Best Loss Of Control Poems


Premium Member Cancer - a Demon of Our Making

loss of control. an aberration. a defect,
when the perfection of creation is lost,
a cell grows and grows without a stop,
and all its purpose and function is deranged,
it blinds the eye or strangles the bowels,
floods the lungs or stops the heart!
children die for no good reason…
who can argue with such a demon?
Hippocrates knew it and the pharaohs,
but the disease was not as often as now,
as greed grew bigger and hatred spread,
more chemicals filled our living space,
the demon grew stronger and stronger,
now it catches and eats even babies in cradle,
what was once a disease of the old
now strikes the young before they have begun!
as a doctor, I have held the hand of a dying 5 year old,
waiting for his mother who was late to arrive,
The tragedy of cancer is not in the disease,
but in the fact that we are the cause of it,
more we destroy the nature we live in,
more poison we create for our own kind.
A life of purity and green living,
is the way to conquer many beasts
of our times.
true wealth is nature, that gives without count, no cash needed, no receipt printed.
False world of man gives tokens of no value, awards and merits that perish with time. 
we wear blinkers of social prejudices and lose the greater reality of nature!
Live in nature, love nature and be part of nature! 
A panacea for all man made diseases like cancer.

Hanging On

Diverting his eyes from that last final hour,
denying death its due

His conscience and awareness tight in his grip,
ownership unrenewed

Both arms around life, he’s forever rejected,
blinded as time starts to bleed

Meeting the end in a loss of control
—damned by what he won’t concede

(Villanova Pennsylvania: October, 2020)
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Deep Waters

Knowing defeat I now softly sleep
my arms are lighter 
and feet do not tread deep waters

My brain rest from spirits for the time being
I do not fight that loss of control and shut my eyes
and no man nor beast removes me from who I am

I close the gates to my home away from all
this life I have reclaimed to be solely mine
walking a closer walk with God and his Son

I mend my circles and close off my heart from the world
peace showers down upon my head I will remember the dead
the sacrifices they made for me to live and softly cry all alone


The Way We Were

Once isolated from the world 
In tune with nature
Living day to day
Self sufficient 

Thrust into a globalized world 
New opportunities, open markets
Technological advances
Loss of control
Terrrorism
Disease

The pace of life quickens
Daylight hours changed
Individualism and accumulation
Destabilizing forces 
Confusion, vulnerability 

Our sense of wonder lost
Family structures undermined
Dependent on remittances

Change laps island shores
From all directions
East and west; old and new;
Modernity and tradition
Fragments of culture scattered
Like pieces of a puzzle
Understood only when the last piece
Is put in place

My Mind Runs the Show

In those very few moments just before rising,
my Mind is busy with things that must be done,
as it plans the day ahead and organizes my time
into smaller segments that will fit into place,
then decides how I can do each one,
so that by nightfall, I will cross the finish line.

It reviews each activity line by line,
as it watches until it sees the sun rising
in the east, then my Mind and body become as one
machine, ready to reach its goal, until all is done.
I eat my breakfast at the very same pace and place
I do each day, and then rush to my tasks to be on time.

I try to concentrate on each thing, one at a time,
so as to be organized and keep all things in line,
but this is no easy task to keep things in their place
and I feel a loss of control and my blood pressure rising,
but I must stay at it so that I can get them done
and not be left short of doing the very last one.

But why the importance to finish every single one,
not allowing some things to be left until the next time,
instead, wearing out the machine, trying to get them done?
This is no more than my Mind trying to keep me in line,
taking control of the machine, to stop my will from rising
and doing the things I desire, in this or any place.

"Everything in its place, everything in its place,
one by one - one by one - one by one." 
This mantra fills my ears and the sound is rising
ever louder, deafening me as I rush to finish on time,
line by line - line by line - line by line - line by line,
and the machine is breaking down, trying to get them done.

But what will be the penalty if things are not done,
and the consequences if they are not in their place,
and what can my Mind do if I step out of line,
nothing, for I have a will that answers to no one,
not to my body, nor my Mind, nor the dictates of time,
and with this realization, I feel my courage rising.

