Become Flat Poems | Examples


Respect

I cannot become flat
My curves are not straight lines
My die is cast, forged by fire
Yet I try to bend it for you

I put the blow torch to my heart
Coining it over the anvil
Pressing it to new form
Old shapes long forgotten, new again.

Made to please you
Buffed to mirrored shine.
A reflection, or a phantom. 
But it is not me.

Now the next shine has your eye
It is mine again.
Melted down with self-improvement
Made strong again

Never again to hammer against myself
Knowing the value of imperfection
Stay true to the die-cast
Compromise but do not conform.

Turn Around

Where can I go when there's no breath around
Even that
Can not compare to sound 
Leaving all my pictures on the wall
In my hat...
The garbage on the ground 

How about the time you heard my sound 
Eavesdropping from ears to hurt the wound
Even though my heart shall become flat
Know I see you when you look around


Premium Member What Will My New Normal Be

What Will My New Normal Be?
Written by Miracle Man
5/8/2020

Average or typical is what i think normal,
but it’s a futile search for my return to the same.
Greeting a friend has become so informal,
a pandemic has changed the rules of the game.

No handshakes or hugs and i distance space,
I wash my hands and then do it once more.
I wear a mask but can’t stop touching my face,
This pandemic has made my normal a chore.

Sudden Cardiac Arrest saw my life become flat,
and i leave the house for Doctor visits and food.
Now a COVID-19 pandemic is tweaking that,
and I fear I’m becoming a disgruntled old dude.

Premium Member Flattened Coins 2

Penny kneeled down on the track
To put some coins on their back
In order to see the coins become flat
Penny kneeled down on the track
Envying the coins direction at
Their journey forward onward
Penny kneeled down on the track
To put some coins on their back

Russell Sivey
In the Afterglow

Premium Member Flattened Coins

She kneeled down on the track
To put some coins on their back
Waiting for the train to come
In order to see the coins become flat
She thinks this is such a sport
Watching the coins again retort
Wait, listen, she here's a whistle
The coins last plea to turn and abort
Quickly the train comes and goes
Flattening the coins with her rejoice
She finds luck in her  changed coins
Brought to her by the trains keen voice

Russell Sivey


Valley of Dreams

She walks through the valley of dreams, while clouds of darkness lurk above and all 
around her.

As her pace begins to quicken to over come the darkness, beams of light begin to 
shine upon her.

Then the hills all around become flat plush green meadows, skies of blue appeared
above.

Her face of pain and sorrow became a face of relief and strength.

It has been a million years, and three since the walk began.

For she is at the end of a trail, that never should have begun.

The year of dreams is now at hand, and flowers seem to surround her.

At the end of the valley of dreams is a field of reality in which we all walk.

Some of those who reach the field of reality never know they have reached it.

For their minds are still searching, and with no faith they will never reach the field in
which they are standing.

Those who enter the field of reality with open eyes will live a life of glory.

And those who never find it will wander endlessly down the valley of dreams.

Bad Love Poem (Shall We Go?)

Shall we go to the river? To see the pellucid 
and hear the sound of water gurgling, 
as at the hamlet where I was teasing 
you for the first time, where the sky 
and the birds are reluctant 
to go home late afternoon into place, 
we are reluctant 
to say the word “love” without the escort poem. 
Alas, the river has dried and blackened.

Shall we go to the top of the mountain? To wait for the sunrise 
and feel the cold clouds, as the moment when I whispered sentences 
in love with you for the first time, 
where the earth and the sea are reluctant 
to reveal him to the front of our closed eyes, 
where the air was as thin as your hair-braided yarn. 
Alas, the mountain had become flat and the road to their jobs.

Shall we say the word “sorry” it here just now? To the universe 
and our past that is so beautiful and amusing, 
I want to apologize to you for having made you happy 
in the past; I hope that our universe still loves us.

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