The Commuter Van
My cold not quite over –
With sniffles and cough –
I had a commitment
I couldn’t blow off.
The thought of the subway,
Its rush-hour crush,
Was turning my insides,
Congested, to mush.
But then I remembered,
A few blocks away,
Commuter vans idled
Each morning, each day.
And so I inquired –
How much? Was there room?
I paid and was welcomed,
Or so I assume.
In 15 short minutes
I made it downtown,
Preventing my usual
Subway ride frown.
For just 7 bucks
I could sit and relax
With no getting-stuck-underground
Panic attacks.
I don’t commute daily
But next time I must,
I’ll splurge on the van –
Let my wallet adjust!
Copyright © Ilene Bauer | Year Posted 2016
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