Best Fervidness Poems
Love isn’t amorousness,
Nor is it hunger nor thirst,
With vehemence, I insist: Love is a perpetual motion machine
O! Break! Break! Break! My Hardened Heart!
Be shattered by Love,
And let all your disquietude be shaken out of you, like candy out of a pinata!
E*very time you sacrifice something lesser for something greater, that is Love
From the beginning, nothing you were taught will ever matter more
Find in your heart the beginning, then work Love into practical things
Erupt! With Joy! At the presence, near, of the Beloved
Receive Her as though this new day will be your last
Veneration may be for sillies or fuddies but DO it
Elopement is all the way for the strong of heart
Sight fails, and then the hands learn to know the face of the Beloved
Crying verses with bell-like tongues fly out of those who yearn for Love's Purity
Energy-in-motion is never big enough or beautiful enough to sing Her Name
Near-to-Death, no heart, ever, does not prize it most
Clearly, clean clinical classifications cloy, clot and clutz the fervidness of Love
E*very time you sacrifice something lesser for something greater, that is Love
And now, to the subject of reverence…
When her body is a holy temple before you,
When you must wash your hands and feet and face before you approach her
When you joy to fluff her pillows or your breath catches, when you touch her
face,
When all of her is Divine unto you, and Delightful, and Dear
THEN
That is the beginning of Love!
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* NOTE: 'effervescence' is spelled out, like in an acrostic poem
2/8/2019
Submitted for: Free Verse On Love -- 10 Words Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Lu Loo
Sometimes when my darling has had to be away from me,
night’s shadows encase me and I’m assailed by disquietude.
Closing my eyes, I conjure up the vision of my love,
and I put myself with him inside this vision
as he watches me with reverence.
His dark honey eyes draw me in
deeper and deeper, and thus it is. . .
my thirst begins.
I immerse myself in the warmth of his delicious gaze.
I touch with veneration the olive of his face - that sacred place
wherein his beautiful brown orbs so softly glow.
I read in those sweet eyes his growing hunger!
Our lips touch – tenderly at first with a long smooth kiss
until our bodies touch. . .and then
with fervidness,
I’m swept up by the vehemence of his amorousness,
rippling wave upon wave inside his ocean of effervescence.
And when the waves subside,
there is a calm.
My disquietude is gone; I fall to blissful sleep,
knowing that very soon
all that I’ve envisioned -
the eyes into which I sank, the skin I touched and the mouth I kissed -
will be much more than my imagining. Like the ocean -
passion’s waves rise and fall again and again for me and him.
Our love is perpetual.
Feb. 19, 2019
for Lu Loo's Free Verse On Love- 10 Words- Pick A Prize Poetry Contest
My heart sought love with a hunger never sated,
dreamt of it with a thirst cupid never fully aided
and a fervidness of longing no embrace abated.
Perpetual disquietude pooled sadness in my heart
where ashes drowned when my dreams burnt down.
Then came you with such masculine effervescence
my romantic, passionate dreams eagerly renewed.
My willingness and lovingness thrilled to be wooed
by the sheer vehemence that is charismatic you.
Your gaze held an intense, veneration persuasion
and your lustiness was buffed in brazen perfection.
Your endearing love became my safe, cocooned haven.
Whether you tenderly or intensely touch me to possess,
you relay amorousness and reverence in one, same caress.
With you, in romantic paradise, I lovingly, joyously reside.
The beating in your chest is where my sun rises and sets.
You my love are like poetry in motion
you glide along with
charm and benevolence
when you walk by you strike a heart's chord
i hear songs of love playing in my head
you've mastered the technique of seduction
yes you do have my heart watering
i stare when you enter the room
your presence demands responsiveness
Oh my love i wait for the day
when you will whisk me away
in your strong arms of comfort
where i will dissipate in your arms
and you will announce your love for me
and it will echo throughout the world
then we will flee so unreservedly
to our own planet of fervidness
It is Valentine's day and I find myself brooding
as I sift through thoughts both perpetual and
disquieting;
I watch the crowds as they piously enter the card
shop for that sanctimonious day of love and passion
What do I know about love and the hunger games?
Life has sent me a series of boyfriends that go
swifter then they come. Leaving me in transient
motion and rocking frame.
