Best Duffle Poems


Language Barrier

I couldn’t understand the language she spoke,

at least not all of it,

but the emotion pouring past her lips, 

the tears in her eyes, her clenched and shaking fists

enunciated more clearly,

than any piece of English Poetry I had ever read,

and grabbed me, held me still.

                   …In that moment, her soul was in my arms.

In that finite, tender breath of our lives,

she was my mother, my best friend…

but I could not console her. 

I didn’t have the words;

and my heart sank into the 

concrete between us,

wet with the pain of God’s rain

and her tears. 

                  …Were my tears

So, I simply opened my palms

toward her crouched form and 

spoke the only words I could 

fathom, that would be accepted

by a stranger on a dangerous street. 

"I am sorry, It will be okay. God will bless you."

I knew she did not understand…

"Lo siento" 

                  “que va a estar bien”    

                            “Dios te bendecira’ “ 

the words were as messy as the overturned

duffle bag at her feet…and fumbled, slowly

from my lips, as my knees hit the street.

Two strangers, cried in the rain,

knowing nothing of each other’s suffering,

and yet we shared the weight,

together, for those few moments;

the barrier of language was broken.

Love spoke for us.  

-James Kelley 2014, All rights reserved.

…Love transcends any language

Premium Member The Last Token

I was five years old when the war was over 
August, 1945, and my daddy sent word 
He was on his way home from Guadalcanal. 
Grandma was already preparing a feast 
For the family to celebrate his homecoming. 
Momma took her last ration token from the box 
She kept high on the kitchen counter cabinet 
And filled up the old, worn-down Chevy with gas 
So she could pick up my daddy at the bus stop. 

Everyone was super excited except for me. 
You see, I could not remember this man. 
I didn’t know this person coming into my life-- 
Why was everyone so excited? 
He had been gone to war since I was a baby. 
The only man in my life was my grandpa. 
One uncle was fighting with Patton in Italy; 
Another was somewhere in Japan, we thought. 
I tried to ignore the party goings-on, 
And I reckoned I would make the best of it. 

I was climbing the sour cherry tree next to the porch 
When this man I did not know came up the hill. 
He had a duffle bag thrown over his shoulder; 
He wore a white uniform with a strange hat-- 
“A navy man,” he later told me, and he said, “I 
Will make a navy man out of you!” 
 
Later I heard Momma saying she’d taken 
The last token to buy gas she hadn’t needed to. 

FIRST PLACE WINNER
Written 3/22/2021
for the "Last Token" contest
sponsored by Mystic Rose Rose

Premium Member Eating Jello With Crazy Cat Lady

She is the eclectic cat lady
Pretty in pink wearing a daisy
You be the judge I think she's crazy
Bobby sock chic her scarf's paisley

One big duffle with many cats inside
she will show them off with the utmost pride
In the bag you can hear them collide
Still they never stray far from her side

When the bag opens it's quite a scene
To my great surprise she has thirteen
Her favorite one his name is Dean
the smallest cat she calls Jelly Bean

As for me I am more of a dog guy
If you smelled her cats you would know why
When the cats see my dogs they sure jump high
Boy oh boy does the fur ever fly

I am the friendly dog loving fellow
My dogs love the sound of my Cello
They sing along while dressed in Yellow
Cat lady smiles while feeding us jello.

For Line Gauthier's "Crazy Cat Lady" Contest. January 2, 2018.

My first poem of the new year.


Premium Member The Train

Each is a piece, a small part
of a composite that has come
together in a morning,
the frayed strands of dreams 
knitted into a waking timed now
to a slow tread on a familiar street. 
Then suddenly, careering through 
the center of my thoughts a train 
comes with bells at a crossing 
clanging loudly and wheels grinding 
on rails heading off towards
a distant point in the past. I stop

and see myself, late teens, 
leaving home, riding the interstate 
with dreams spilling out 
of a duffle bag, head in a cloud
of hope. I was Rimbaud on rails, 
high on poetry that I took straight. 
Six months in a one room flat
I ran out of money and a literary career,
hitchhiked back home to sink
into a wintery despair.

A lifetime has passed 
and I have left a poem tied 
to the end of each year as if
marking my way. The words
of most have now weathered away
to a silence. I write as a form
of prayer to that greater silence
and on still mornings, hear
the sound of a train in the far
distance growing quieter.

Out of Sight, Out of Mind

I lost a friend; Jason really loved his gin.
One night while he was on a binge.
He walked off into the deep end,
now no one has ever seen Jason again.