I step to the back of the line and relax, for I am done
working. I watch the rising sun come from its place,
knowing that I am the one in charge of my time.
Form: Sestina

It Is What It Is

11/28/16


Thrive survive and live

It is what it is
A day of nothing or success using sieves
Carbonation in the soda pop making it fizz
Distinguished areas for hers and his
Individuals involved or infatuated with the showbiz
Don't get in a tizz


Some just take and or give

The planet spins
Life with cartilage and fins swims
Strikes, splits and gutterballs in lanes with bowling pins
Rooms for rent available at inns
Breath mints in tins
Boys and girls occasionally born as twins
Music made with all instruments even violins
Sports and games played with javelins
At church they'll sing hymns
Sometimes you'll need a membership to certain gyms


Whole milk, soy and skim
Going out on a limb
And off a whim
You either lose draw or win
Even if it's only by a smidge
Another opportunity and day begins
Going from light to dim
Above and below the ridge
On either side of the bridge


Help out your kin
Especially when times are grim


Low to high bids
Placed on items
Waters fished for nearly everything, including squid
Due to road conditions, speed and a loss of control, the car slid
Around the corner and the tires started to skid

Recently or way back when
People have disappeared off the grid


No idea all that you or I have did
And the same could be said for where we've been

By: Dalton Ogletree
Form: Rhyme


Flames

Our eyes are kindled with the careless spark of a sudden glance.
Few words are spoken, our eyes making a silent dialogue …
Invitation and consent.

Our passion-flame, vivid orange and blue-red,
Heating our blood until, like mulled wine,
It warm-flows.

Our wine-breath is warm and sweet,
Our mouths exchanging hungry kisses
Like greedy children.

Our bodies clinging to one another as if
Close to the precipice, we fear to fall.
Yet relish the thought of falling
In an ever-falling close embrace.

Too soon, from the scorch-blackened earth
Of frenzied and fiery lust
My Phoenix-fear arises.

Fear of engulfment, loss of control,
Guilty longings.

But the spark, the flame is gone.
Merely shadows and embers remain.

Too late.
Sudden strangers, you and I

June 1986

The Chosen Path

Grave filled with papers
 Illnesses and diseases around
 Words and numbers full of pain
 Like black plague sinking in to the soul
 Every day the same pattern
 Every minute same agony
 No reasonable escape, no clear path
 The loss of control over mind
 The stress induced aching inside
 Tired of trying tired of fighting
 The egsistence, the end seems determined
 Can’t escape the feeling of living on the edge
 on the borderline of redemption, the imminent escape
 Everything and everyone seems temporary, lost in a haze
 Life ruled by minutes ticking out, by things gone by
 Too much thinking, digging in the past
 Present day drowning in a sea of regret 
 Neglected duties piling up, threatening the future
 The unbreakable circle, the same routine 
 No pleasure to be found, no point to look for.
Form: ABC

Falling Asleep Dog Tired

(this poem is a bout falling asleep but there is no category for it)


Heavy lids; burning eyes,
no more chance of getting high.
Dreams both start but don't sound,
as carriage carts drag on cobble stones.

Your heart - slow baritone beats,
pulling you away to sleep.
And it suffers you,
for your loss of control.
It scares you too.
Still, down you must go.
Into the vast sea
of nascent mortality
of terminal vistas.
The hindmost journey
being quiescent aloft.
Form: Rhyme

Free the Dandelion

Why
The dandelion
Do we hold with poisonous contempt?
The word weed grown to our lips
From what past snare?

Ah, those words that pop up from nowhere
To keep the front yard order
Clean flat and spotless
Lines and squares

I propose a small revolution
To re-label all weeds
Flowers

Let them spread
Entangled
Roots and blooms of give and take

Sweep our graves with wild meadows
Dandelions milkweeds violets of winding rivers

Breadcrumbs for butterflies
Honey bees on these lily pads
Perfume
Upon our exhausted souls

Loss of control
Divine medicine for all.