No, I have no reverence for that clamorous day
of cards, blue mascara and silk slips that throne the
bedroom with sensuous hips that swing in fervidness
and lust;
I refuse to be his middle pass. Lost in a disquietude of
feverish resentment I cling to the fantasy of saving
grace and heroes of the past that show amorousness
not with fired loins but through chivalry & courtesy;
Yes, I thirst for the good old days of longitude and time;
The vehemence of my strong belief originates from past
histories that repeat without empathy and give;
No effervescence of full boy will ever claim my heart
except the love of a true one nothing else will do;
In this day and age of texting and sexting, glass tap
messages pale in my arena of love. I'd rather live in a
castle of fairy tales, then in a world of veneration to
to the holy bod and boob.
So on this Valentine day I will part the valance of doubt
and hope that I can find someone who can truly be mine.
Feb 10, 2019
Contest Name: Free Verse On Love
Sponsor: Lu Loo
(Amorousness, Hunger, Thirst, Vehemence, Perpetual
Disquietude, Effervescence, Fervidness, Reverence Veneration)
my gaze upon my sweet love is amorousness and awe
I find everything about this man of mine erotic
his eyes are full of hunger and yearning
and my thirst for him is pure lust and desire
when we are apart I am filled with disquietude
as my need is both joy and misery
love like this is a beautiful rapture that comes unbidden
it is an infinite bond that is fragile as a blooming flower
I am swept away in the fervidness of this passion
it comes to us like wind driven storm clouds twirling
and we are sent swirling on vast rolling ocean waves
then, we plunge into the deep fathomless blue
and we are drenched with this wild love
when we are together there is an intensity and aching
a vehemence fierce and bold with a captivating promise
he makes me so happy and I glow with effervescence
our love is growing like a wandering forest vine searching
we can talk for hours and hours for time means nothing to us
I have a deep respect for his opinion on all matters
and he is a good listener and likes it when I read my written words
and I see and feel his many admirable qualities
oh, for this man I have great reverence and veneration
and when he kisses my waiting lips red as wine
I gasp in the knowledge that this romance we share is eternal
it will endure and go on forever and will be unending
I love this man with- a love- p e r p e t u a l . . . .
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February 7, 2019
Poetry/Free Verse/A Love Perpetual
Copyright Protected, ID 1112-829-02
All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym.
Written for the $ contest, Free Verse On Love
sponsor, Lu Loo
First Place
LOVE
She is the very essence of all woman
She brings forth a hunger and a thirst
In perpetual fervidness, she is exotic
Making sure that her spouse is pleased
She has the ability to display a vehemence
That creates great disquietude
Then, the effervescence of her reverence
Comes to the forefront
And the sheer veneration that springs forth
Is invigorating and makes her so vulnerable
She dotes on being made to feel feminine
Yet, is all woman in her amorousness
That labels her as the epitome of what love is
Dignified in public, but can be sultry in private
Yes, she is in my opinion what every man desires
But I am grateful that she is mine alone
6 February 2019
For the contest sponsored by Lu Loo
Like so, our fingers gently entwine
We are in Capistrano again
Gazing at young swallows perched on boughs...
The perpetual murmur of reeds finds me
Entranced by gerberas as they
Unwrap yellow petals along San Juan;
And destined amorousness smiles at us,
This hunger for joy’s effervescence divine.
Unto paths, a slow walk in the chapel
Invites deep prayers humbly offered—
A noble reverence from two soul mates
Knowing this fervidness to love, to give vigorously,
Is one rare pledge without vehemence or question
Where ardor’s thirst reflects a grant from heaven...
Our disquietude tamed by sacred bell chimes ,
Embracing this fate never to be duplicated
In this lifetime when refrains of gratitude knell
At the edge of Capistrano's twilight...
Our long distance affinity armed by flames of hope,
Awaiting God’s will, His veneration.
2/18/2019
Free Verse On Love--10 Words
Pick A Prize for Lu Loo's Contest
The fervidness of our love, is pure adoration.
Holistically forming silent reverence,
And humble avoidance of disquietude.
Steeped in sensual effervescence,
Hearts primed, we set the mood.
We hunger perpetual, for each’s scent,
An emotion checked in veneration.
And amorousness—thirsting for the touch,
With vehemence and softly gilded flirtation.
The fervidness of our love, is pure adoration.
How free can free verse be
if effervescence is mandatory?
Its bubble’s bound to burst
with disquietude and thirst.
Perpetual hunger makes it worse!
I mean no disrespect
but fervidness is vehemence,
so loses some effect.
If amorousness is forced
it’s the coarsest kind of course,
like required veneration
prone in abnegation.
Reverence must be free
to bow or bend a knee
like words of love in lines
that slant or fall in rhyme.
