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You My Love

You my love are like poetry in motion
you glide along with
charm and benevolence
when you walk by you strike a heart's chord
i hear songs of love playing in my head
you've mastered the technique of seduction
yes you do have my heart watering
i stare when you enter the room
your presence demands responsiveness
Oh my love i wait for the day
when you will whisk me away
in your strong arms of comfort
where i will dissipate in your arms
and you will announce your love for me
and it will echo throughout the world
then we will flee so unreservedly
to our own planet of fervidness

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/23/2013 7:06:00 PM
this is so sweet and loving. Lots of devotion and caring in each line. The imagery allows the reader to feel what you are feeling. Good job
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Date: 2/1/2013 3:13:00 AM
Nice poem, there is a nice balance of imagery with reflection. Ggreat job.
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April Mitchell
Date: 2/1/2013 4:07:00 AM
well how nice thank you glad people are enjoying my writings

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