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Dance of the Commuter

Early morning, bleary-eyed We’re a weaving coffee-carrying crowd One more sip, heads bowed Oh Grief! That train horns loud! Sorry! Excuse me! Opps…Shall we dance? A frown turns round Manners & Humour - it's sound

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Date: 11/30/2017 8:48:00 PM
Vivid imagery and rhythm of a busy morning. Awesome poem, Joanna.
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Date: 11/26/2017 11:21:00 PM
Manners and humor in the morning is a great way to start your day, along with caffeine too. This is a great poem!
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Date: 11/4/2017 2:31:00 PM
A busy day at the station...and it is a dance...Nice one Joanna
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Date: 11/4/2017 9:11:00 AM
I like this. This is a humorous side to this short poem. I think you did well her. Keep it on! Luis Estable
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