February 14, 2019
Free Verse on Love- 10 words- Pick a Prize Cash Prize Poetry Contest
Locked in the Amorousness Cage
Alpha bodies with alpha rage
Seduction of gaits,
On a hunger and thirst page
Effervescence of desire
A roar of wild fire
A vehemence of body entire,
In the love wire
Animality veneration, moment coordination
Muscle wars, fervidness soars
Such a delicate course!
An insatiable magnitude
Burning all disquitude
Reverence is a perpetual attitude!
Enthralled with heavenly love
I’m nestling in the Almighty's divine amorousness
Satiating my heart’s hunger for genuine peace
From oppressive sin-inflicting guilt
Quenching my soul’s thirst for freedom's contentment
Against affliction-pangs of bitterness and greed
While calming the vehemence of my mind attacked by doubts.
Assured by God to delight in His perpetual love
He vividly expressed in the Scriptures
And unceasingly reverberated by Jeremiah 31:3
“The LORD hath appeared of old unto me, saying,
Yea, I have loved thee with an everlasting love:
therefore with lovingkindness have I drawn thee;”
I seek Him worshipfully in His solace
Midst disquietude of carnality, threatening my spirit
So I can invite others to bask with no hesitation
In the effervescence of His compassion.
Thus, brewing in the fervidness of the Lord’s charity,
I yield myself to His reviving grace
Blessed to serve Him with reverence.
As His faithful steward sealed with His loving kindness
May I testify that I love God* with all my heart;
And I’m striving to love others as myself… all by His gracious love.
*Luke 10:27 “…Thou shalt love the Lord thy God with all thy heart, and with all thy soul, and with all thy strength, and with all thy mind; and thy neighbour as thyself.”
February 16, 2019
1st place, "A BRIAN STRAND VERSE FREED" Poetry Writing Contest
Sponsored by Brian Strand; judged on 3/2/2022.
The gym was decorated:
crepe draped and glittery.
Disquietude was partner
as I stood against the wall,
misrepresented hunger gnawing at my soul
and a misunderstood thirst.
The electric strumming died,
so the vehemence of a heart-throbbing
perpetual drum solo
and snare’s
shimmering effervescence
could ripple, rumble and shoot
as lightning through the air,
no reverence for my ears,
nor veneration for years.
Then he
stepped into the emptiness
of the full room,
alone,
a late arrival, early,
anticipated.
I heard my heart’s solo drumming
on my ribs resonating
until my misconstrued hunger and thirst turned keen
and translated
to amorousness.
My teen heart flamed.
Fervidness was defined.
And all music forever changed
its tune.
Feb. 9, 2019
Free Verse On Love- 10 Words- Pick A Prize Poetry Contest, Lu Loo
An ebony tress flies over the meadow.
Disquietude of the heart; you look over the
Marching troops, the veneration,
The last gleam of the marquis,
Heading toward coiling smoke.
My wall crumbles, barreled down by war and a
Hunger that wind can’t qualm, a thirst for
Satin gentleness and pearl-like skin,
Amorousness swirls,
Blending with incense perfuming,
The fervidness of hearts
Drumming, beat after beat, after beat,
Perpetual promises beyond the meadow.
Cannons pounding, reverberating reverence for our time.
My heart deepens, cracking at the slender silhouette
That the wind can’t shake away, the vehemence of the beating heart
Toward the meadow where the effervescence of your scent
Keeps me at your feet.
Silent mundane tranquil life takes a sudden lurch.
In fervidness of Big Bang, fiery whirlwind takes birth.
Like an untamed wild deer, two souls are set on fire
In cold callous chaotic world, love tips over, lights a chandelier.
As effervescence entice blood in champagne, inhibitions sink.....
He is so irresistible, blissful, charming, safe...
She is so soft, beautiful, electric, stunning....
A plethora of adoring, love tips over profound reverence.
A constant thirst kindles the thrilling hangover
The hunger is so strong to indulge in each other.
Infected in disquietude of his air, she destroys feminine silence,
Two hearts in jukebox, love tips over esthetic resonance.
Amorousness of desire bathed pure in veneration,
No longer ashamed in vehemence of embraces.
A perpetual panorama, every minute of every day...
A restless wave tips over, touches the shore to say.....
................"I AM IN LOVE WITH YOU".............
Two stars in the night sky disappear together....
May symphony of lights play, in their tangled path forever.
9th February 2019
Theme :Free Verse on Love using given 10 words
amorousness, hunger, thirst, vehemence,
perpetual, disquietude, effervescence, fervidness
reverence and veneration
Sponsor Lu Loo