Loving Paradise

My heart sought love with a hunger never sated,
dreamt of it with a thirst cupid never fully aided
and a fervidness of longing no embrace abated.
Perpetual disquietude pooled sadness in my heart
where ashes drowned when my dreams burnt down.

Then came you with such masculine effervescence
my romantic, passionate dreams eagerly renewed.
My willingness and lovingness thrilled to be wooed
by the sheer vehemence that is charismatic you.
Your gaze held an intense, veneration persuasion
and your lustiness was buffed in brazen perfection.

Your endearing love became my safe, cocooned haven.
Whether you tenderly or intensely touch me to possess,
you relay amorousness and reverence in one, same caress.
With you, in romantic paradise, I lovingly, joyously reside.
The beating in your chest is where my sun rises and sets.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Williams Avatar
January 24, 2026 at 11:48 AM
Congratulations on this romantic piece and your top-tier win, CayCay! Blessings and very best, Bartholomew
Castellenas Avatar
March 25, 2019 at 3:34 AM
I love this poem. I liked how you led the reader to the positive ending. A amazing poem.
Gauthier Avatar
February 26, 2019 at 3:22 PM
Congrats on your top win, CayCay. Well done.
La France Avatar
February 21, 2019 at 9:49 PM
CayCay, excellent writing, I loved your poem form the first word, well done ~
Rodrigues Avatar
February 21, 2019 at 11:56 AM
I would switch those last two lines for effect but other than that like P.S. says ooh la la! Wonderful, CayCay!
Godwin Avatar
February 21, 2019 at 1:39 PM
Hey, I'm gonna think on that, thank you, Kim. I really appreciate it when people read with that type of 'eye.' Thanks for the visit - always a pleasure ... CayCay
Awtry Avatar
February 20, 2019 at 9:59 PM
ooo-la-la! CayCay this is quite nice <3 It sounds like a winner to me :)
Godwin Avatar
February 20, 2019 at 10:07 PM
Well, hello again - my pleasure again. AND, I thank you again, P.S. - so glad to have such positive feedback. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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