The Train

Each is a piece, a small part
of a composite that has come
together in a morning,
the frayed strands of dreams 
knitted into a waking timed now
to a slow tread on a familiar street. 
Then suddenly, careering through 
the center of my thoughts a train 
comes with bells at a crossing 
clanging loudly and wheels grinding 
on rails heading off towards
a distant point in the past. I stop

and see myself, late teens, 
leaving home, riding the interstate 
with dreams spilling out 
of a duffle bag, head in a cloud
of hope. I was Rimbaud on rails, 
high on poetry that I took straight. 
Six months in a one room flat
I ran out of money and a literary career,
hitchhiked back home to sink
into a wintery despair.

A lifetime has passed 
and I have left a poem tied 
to the end of each year as if
marking my way. The words
of most have now weathered away
to a silence. I write as a form
of prayer to that greater silence
and on still mornings, hear
the sound of a train in the far
distance growing quieter.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Kavanagh  Avatar
July 27, 2024 at 5:19 AM
Pensive and brilliant Paul, your ability to express your life journey in such a poetic and meaningful way is quite beautiful, oh I’m sure that train stopped off at some terrific stations along the route, still that last stanza is off the scale in depth, and a delight to read, cheers David
Willason Avatar
July 27, 2024 at 8:32 PM
Sincere thanks David for your kind words...a good booster shot in the creative vein, feel the benefit already. I seem, at times, to drag poetry into sombre territory but then see the next bend towards the light. Take care, Paul
Rodgers Avatar
July 26, 2024 at 7:03 AM
Dear Paul, How I loved this poem, and it is so well written. Ahh, the enduring nature of dreams and memories, and how they shape one's life journey, even as they fade into the background. As I get older, I can sense this every day. - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
Willason Avatar
July 27, 2024 at 8:19 PM
Pleased that the poem had a good landing...quite a few layers in this poem. Appreciate your thoughtful comments as always, Daniel. Take care.
Lawless Avatar
July 26, 2024 at 6:29 AM
I'll double down on Gershon's FAVE...An amazing write Paul, ...."the sound of a train in the far distance growing quieter" the culmination of a poetic prophesy ...I shall award this the ever coveted, true Bostonian....WICKED PISSA....designation
Willason Avatar
July 27, 2024 at 8:14 PM
Thankyou John...will treasure the award....my home city, Melbourne is often called Australia's Boston..assume a positive comparison. Value your support my friend. Cheers.
Wolf Avatar
July 25, 2024 at 6:32 PM
Positively Robert Frost-like, Paul. My gut reaction on my first read: It was a thrilling read for me. May you continue to reflect on the past and tie all the (loose) ends together, stitched with the needle and thread of your seamless lines. A FAVE for me. Thank you, Gershon
Willason Avatar
July 27, 2024 at 8:07 PM
Thankyou Gershon for your comments...moved by such a positive reading of the poem, honored for it to be given a FAVE stamp. Very much appreciated my friend...
M  Avatar
July 25, 2024 at 3:53 PM
Oh Paul….An incredible poem tinged with reflective/nostalgic sadness….this one was a really heart tugger for me …it made me feel sad , your memories made me feel sad….it really made me feel!! So, your work is done and l got a free train ride today hehe!! Im cheeky l know Ha!! Debx
Willason Avatar
July 27, 2024 at 7:59 PM
Forgive me Deb for imparting a measure of sadness...this is where this poem wanted to go. I stood back and let it have its say. Next poem will probably reflect a brighter tone...still have many in me waiting to surface. Thanks Deb for your sensitive comments, appreciated.
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