more vivid
 with words less inhibited.
Now I'm stuck
 questioning my luck
at rhyme that makes me squeamish
 tried failure or success, this contest is fiendish.
© DM Babbit  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: rapid, anxiety, poetry,
Form: Rhyme
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