I lost a friend; his life was his duffle sack.
One day he headed to Iraq.
I didn’t know him when he came back,
well I guess Billy’s mind slipped right off its track.

I lost a friend; his name was old Stan the Man.
Spent two tours in Afghanistan.
Survived bullets and scorching heat,
just to come home and get shot down in the street.

I lost a friend; lived in a house on the hill.
Had two kids and a bag of pills.
One day they found her on the floor,
she’s not going to need those pills anymore.

I lost some friends; I only think about them.
Oh, once in a while, now and then.
Don’t want to seem harsh or unkind,
but as they say, they’re out of sight, out of mind. 

You know that life is a very fickle thing.
Make the best of what it might bring.
We’re just a bright flash ‘cross the screen,
before we can blink… we’re just a memory.

Premium Member Pepe's Coffee Lounge

I was one of the cool set,
navy blue duffle coat, scarf around
my neck, seated at a table
in Pepe's Coffee Lounge
discussing Baudelaire 
and T.S. Eliot and the demise 
of the political elites.
The conscription ballot hung 
over our heads helmeted
in a flowering of uncombed hair
in the winter of 1966.

We thought the world was about
to tip, that the old regime 
was coughing its last 
on Craven A and Camel cigarettes.
Booze was cheap and jobs
chased us down the street. 
In a hundred buried silos,
annihilation was just a push 
of a button away.
We partied hard beneath
the threat of that mushroom cloud.

We're old now, sit under the cloud 
of our own thoughts, replaying
scratchy, worn out tracks 
retrieved from the sleeves 
of our neural LP's. 
What we tore down back then
has been replaced with more
sinister demons that eat away
at the collective soul.
In the end, everything
is just reabsorbed.
Some of us still frequent 
coffee shops and discuss
Baudelaire and T.S. Eliot, 
still write poetry,
shed a tear 
at the melancholic beauty 
of a setting sun.


Goodbye To You, Hello To Self

New sheets
Light a candle with that familiar smell
Who can tell?
I have come this far
Setting up barriers to box myself
To stop picking up the traces of when you left

Emptied your cabinet, filled your duffle bag
Pick it up when you’re ready
I’m moving on to something empty
Now I’m making new history.
Let this room be a start of my new memory

Pain is more when there is no more “if”
I’m glad you left me hanging on a cliff
No water to drown me
Only a kaleidoscope sky to pull me up.
Turn off the lights, let’s end this love

I’ll sleep alone or with a stranger
Even if that’s the way, still its better
You always give me pieces I can’t build
Now I’ll give you a space you can’t bridge
Coz when I fall I fly.
When you left, I didn’t die. 
I am a free soul you can’t defy.

20 Lines Haiku Hijack

20 Line Haiku Hijack

I stole a haiku from Japan
Stuffed it in a duffle bag, added 20 lines
Fed it chocolate day and night before the flight
Then placed it on the market when I landed

Shrimp and whale tails make sound haiku 
Deliciously simple like sushi.  Japan hated mine.
Called it distasteful, too heavy and rude 
Complaining it suffered from too many lines

I sold the stolen poem to a toothless man next
An Afghanistan Taliban in need of a wife
He realized the mistake and returned it at once  
Calling it bland, loveless and torturously trite

I injected a diaphragm on the haiku 2nd line     
To prevent undo pregnancies
When left alone to expand, haiku will multiply on command
It grew from 3 to 20 lines in what Japan calls a crime

Hijacking haiku and adding more lines is wrong  
It changes the meaning and makes it too long
Haiku will never be the same again
In the end I put it on a train to India…a quatrain to be exact.

