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Perpetual Commuter Struggle

Stuck in a gargantuan feedback loop Insentive truckers smash turtle shells Squirrels sprawled with concrete entrails Gleaming windshields refracting might Dull relation just business is right Scratching the ceiling of my nerve Making blood curdle vengeance fertile In shell shocked shin splints rampage Remember to breathe as the poisons pass As parasities arachnophobe their fist clenched dreams Ill just stride and take my time Pride is futile immortal hallucination As the sun weaves her way Ill make my escape and take my place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/7/2012 10:17:00 PM
Hi, Justin,, this has a small happy thought... humm! maybe your on an itchy mushroom... now i feel like saying Run Justin Run!!...lol... hope you don't mind my humor.. xox~pd
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Justin Debrosse
Date: 6/8/2012 6:21:00 AM
Lol, im gonna finally make my escape and triumph...maybe this time the train wont get lost

Book: Shattered Sighs