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Best Feedback Loop Poems

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Rumpelstiltskin Rebranded As Outre Designer Couture
the daughter of a miller abducted, exiled, held 
locked as prisoner didst bawl
achingly, effusively, indubitably murmured plaintively 
quite riotously didst call
out for help, when stalked...

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Categories: feedback loop, abuse, allegory, anger, art,
Form: Imagism



Premium Member Positive Conversational Psychologic
Yang insists on consistent deductively reasoned,
exegetically Orthodox Business As Usual,
truth of logical proof,

while Yin invites every bit of information
into not inconsistent
inductively-heuristically resonant
eisegetically polycultural-multisystemic integrative
proportionally rhythmed...

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Categories: feedback loop, beauty, community, culture, nature,
Form: Free verse
Remorseless Sweaty Palms
Remorseless sweaty palms

despite being prescribed glycopyrrolate.

Though the angst riddled psyche of mine crafted youth, long since receded, ebbed in the past, infringement, impingement, and indecent...

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Categories: feedback loop, 12th grade, anger, blue,
Form: Free verse
Morning Meditation
Deep inhalation and exhalation
breaths initially activate
relaxation, attributed to stress,
tension, unconscious vectors 
woefully agglomerate
ache'n to gangrenous jackknifing noggin 

dichotomy to alleviate
cognitive clog analogous 
to emotional obstruction
that...

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Categories: feedback loop, assonance, good morning, imagery,
Form: Free verse
Premium Member The Second Principle
Obtain a regenerative yield,
a positive,
rather than negative, feedback loop,
better than a dissonance feedback screech
of mental and physical madness,
political parties become monocultural mobbing holocausts,
bodies become cancerous...

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Categories: feedback loop, career, destiny, health, humanity,
Form: Political Verse



Premium Member Karma
Karma is a feedback loop that critiques
your reactions to life.
You cannot escape Karma,
it is an ethereal, intangible force fueled solely 
by your actions or inactions.
Karma...

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Categories: feedback loop, beautiful, feelings, giving, how
Form: Free verse
Captain Kuni-Lemel Graduate Strikes Again
Captain kuni-lemel graduate strikes again

Even when iron not red hot, 
I implement non customary quarks 
regarding foreigner rather cold as ice
namely delinquent outsize credit card...

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Categories: feedback loop, adventure, age, best friend,
Form: Rhyme
Burden
Burden

How many people
ruined by love?
Regret weighing heavy
on cramped minds
Dealing with the mundane
in an almost dream-like state
The heart withdraws into itself
A trembling cocoon of sadness
over missed...

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Categories: feedback loop, angst, conflict, heartbreak, hurt,
Form: Free verse
Deadened Frisson Explains
Absent Motility Against Staid Inertia

impossible to describe listlessness
     bedeviling this body electric aye attest
motivation to counter glumness
    ...

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Categories: feedback loop, 11th grade, 12th grade,
Form: Lyric
Gods Tattoo
God’s Tattoo

Did I jump too soon??
Celebrate too early??
Will I like others before? become 
the cliche of sports re-runs??
Will they think I am enough??
Go behind my...

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Categories: feedback loop, anxiety, emotions, god, inspiration,
Form: Free verse
Captain Kuni Lemel Strikes Again
Captain Kuni-Lemel strikes again
(even when iron not hot, but rather cold as ice)

Yours truly a day late dollar short
dollars to donuts bonafide klutz
living testes mint...

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Categories: feedback loop, adventure, character, crazy, fate,
Form: Free verse
Please Do Not Weep For Me
Please do not weep for me!

(alternately titled: dost newt expend
precious tears toward pitiful poet!)

Intense passion to read
doth foster divine enlightenment...

Also simultaneously, albeit instantaneously
triggering brutal mind-numbing...

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Categories: feedback loop, 12th grade, betrayal, grief,
Form: Free verse
Sweaty Palms Chronic Woe Renders
Sweaty Palms – Chronic Woe Renders...
Po' Whet Tick Dampened Curse = A
Worse Fate Than Death!

No idea when the incessant onset 
of sweaty palms first burst...

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Categories: feedback loop, 12th grade, blue, dad,
Form: Bio
Perpetual Commuter Struggle
Stuck in a gargantuan feedback loop
Insentive truckers smash turtle shells
Squirrels sprawled with concrete entrails
Gleaming windshields refracting might
Dull relation just business is right

Scratching the ceiling of...

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Categories: feedback loop, angst, death, fear,
Form: Free verse
Afraid To Live
Chinks of light filter
thru pitchblack emotional prison
vestigial shadow figure hunkers,
an atrophied, mortified, petrified old man
implacable self destructive nemesis
birthed in league pitiful human shambles,

his abysmally forlorn...

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Categories: feedback loop, allusion, baptism, dark, death,
Form: Dramatic Verse

Book: Shattered Sighs