Riding Route 66 With the Wind On Our Faces

The bike was loaded and packed
The duffle bag strapped to the rack
The air was crisp when we started out at dawn
In the early morning hours we were gone 
Down the road with the wind on our faces
Off to visit some far off places 
Headed south down the Mother Road
The bike trailer behind us we towed
We past the St Louis Arch gateway to the west 
What a magnificent site I can atest
Stopped to see the Meramec Caverns 
The Wine Table formation would look great in an old tavern
Through Cuba Missouri we rode the bike at a crawl 
Taking pictures of the murals on the building walls 
We rode through Kansas the shortest part of Route 66
On the Rainbow Curve Bridge we took more pics 
We traveled on to see the Big Blue Whale in Catoosa OK
In Tulsa we camped out at the KOA
Took a break from the open road freedom 
The next day in Clinton we visited the Route 66 Museum 
On to Texas we then rode
Checking out the sites it had to behold 
South of Amarillo saw the Cadillac Ranch 
Got off the bike to walk off a cramp
In Adrian ate at the Midpoint Cafe 
We had rode Old Route 66 halfway 
On America's Highway we motored through New Mexico 
In the distance we eyed Mount Tucumcari's plateau 
Visited Petroglyph National Monument outside of Albuquerque 
The sun setting on the petroglyphs looked spectacularly 
Then we drove past the Continental Divide 
Observed red rock mountains along side 
In Arizona we finally arrived 
By the scenery we were  hypnotized 
In Winslow stood on the corner like the Eagles song 
The memory of that will be lifelong 
Visited the Petrified Forest and Painted Desert 
By this time we were sunburned and weathered 
In Flagstaff we stopped to camp and rest
We spied an eagle tending it's nest 
To Sedona rode the Oak Creek Scenic Drive 
The views and landscape made me feel alive 
Alas our trip was over we had to go home 
But on this trip there were so many memories sown

Premium Member Newsprint Melodium

Yiu can walk a mile in a mirror stance and 
never feelyour own re reflection. Your glaze gaze
bends on invisibility--a certain humor
crosseyed cleverly cleared like the rooms in the 
Winchester House or a traffic jamitis through
 the Mac maze at sundown. Feel ferr to co caress
your tired instep and take a loud load off
hope for that new impact that will tell 
 the torrid tale page by page compact dutiful
but united in a duffle bag born of poise
pronounced zipper closed but not finger 
forgotten-A minor standing at the Bebop
wishing well cool crammed
with apast B&W luxuries like a passed used
kleenix round for loose nose hits--picture 
frame elements often snotconceived, but
always matted for ignoi insignificance. Like 
clean tree pages waiting to be messed by
someone's illict penmanship, dry but butt bold, 
promising but hiding those grammar grabber
glib gratuaties in hopes of a chance for a fat
freeload advance and a creamy handshake which will 
sale set the ass o nine critics on their 
Keep pseudo salient the echo encrusted 
think thoughts you columinize- like a pants
pair without the cute cuffs--hope your midsection
is in tune with the public bulge extroadinarre.
Simple times, simple terme, simple thoughts
simple solutions knowtellseefree for all course
bookings on a thorny stitch stage- pious prowess
butt ugly unique paychecks pay roll a sham stabbing 
sliky slander most of the toime home prompt
legal-though low-some in in intent and
dubious dime parlor dance demeanor. Customize, cannonize that cowper's
culprit calamatious catastrophic claim. WTF?

A Very Misery Christmas

No winter postcards of deep snow and bliss
No winter postcards of mistletoe kiss
Winter was cold, winter was tough
Winter was long and we all had it rough

No Father Christmas, no Saint Nicholas 
No bright blue, glass baubles, no presents for us
Fantasy Christmas, fantasy tree
We had to live, through the reality

Dad was long gone, the man did his best
When chronic bronchitis, seeped into his chest
The place where he toiled, was all he had known
But it's dust and it's damp had now left mam alone

What would befall us, what would we be
Who would care for us, if we did not have, she
Mam did her best for her nine hungry brood
But I will never forget, there was so little food

Mam had her pride but the children came top
She burnt all the cupboards to keep the rooms hot
Furniture smashed for the fire was  the norm
Furniture burned just to keep the kids warm

The hard times as a child sit deep in my mind
The emotions  and memories,  I remember, unkind
The hunger, the cold, the panger remain
So little food, again and again

The times were of hardship, poverty, pain
Coats on the bed was the name of the game
No warm fancy blankets in my childhood 
Just old duffle coats and we fought for the hood

All of the cooking, from one frying pan
Hunched round a fire, nine kids and their mam
All I remember is fried porridge oats
Dark dankie bedrooms and old duffle coats

Snotty nosed kids crying hungry and cold
What bread there might be would be covered in mould
All of the clothing was hand me down stuff
Nine children to dress, there was never enough

One stocking each and sometimes one shoe
In all of my memory I can't recall two
Now most of the children, have just what they need
Warm clothing and food and laptop PC.s

Ipods and kindles with mince pies for tea
Have they ever heard of the word, poverty  
I am not angry, I am not sad
One learns to accept, what one had as a lad

Would you swap that Hulme time, to be young in this day
With modern technology and regular pay
Would you sell your soul to escape poverty
Then sell it elsewhere, your not swapping with me
© John Scott  Create an image from this poem.

