Premiere Contest WinnerThe Last Token

I was five years old when the war was over 
August, 1945, and my daddy sent word 
He was on his way home from Guadalcanal. 
Grandma was already preparing a feast 
For the family to celebrate his homecoming. 
Momma took her last ration token from the box 
She kept high on the kitchen counter cabinet 
And filled up the old, worn-down Chevy with gas 
So she could pick up my daddy at the bus stop. 

Everyone was super excited except for me. 
You see, I could not remember this man. 
I didn’t know this person coming into my life-- 
Why was everyone so excited? 
He had been gone to war since I was a baby. 
The only man in my life was my grandpa. 
One uncle was fighting with Patton in Italy; 
Another was somewhere in Japan, we thought. 
I tried to ignore the party goings-on, 
And I reckoned I would make the best of it. 

I was climbing the sour cherry tree next to the porch 
When this man I did not know came up the hill. 
He had a duffle bag thrown over his shoulder; 
He wore a white uniform with a strange hat-- 
“A navy man,” he later told me, and he said, “I 
Will make a navy man out of you!” 
 
Later I heard Momma saying she’d taken 
The last token to buy gas she hadn’t needed to. 

FIRST PLACE WINNER
Written 3/22/2021
for the "Last Token" contest
sponsored by Mystic Rose Rose
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Ray Choudhury Avatar
April 9, 2021 at 4:01 PM
Congratulations on your First Place win. What a wonderful moving story - and told so well! BW ~ Mala
Hankins Avatar
April 9, 2021 at 5:01 PM
Thanks so much for your kind comment, Mala. I appreciate you.
Kauffman Avatar
April 9, 2021 at 10:58 AM
Delightful story LM filled with joy, relief and a bit of irony through the eyes of a five year old. So well told. Congratulations on your first place win!
Hankins Avatar
April 9, 2021 at 12:24 PM
Thanks so much, Sam. I appreciate your read.
Goldsmith Avatar
April 9, 2021 at 7:37 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful story/write. Something we never forget. Have a blessed day..............
Hankins Avatar
April 9, 2021 at 7:57 AM
Thanks so much, Paula.
Pandit Avatar
April 9, 2021 at 5:15 AM
Awesome story Milton---Big congrats on your top win with these cherished memories.
Hankins Avatar
April 9, 2021 at 7:58 AM
Thank you, Vijay. I appreciated your thoughts.
Allison Avatar
April 9, 2021 at 3:00 AM
a fabulous moving narrative, many congrats on your trophy win Milton:-) hugs Jan xx
Hankins Avatar
April 9, 2021 at 7:58 AM
Thank you so much, Jan. :)
Roper Avatar
April 8, 2021 at 10:52 PM
Congratulations with this great story, Milton.
Hankins Avatar
April 9, 2021 at 7:58 AM
Eve, thank you for your gracious congratulations.
Agustin Avatar
April 8, 2021 at 10:15 PM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... God bless you.
Daniel Avatar
April 8, 2021 at 8:55 PM
A glimpse into your childhood, Milton:) congrats on your trophy win:)
Medders Tobechi Avatar
April 8, 2021 at 8:17 PM
Congratulations on your trophy win. Memories are so moving in this excellent narrative.
Hankins Avatar
April 8, 2021 at 8:40 PM
Aw, thanks, Janis. I looked forward to one, and it was a long time coming. I have to admit I'm proud!
Milgate Avatar
April 8, 2021 at 8:09 PM
Congrats moving and very real.
Hankins Avatar
April 8, 2021 at 8:40 PM
True story, Linda. Thanks for your well-wishes.
Radhakrishna Avatar
April 8, 2021 at 7:31 PM
Congrats on your top win with this wonderful true memory!! How touching! Please read my poem Dad’s coming home tonight’! It has a different ending. well done!!
Hankins Avatar
April 8, 2021 at 7:33 PM
Thanks, Krish. I certainly will. I'll go there now. Thanks for your read; it meant a lot to me!
Swartz Avatar
April 8, 2021 at 7:06 PM
Your poem is well written and you truly deserved the win
Hankins Avatar
April 8, 2021 at 7:22 PM
Thanks so much, Evelyn. I hadn't expect it, and it brought such a tug at my heart.
Rose  Avatar
April 8, 2021 at 7:01 PM
You totally had me with this tender emotional story dear Milt. It reads like a true story to me. Thank you for joining my contest. Congrats on your 1st place win, :)
Hankins Avatar
April 8, 2021 at 7:24 PM
Mystic Rose Rose, every words of it was true...a true account of my daddy's return home from the Pacific at the close of WWII. Thank you ever so much for your kind words and the placement you gave my poem. I shall never forget it!
Ellis Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 10:06 PM
I have entered the world of Milton. Beautiful nostalgia reads like a Metro Goldwyn film of yesteryear. Great imagery and storytelling. Your grandmother's box becomes a clear visual introducing mystery and surprise. A kid meets his father at five.. Very intriguing. Thank you for sharing.
Hankins Avatar
March 27, 2021 at 8:31 AM
Michael, I appreciate your comment so much. Many of my poems are flashbacks to my childhood or experiences I had long ago. Thanks so much for reading some of my work. It's a pleasure to make your acquaintance.
Ball Avatar
March 23, 2021 at 10:11 AM
Super write Milton. There were so many of us kids that really didn't know who our daddy was. My dad was in and out and has been around the world two or three times and has visited every country in the world. He was Air Force. I still remember when I got married he said," I spend 27yrs. in the Air Force and she marries a sailor." Love this. Super imagery. God Bless, JB
Hankins Avatar
March 23, 2021 at 10:36 AM
Thanks so much, Judy. Dad never made a sailor out of me. I joined the Air Force! Your dad would have been proud of me. Sorry, I couldn't resist!
Flaherty Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 5:51 PM
Fantastic poem L.M.H
Hankins Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 6:07 PM
Thanks so much for your compliment, Christopher. I really appreciate it.
Eslinger Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 1:43 PM
Hi, Milton. So warming to meet you in this generous, captivating telling of your family story. I find the home-from-war pics readily full to reach the heart in poems. Thank you for sharing yours! Very touching. Superb writing.
Hankins Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 1:46 PM
Thanks, Sally. So wonderful to have a visit from you. I appreciated your reading my [true] story and commenting. It was very meaningful to me.
Devonshire Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 10:34 AM
A wonderful narrative poem, Milton. It's a shame you didn't recognize him when your Dad returned from Guadalcanal. It's a blessing the war ended so you could have him in the rest of your life. I love poems with historical perspectives and this goes to my faves. A very creative entry for the contest. Maybe a first this time? Best wishes for success, Carolyn
Hankins Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 1:41 PM
Thanks for the mail. Thanks for your encouragement. I have spelled it that way my entire life...just goes to show! Well, I'm not so sure about having him the rest of my life, Carolyn. His rigorous Navy training turned into some harrowing abuse for me. We had a very rocky relationship throughout my youth. I think I wrote a poem about my abusive father. Thanks so much!
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March 22, 2021 at 10:35 AM
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March 22, 2021 at 9:58 AM
Heya Milton, a great wartime story unfolding here, I cannot imagine what thoughts would go through a child’s mind meeting their father for the first time, but you give a great insight here, best of luck for the contest, cheers David
Hankins Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 1:42 PM
Thanks, David. I remember that actually happening, so I felt it would be a good approach to "the last token." Well, we'll see.... I enjoyed writing it, and I am so glad some are enjoying reading it.
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