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Best Commuter Poems

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Premium Member The Seasoned Commuter
The Seasoned Commuter

On The platform for ten to seven
No more trains if I get to heaven
Coffee and paper held in each hand
Bought a new ticket,...

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© Roger Page  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: commuter, travel
Form: Rhyme



The Commuter
Faith my professor
once said
is like a train
driven on rails
of written truths.

The truth, I ask..
you have lectured 
on wars and famines
the Jewish holocaust
and Old Testament prophesies.

The...

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Categories: commuter, inspirational,
Form: Free verse
And Still I Drive - Part One
Stars fall under failing skies...stars fall...stars fall...
And sadly...i start to drive.
Through the unremarkable village with its tall 
Georgian Bay window panes, lightless,
devoid of visages; outwardly...

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Categories: commuter, heartbreak, places,
Form: Rhyme
Premium Member Quiet Please
Quiet Please                       ...

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Categories: commuter, anxiety, change, family, journey,
Form: Narrative
Choose Your Shortcuts Wisely
Shortcuts are best suited to desktop on the computer,
Not intended for the average commuter.
You will always get cut short, if you try one from a...

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Categories: commuter, angst, change, character, conflict,
Form: Didactic



Premium Member Sitting Wondering
I wonder what a musician’s life is like
As I notice you nonchalantly carrying your instrument
Much like keeping your voice boxed and in a velvet bag
I...

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Categories: commuter, fun, happiness, image, life,
Form: Free verse
It's Twilight Time In the City
Twilight Time in the City

Hear the hum of the Honda and Hundai,
It’s twilight time in the city.
Yellow boxes empty streams of ants
Into the twilight of...

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Categories: commuter, city, imagery,
Form: Rhyme
Premium Member Where the Railroad Track Meet
Where the Railroad Track Meet 

Grasping, lunging as does a donkey for the
dangling apple leading it forward, I reached
for the ever elusive spot.  That...

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Categories: commuter, moving on, remember,
Form: Prose Poetry
Runaway Train
While others writers think of love
you’ve shat on that pure white dove.
Before on and on, I must go,
I’m telling others of what I know.

Love to...

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Categories: commuter, life, satireheart, heart, love,
Form: Rhyme
Premium Member City of Trees
I saw one day a city of trees
Walking down a path with me
Following hidden eyes to see

Saplings jungled up together
Like a stream of walkers too
Confused...

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Categories: commuter, mythology, nature, tree,
Form: tristich
Blizzard, Blizzard Everywhere
Blizzard, Blizzard Everywhere

Frozen branches scratch against the window. 
Snow flakes flash like daggers through outside lights. 
Frigid wind comes howling down the chimney. 
Pine trees...

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© Joe Murphy  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: commuter, beauty,
Form: Quatrain
Premium Member A Genuine Excuse
Sam slept through his alarm once again
So dashed to catch the commuter train
But today he is fine
‘Autumn leaves’ block the line
He’s off the hook …...

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Categories: commuter, humorous, travel,
Form: Limerick
Premium Member Righteous Riders
Ten thousand eyes will each day pass but not a single one will see,
for the folly of their hubris hides from harsh reality,
and when they...

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© Eric Cohen  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: commuter, allusion, extended metaphor, satire,
Form: Dramatic Monologue
Tunnels of Ambiguity (A.Hail.Of.Bullets.Is.All.I.Feel Remix)
On trains
             on trains
         ...

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Categories: commuter, visionary
Form: Free verse
Premium Member Hornby's Corner
Hornby's Corner, 
I overheard 
as our train whizzed past
the clanging railway crossing  
to the commuter station ahead.

Used to be a station,
with the best ice...

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Categories: commuter,
Form: Free verse

Book: Shattered Sighs