Soldier's Son

His duffle bag is by the door
I ask him what they're fighting for.
He tapes the dog tags to his chest
gives the 38 one last test.
The baby's sleeping in the other room
he slowly puts his combat boots on.
He's got the shades, he's got the hat,
he packed the tent, he's got the mat,
a picture of us on a sunny day.
Was it in April or was it in May?
He hands me his last will
and reminds me to pay the car payment bill.
He already seems so far gone
and I don't know what to tell his son:
Daddy's fighting for freedom and for peace,
Daddy's sending you a kiss?
No, I don't know when he'll be back,
Daddy sends you a hug-around-your-neck.
Remember the games daddy used to play?
Remember what daddy used to say:
      the moon shines for everyone,
      I'm your Daddy, you're my son.
He puts his camouflage jacket on
and stands in the kitchen a little forlorn;
a soldier in desert uniform,
a soldier on his way to Desert Storm.
I don't want to think that he could die
and surely enough I begin to cry.
He looks at me but doesn't say a word
it's that silence that really hurts.
He left us a long time ago
when he first learned that he'd have to go.
He wants to be a fighter and a father, too,
he whispers you know that I love you.
He walks to the door and grabs his gear,
with his back to me I can't see his tears.
I wanna scream, I wanna shout:
Why did you stay in? I begged you to get out.
I'll be waiting here for you,
baby, you know I love you, too.
If you're ever in trouble think about me.
I'll give you strength, just wait and see.
If you ever feel weak just call my name,
my love will be your guiding flame.
When you're hurting and hungry and feeling blue
remember that we are missing you, too.
And when you return things will be alright,
I'll hold you in my arms all night.
He doesn't turn and then he is gone,
all I have left is a soldier's son.

Play Within Your Limit

To all the folk still wearing
That choke-chain gambler's collar
Who try to play within their limits
But bet their bottom dollar

To the disappointed hopeful
With his head held in his hands
You heard jackpot sounds that shook the ground
Yeah you were lied to man

To the woman and her duffle bag
With plans to beat the house
They are going to hypnotize you
Its a trap sweetheart, get out!

To fortunes few who make the news
With a big old giant cheque
Don't let them take your picture
You are bait to catch the rest

They don't show that man who lost his home
Free falling to his death
They don't tell you how that woman
Fit a rope around her neck

And they say they want the players
That will bet within their limit 
But the house was built up brick by brick
By all the ones who didn't

Trebuchet

He’s sitting on the edge of his bed.
Still dreaming. 
Tossing love letters she never wrote into a fireplace that isn’t there. 
He’s screaming at his closet for keeping 
secrets that he found inside a duffle bag
she forgot to take when she decided 
it was time to peel back the veneer
and build a trebuchet out of the remnants.
He can still feel the eruptions inside his chest.
Again, and again. 
Scattering embers of still volatile sorrow, lament, and melancholy. 
By morning he will be sewn into the floor.
Too exasperated to move. Too disheveled to rise up,
and attempt any sort of remedy. 
He won't take his pills. 
He won’t greet the Sun. 
He won’t eat or leave his room. 
He’ll just stare into the closet, on the floor. 
Wishing he had never dug up the bones stuck in his throat. 
Wishing he could sleep without going to war. 
-James Kelley 2018

23 Line Haiku Hijack

23 Line Haiku Hijack

I stole a haiku from the Japanese
Stuffed it in a duffle bag, added 23 lines to make it fat
Fed it chocolate day and night before we started
Threw the 5-7-5 lines overboard in flight
Then placed the new one on the market when I landed
Shrimp and whale tails make for sound haiku 
Deliciously raw like sushi
Japan hates my poetry and me.  They call it criminal
Call it distasteful, crude and rude and even disrespectful 
Complaining it suffered from too many lines and rhymes 
I sold the stolen poem to a toothless Afghan man 
A Taliban by trade, in need of a wife
He realized the mistake we made  
Haiku is not an overweight woman, so he returned it
Calling it bland, loveless and torturously trite
I injected a diaphragm on the haiku 2nd line     
To prevent undo pregnancies
When left alone to expand, haiku will multiply on command
It grew from 3 to 23 lines in what Japanese call, disgraceful 
Hijacking haiku and adding more lines is wrong  
It changes the meaning and is far too long
Haiku will never be the same again
I sent it off to India on a train…a quatrain to be exact. 
I have no shame, and that's a fact

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