Premium Member Loves Cliche Coup

It was love at first sight
Thought of you every night
Can’t stop thinking of you
What am I gonna do?
Blinding love at first sight

It was love at first sight
me feeling high as a kite
Ah, but this too shall pass
searching for greener grass
Crazy love at first sight

(Chorus)
Head over heels into the unknown
Doomed to fail before true love’s seed sown
Loss of control by true love’s presidium
Love’s cliché coup (surrounded by idioms)
~ Blinding, crazy love at first sight

It was love at first sight
but not all black and white
If I throw caution to wind
will my life then upend?
Stormy love at first sight

It was love at first sight
Why am I so uptight?
Will i be lumped with fools,
An exception to rules?
Scary love at first sight

(Chorus)
Head over heels into the unknown
Doomed to fail before true love’s seed sown
Loss of control by true love’s presidium
Love's cliché coup (surrounded by idioms)
~ Stormy, scary love at first sight

It was love at first sight
Dizzying passage of rite
Love is blind at what cost?
Best to have loved then lost?
All’s fair in love at first sight

It was love at first sight
Can two wrongs make a right?
One plus one’s never two
when one’s heart isn’t true
Fickle love at first sight

(Chorus)
Head over heels into the unknown
Doomed to fail before true love’s seed sown
Loss of control by true love’s presidium
Love's cliché coup (surrounded by idioms)
~ All‘s fair in fickle love at first sight
© Mark Toney  Create an image from this poem.
Form: Lyric

Anger & Loss of Control

Senses become ingulfed,
the sound frequencies exit my lips,
black magic pouring fourth,
in a barrage of rage and torment,
self anger, sublimation,
projected then introspected,
hurt, regret, the wounds slashed again,
lacerating our aura, it bleeds
ether and is refilled with bile,
spat in face and broken in
sob, sorrow leaking, a joy
to be speaking, the darkness
subdued by light, having survived 
another long cold night.

Premium Member Whisper Quiet Blanket

Whisper Quiet Blanket
All  Surroundings are Crystal White,
Soft, Beautiful, Silence,
Nestled in Flakey Fall from Sky's Height,
Each Patterned *Asterisk* by Science Is,
Unique, A "Nes", Not Man's Hand in Sleight,
G-d Granting A World of Quiescence,
Interlude from the Usual Freight,
Calling for Wonder of Nature's Essence,
Our Vulnerability & Fate We Appreciate,
Munchkins Roll Balls into Snowmens,
That We Can Humbly Emulate,
Accept A Loss of Control, Our Fences & Pens,
Before It's Too Late, See We're Inadequate!
Reflect: We're Not Roosters but Hens ...
********
Note: Nes is Hebrew for Miracle
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Peaceful Reading

Peaceful Reading

I was writing. 
There was a beginning, 
a middle and an end. 
It was not happy or sad, 
but it was exciting, 
and interesting... at times. 

The pen hit the paper, 
the ink flowed, 
in streams...
and a river of black. 
Yet there were red, 
in the words... 
and the sentences, 
that left readers concerned 
about today, 
forgetting yesterday, 
in favor of tomorrow. 

"Not enough detail, 
not enough courageous outrage, 
for the stages of New York. 
Not enough elements of evil, 
to fill the streets of Los Angels, 
as players for money, 
over time." 

Long lists of categories, 
that have been added. 
Changes to the dictionary, 
Webster was sold out. 
Slang, 
pain, 
no gain, 
only loss 
of integrity, 
and creative grace. 

The race for first place, 
a best-seller, 
not worth your soul, 
for the simple fame, you gain. 
Be ready instead, 
for the coming of all truth, 
and the removal of censorship, 
by those in power, 
as they will be forced...
and the outcome, 
a loss of control.
© Ann Foster  Create an image from this poem.

Words

All those words ago,
When I was whole,
There was a moment
I did not know.
I was sleeping
My eyes were closed
Inside a temple
Where dreams unfold.
So much unknown,
In a field of bliss,
Unborn desires,
Deep in the abyss.

Now I am present
In the tide, adrift,
Searching for love
With words, what if,
Any why, and how
Will I know, I want
To surrender, in
A loss of control.
Form: Verse

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