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A Love- Perpetual Premiere Contest Winner

my gaze upon my sweet love is amorousness and awe I find everything about this man of mine erotic his eyes are full of hunger and yearning and my thirst for him is pure lust and desire when we are apart I am filled with disquietude as my need is both joy and misery love like this is a beautiful rapture that comes unbidden it is an infinite bond that is fragile as a blooming flower I am swept away in the fervidness of this passion it comes to us like wind driven storm clouds twirling and we are sent swirling on vast rolling ocean waves then, we plunge into the deep fathomless blue and we are drenched with this wild love when we are together there is an intensity and aching a vehemence fierce and bold with a captivating promise he makes me so happy and I glow with effervescence our love is growing like a wandering forest vine searching we can talk for hours and hours for time means nothing to us I have a deep respect for his opinion on all matters and he is a good listener and likes it when I read my written words and I see and feel his many admirable qualities oh, for this man I have great reverence and veneration and when he kisses my waiting lips red as wine I gasp in the knowledge that this romance we share is eternal it will endure and go on forever and will be unending I love this man with- a love- p e r p e t u a l . . . . ________________________ February 7, 2019 Poetry/Free Verse/A Love Perpetual Copyright Protected, ID 1112-829-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the $ contest, Free Verse On Love sponsor, Lu Loo First Place

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Date: 2/24/2019 7:02:00 PM
Another amazing write Constance, congrats on another fine win!
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Date: 2/24/2019 2:00:00 PM
Wow! You definitely deserved first place! This is amazing! It was so beautifully written and all of your lines just oozing with this untethered, ambiance of lovemaking gone wild. Congratulations on a well deserved win!
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Date: 2/24/2019 1:01:00 PM
such a beautiful poem, as always sweet lady. Check your soupmail, mine works again. let me know if messenger would be easier for you, it may be easier for me. Congrats and thank you for your participation! -luloo
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Date: 2/13/2019 8:31:00 AM
The intensity in this poem is so severe! The love you have for this person is so deep and powerful in burns straight into our own hearts. If only it remains like that. Great piece.
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Constance La France
Date: 2/13/2019 9:11:00 AM
Kudzai, thank you so much for visiting my poem with that wonderful comment, appreciate ~

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