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I was five years old when the war was over August, 1945, and my daddy sent word He was on his way home from Guadalcanal. Grandma was already preparing a feast For the family to celebrate his homecoming. Momma took her last ration token from the box She kept high on the kitchen counter cabinet And filled up the old, worn-down Chevy with gas So she could pick up my daddy at the bus stop. Everyone was super excited except for me. You see, I could not remember this man. I didn’t know this person coming into my life-- Why was everyone so excited? He had been gone to war since I was a baby. The only man in my life was my grandpa. One uncle was fighting with Patton in Italy; Another was somewhere in Japan, we thought. I tried to ignore the party goings-on, And I reckoned I would make the best of it. I was climbing the sour cherry tree next to the porch When this man I did not know came up the hill. He had a duffle bag thrown over his shoulder; He wore a white uniform with a strange hat-- “A navy man,” he later told me, and he said, “I Will make a navy man out of you!” Later I heard Momma saying she’d taken The last token to buy gas she hadn’t needed to. FIRST PLACE WINNER Written 3/22/2021 for the "Last Token" contest sponsored by Mystic Rose Rose

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Date: 4/9/2021 4:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your First Place win. What a wonderful moving story - and told so well! BW ~ Mala
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/9/2021 5:01:00 PM
Thanks so much for your kind comment, Mala. I appreciate you.
Date: 4/9/2021 10:58:00 AM
Delightful story LM filled with joy, relief and a bit of irony through the eyes of a five year old. So well told. Congratulations on your first place win!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/9/2021 12:24:00 PM
Thanks so much, Sam. I appreciate your read.
Date: 4/9/2021 7:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful story/write. Something we never forget. Have a blessed day..............
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/9/2021 7:57:00 AM
Thanks so much, Paula.
Date: 4/9/2021 5:15:00 AM
Awesome story Milton---Big congrats on your top win with these cherished memories.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/9/2021 7:58:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay. I appreciated your thoughts.
Date: 4/9/2021 3:00:00 AM
a fabulous moving narrative, many congrats on your trophy win Milton:-) hugs Jan xx
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/9/2021 7:58:00 AM
Thank you so much, Jan. :)
Date: 4/8/2021 10:52:00 PM
Congratulations with this great story, Milton.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/9/2021 7:58:00 AM
Eve, thank you for your gracious congratulations.
Date: 4/8/2021 10:15:00 PM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... God bless you.
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Date: 4/8/2021 8:55:00 PM
A glimpse into your childhood, Milton:) congrats on your trophy win:)
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Date: 4/8/2021 8:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your trophy win. Memories are so moving in this excellent narrative.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/8/2021 8:40:00 PM
Aw, thanks, Janis. I looked forward to one, and it was a long time coming. I have to admit I'm proud!
Date: 4/8/2021 8:09:00 PM
Congrats moving and very real.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/8/2021 8:40:00 PM
True story, Linda. Thanks for your well-wishes.
Date: 4/8/2021 7:31:00 PM
Congrats on your top win with this wonderful true memory!! How touching! Please read my poem Dad’s coming home tonight’! It has a different ending. well done!!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/8/2021 7:33:00 PM
Thanks, Krish. I certainly will. I'll go there now. Thanks for your read; it meant a lot to me!
Date: 4/8/2021 7:06:00 PM
Your poem is well written and you truly deserved the win
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/8/2021 7:22:00 PM
Thanks so much, Evelyn. I hadn't expect it, and it brought such a tug at my heart.
Date: 4/8/2021 7:01:00 PM
You totally had me with this tender emotional story dear Milt. It reads like a true story to me. Thank you for joining my contest. Congrats on your 1st place win, :)
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/8/2021 7:24:00 PM
Mystic Rose Rose, every words of it was true...a true account of my daddy's return home from the Pacific at the close of WWII. Thank you ever so much for your kind words and the placement you gave my poem. I shall never forget it!
Date: 3/26/2021 10:06:00 PM
I have entered the world of Milton. Beautiful nostalgia reads like a Metro Goldwyn film of yesteryear. Great imagery and storytelling. Your grandmother's box becomes a clear visual introducing mystery and surprise. A kid meets his father at five.. Very intriguing. Thank you for sharing.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/27/2021 8:31:00 AM
Michael, I appreciate your comment so much. Many of my poems are flashbacks to my childhood or experiences I had long ago. Thanks so much for reading some of my work. It's a pleasure to make your acquaintance.
Date: 3/23/2021 10:11:00 AM
Super write Milton. There were so many of us kids that really didn't know who our daddy was. My dad was in and out and has been around the world two or three times and has visited every country in the world. He was Air Force. I still remember when I got married he said," I spend 27yrs. in the Air Force and she marries a sailor." Love this. Super imagery. God Bless, JB
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/23/2021 10:36:00 AM
Thanks so much, Judy. Dad never made a sailor out of me. I joined the Air Force! Your dad would have been proud of me. Sorry, I couldn't resist!
Date: 3/22/2021 5:51:00 PM
Fantastic poem L.M.H
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/22/2021 6:07:00 PM
Thanks so much for your compliment, Christopher. I really appreciate it.
Date: 3/22/2021 1:43:00 PM
Hi, Milton. So warming to meet you in this generous, captivating telling of your family story. I find the home-from-war pics readily full to reach the heart in poems. Thank you for sharing yours! Very touching. Superb writing.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/22/2021 1:46:00 PM
Thanks, Sally. So wonderful to have a visit from you. I appreciated your reading my [true] story and commenting. It was very meaningful to me.
Date: 3/22/2021 10:34:00 AM
A wonderful narrative poem, Milton. It's a shame you didn't recognize him when your Dad returned from Guadalcanal. It's a blessing the war ended so you could have him in the rest of your life. I love poems with historical perspectives and this goes to my faves. A very creative entry for the contest. Maybe a first this time? Best wishes for success, Carolyn
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/22/2021 1:41:00 PM
Thanks for the mail. Thanks for your encouragement. I have spelled it that way my entire life...just goes to show! Well, I'm not so sure about having him the rest of my life, Carolyn. His rigorous Navy training turned into some harrowing abuse for me. We had a very rocky relationship throughout my youth. I think I wrote a poem about my abusive father. Thanks so much!
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Date: 3/22/2021 10:35:00 AM
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Date: 3/22/2021 9:58:00 AM
Heya Milton, a great wartime story unfolding here, I cannot imagine what thoughts would go through a child’s mind meeting their father for the first time, but you give a great insight here, best of luck for the contest, cheers David
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/22/2021 1:42:00 PM
Thanks, David. I remember that actually happening, so I felt it would be a good approach to "the last token." Well, we'll see.... I enjoyed writing it, and I am so glad some are enjoying reading it.

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