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Long Distance Soul Mate's Love

Like so, our fingers gently entwine We are in Capistrano again Gazing at young swallows perched on boughs... The perpetual murmur of reeds finds me Entranced by gerberas as they Unwrap yellow petals along San Juan; And destined amorousness smiles at us, This hunger for joy’s effervescence divine. Unto paths, a slow walk in the chapel Invites deep prayers humbly offered— A noble reverence from two soul mates Knowing this fervidness to love, to give vigorously, Is one rare pledge without vehemence or question Where ardor’s thirst reflects a grant from heaven... Our disquietude tamed by sacred bell chimes , Embracing this fate never to be duplicated In this lifetime when refrains of gratitude knell At the edge of Capistrano's twilight... Our long distance affinity armed by flames of hope, Awaiting God’s will, His veneration. 2/18/2019 Free Verse On Love--10 Words Pick A Prize for Lu Loo's Contest

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Date: 2/24/2019 1:06:00 PM
lovely poem dear Nette! loved every word...Congrats and thank you for your participation! -luloo
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Date: 2/18/2019 7:18:00 PM
You lit up the page for me Nette, how beautifully you pen . There is a lot of love put into this, I can tell. xo
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Date: 2/18/2019 4:30:00 PM
Spring has not yet arrived in some areas, but it comes early to Capistrano and I love your descriptions of the Gerber daisies opening their petals as even long-distance love thrives with hope. I don't remember the words for Lu' contest, but your poem stands beautifully on its own. Best wishes in the contest, Nette!
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Date: 2/18/2019 3:47:00 PM
A most lovely, delightful poem, Nette! A love such as this is to be envied! I understand you're referring to the church in Capistrano, California where swallows are a main attraction. Hugs // paul
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Date: 2/18/2019 3:36:00 PM
Images of love adorn your poem..charming sweet memories. We written, Nette.
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Date: 2/18/2019 3:31:00 PM
A beautiful tribute to a love well-earned, and San Juan. Darling Nette.
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