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Loving Paradise

For Timothy Lee, the best of me
My heart sought love with a hunger never sated, dreamt of it with a thirst cupid never fully aided and a fervidness of longing no embrace abated. Perpetual disquietude pooled sadness in my heart where ashes drowned when my dreams burnt down. Then came you with such masculine effervescence my romantic, passionate dreams eagerly renewed. My willingness and lovingness thrilled to be wooed by the sheer vehemence that is charismatic you. Your gaze held an intense, veneration persuasion and your lustiness was buffed in brazen perfection. Your endearing love became my safe, cocooned haven. Whether you tenderly or intensely touch me to possess, you relay amorousness and reverence in one, same caress. With you, in romantic paradise, I lovingly, joyously reside. The beating in your chest is where my sun rises and sets. ... CayCay February 20, 2019

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Date: 3/25/2019 3:34:00 AM
I love this poem. I liked how you led the reader to the positive ending. A amazing poem.
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Date: 2/26/2019 3:22:00 PM
Congrats on your top win, CayCay. Well done.
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Date: 2/21/2019 9:49:00 PM
CayCay, excellent writing, I loved your poem form the first word, well done ~
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Date: 2/21/2019 11:56:00 AM
I would switch those last two lines for effect but other than that like P.S. says ooh la la! Wonderful, CayCay!
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 2/21/2019 1:39:00 PM
Hey, I'm gonna think on that, thank you, Kim. I really appreciate it when people read with that type of 'eye.' Thanks for the visit - always a pleasure ... CayCay
Date: 2/20/2019 9:59:00 PM
ooo-la-la! CayCay this is quite nice <3 It sounds like a winner to me :)
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 2/20/2019 10:07:00 PM
Well, hello again - my pleasure again. AND, I thank you again, P.S. - so glad to have such positive feedback. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

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