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Heading To Chicago On a Commuter Train

They are looking out tiny boxes 
traveling toward the city from the suburbs
wearing tennis shoes on their tired feet

Many have left their dress shoes at work
Some stop at a gym on the way, 
these are the high brows who do not punch in

It is Chicago, nineteen ninety-six
My husband is in one of these jam trains
looking out his tiny box, as trees and cows fly by

Upon arrival, the gritty of the city meets them
Gray concrete is their first welcome mat
They are careful to not fall into the trenches

Some race by, but most march as robots
staying in order until they reach Union Station
People stop being human here 

The stores are expensive, so most cannot shop
Their lunch sandwiches are tucked into hot baggies
inside the briefcase they hold onto as they march

a line of unsmiling creatures 
who have left their mommy and daddy cap forty miles out
being an employee or an employer, less than human now

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 4/8/2021 6:48:00 PM
Reminded me of 9 to 5. Nice writing. If one stood off to the side, I suspect the most prominent feature would be "a line of unsmiling creatures."
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/9/2021 3:29:00 AM
It is sad to watch; they all look like they are marching to a firing squad.
Date: 4/8/2021 6:28:00 PM
Ah, modern work-a-day life! I'm thankful my work was creative just about every day. Not a train person, Caren. Prefer flying. / Maurice
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/9/2021 3:30:00 AM
I do not like either; I prefer having a fast car and no other traffic.

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